Also, good posts, @DrewVonAwesome and @Angel Vicky.
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I apologize for mentioning, well, you know what again, but I tried to make the other characters say "Shut the F up!" I hope I have not scarred anyone yet...
Anyways, only two more posts. Hopefully I will get those done by Monday.
Anyways, only two more posts. Hopefully I will get those done by Monday.
Aubrey Adkins
I clicked our apartment’s front door shut behind me as I returned from what I would call an, um, interesting experience (to put it nicely). You always hear the saying that revenge is always best served cold. Well, I just received some frigid just desserts this afternoon. Of course there are worse things that could have happened. At least Danielle had enough class not to try to trick me into signing up for an adult film or something like that. But what I got wasn’t much better.
“Where have you been?” I heard Felecia ask me as I entered the apartment.
“Probably banging Icon with her…” Ashley began. However, Felecia cut her off before she could finish her comment.
“Could you stop? Let’s be real here. It was kind of funny the first time when you blurred it out, but after a while it just places a disturbing image in our minds that we really don’t want to imagine ever again.”
“Um…” I began, still a little unnerved by what Ashley was going to say, “Didn’t Kristin tell you?”
Right on cue, Kristin burst into the apartment. I actually didn’t notice that she wasn’t present when I first came home. “Sorry that I’m late. I got held up by this midterm I was just taking.” It took her a few seconds to realize that I was standing there. “Oh, Aubrey, how was your little ‘adventure’ with my roommate go?”
Then there was an awkward silence for a few seconds. Why did Kristin had to word it in that way? It made what I was doing ambiguous and, since we of course thought that Danielle was an ‘adult actress’, they could draw some very wrong conclusions from what Kristin had said. I was just lucky that their response did not come to that conclusion.
“Why were you with Kristin’s roommate?” Felecia asked me.
“Um…I kind of let the cat out of the bag about us thinking that she’s a porn star. Then she conned me into going with her to her work, which so happens to be contrary to what we thought it was.
“Wait, she knows that we thought that about her?”
Then I paused for a moment to think back to the conversation between me and Danielle. “Well, while she could infer that we all think it, I never said we thought it. So you all should be in the clear.”
Felecia and Ashley gave a sigh of relief. Who knows what Danielle would have compelled them into do if I had let slip that we all thought that she was in a shady occupation. Once that fear was dissipated, now they could turn to what I did that afternoon.
“How did it go? When will the photographic evidence be available?” They all three asked me, each of them having a toothy grin now that they knew that they were safe from any revenge from Kristin’s roommate.
“I didn’t have a photo shoot. That’s scheduled for later in the week. I only signed some paperwork and was fitted for the swimsuit. On that was a nightmare. I swear, by the time they found a top that would fit me, they were making up combinations of letters and numbers.” Things could have gone worse. Danielle could have signed me up for something like lingerie. But I still think she’s trying to get back at me, especially when she said, I quote, that I would be ‘utilizing me assets’. Why did I have to open my big mouth.
“Looks like we have our very own Kate Upton here! I’m sure Arby’s will be calling soon.” Ashley half joked.
“Thanks.” I said with the best sarcastic tone that I could muster.
“You love going to the beach, Aubrey. Just think of it like a vacation to a beach, except you have a professional photographer taking the pictures for you instead of one of us!” Felecia tried to chime in.
“I don’t think that those two situations are quite the same.”
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@Gowi@Dedonus@Bright_Ops@Natty@Drewvonawesome Which one of you is open to an Avengers visit from Hyperion instead of Captain America?
Hawkeye is technically still on a mission (I'll try to get a post up for him as soon as possible).
@ChildHoodRuined
I still feel that the first paragraph of your character sheet remains too plagiarized.
Here is your first paragraph and the first paragraph on Marvel Wikia that correspond to yours. The bold highlight identical phrases. I do have to say that after looking over the application, the other paragraphs are much better.
While you did fix the whole situation dealing with using a dead character (Cletus Kasday was only mentioned in the Ultimate Spider-Man run), it still leaves many questions unanswered. How did Cletus Kasday get a symbiote (Venom already absorbed the 1610 Carnage into itself) and how did he get that device? Why would he have it? If you wanted these answered to be left as a "mystery" that will be revealed as the roleplay advances, then I would like you to PM me the answers to these questions so that I, as the GM, can know what is going on.
Also, you still mention Doc Ock in your sample post.
And what does the following mean?
I still feel that the first paragraph of your character sheet remains too plagiarized.
Here is your first paragraph and the first paragraph on Marvel Wikia that correspond to yours. The bold highlight identical phrases. I do have to say that after looking over the application, the other paragraphs are much better.
While you did fix the whole situation dealing with using a dead character (Cletus Kasday was only mentioned in the Ultimate Spider-Man run), it still leaves many questions unanswered. How did Cletus Kasday get a symbiote (Venom already absorbed the 1610 Carnage into itself) and how did he get that device? Why would he have it? If you wanted these answered to be left as a "mystery" that will be revealed as the roleplay advances, then I would like you to PM me the answers to these questions so that I, as the GM, can know what is going on.
Also, you still mention Doc Ock in your sample post.
And what does the following mean?
because he believes Peter won't always be Spider-Man, and he will need to be the NEXT to continue the whole era of Spider-Man.
Player Name: ChildHoodRuined
Character You Wish To Play: Miles Morales
Moral Alignment (Hero, Villain, Walking the Line): Hero
Affiliation (what group/team/organization, if any, is your character affiliated with?):(In 1610 universe.) S.H.I.L.E.D, Young Ultimate's.
A few things that bother me.
1) While I understand that it is difficult to write the origin of an established character, but the first two or so paragraphs are plagiarized straight from Marvel Wikia, with a few words or phrases substituted.
2) Ultimate Doctor Octopus died in the Death of Spider-Man story arc.
3) Not much explanation was given for how Miles gets to our universe (I do believe we have already established this Earth as Earth-76031 from the thread number :D) One moment, Miles is fighting Doc Ock, and then he all of the sudden is in our universe.
Fix these issues and then I will accept your application.
So quite...I know how to change that! *runs off to write an Arachne post* 
Just wondering, is my character accepted or nah?
I didn't notice that you made edits (last time I looked it was incomplete). I will look into it and make a judgement in 24 hours.
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Except this is called the Twelve Labors. He was only supposed to do ten, here I expect you at minimum to do twelve. If you would like, I could discount those same two and rack it up to fourteen.
It was just a little joke. Herakles did Twelve Labors instead ten because two of the original labors did not count, so in order to have ten labors that did count, Herakles needed to do two additional labors. :D
Labor 2 and 5 should count because they didn't count for Herakles.
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