Demon Shinobi

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

@Demon Shinobi

Hey a bishop was your suggestion I wanted you a be rook at first. So what do you suggest I switch his class to?

@Jangel13

Honestly, I didn't expect the rp to get so many people. I gave him bishop because he didn't fit the rook area. So I suggested bishop due to his reliance on magic as a primary attack force. However, reassessing for the characters we have, and taking into account his weaknesses basically making him a glass cannon he is better suited as a knight, as I said in my last post.

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

Okay so, @The Irish Tree is indeed the second Knight. They should have known this.
@Polaris North@1Charak2@Rune_Alchemist lol place nice you guys XD
This goes double for you @Spanner
@pkken Yeah, there is a pawn left.

Now, I have some thoughts that need to be handled before I go on with the judgement of @Delta44's character.
I quite enjoy our roster so far, however, as it stands there are two character i feel that are out of place, just a bit.
First, @Jangel13 Argos, doesn't quite fit the role of a Bishop. He is skilled and his abilities are good yes, but a Bishop he is not. Not quite in the way Kenji is suited being the support he is, or the way Alistair or somebody else could fit the role. I still like Alistair as a Pawn, given his skill as a jack of all trades, comparable to Rin's own skills, which is why she'll also be a Pawn if/when she joins. Still, he is a bit of a glass cannon so i wouldn't make him a Rook either. Thus, I feel he would be best suited at a knight.

@Guess WhoNora has a great Sacred Gear and she doesn't have that feeling of being a glass cannon. She just needs training. And because of her offensive and defensive capabilities, I think she would best be suited for the role of a Rook.

I know this is a bit out of nowhere, but given what I'm seeing in the characters, Ekribe would probably be best suited for the position of a Bishop. And these changes wouldn't require much in the way of a change to the characters overall anyway.

If there are any problems with the changes I have proposed thus far, please let me know.

Additionally, even though we are using the DxD world, I think we can bend the Divine beings not being able to be reincarnated rules. Mostly because like... Angels... Fallen Angels... Dragons... Valkyries... Etc. With all the beings that can be reincarnated, I don't see why a Demi-human couldn't. I would like that certain aspects of the abilities and her status as a demihuman be made more clear and elaborated as you did in this past post though Delta. Other than that, I don't wanna complete passing judgement if she may be changed because of some of the changes I'm trying to hash out right now lol

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

Wow a DXD Rp, surprised i didn't see this before, is it good timing to hop in?

@Demon Shinobi

@pkken

Actually not 100% sure. I'll need to recount everything. Cause to be honest I think we're full. We have a possible Rook in the application process and I think we might have one pawn position left unless I'm missing someone. If anything we might just have the room for one.

Everyone, please correct me if I'm wrong.

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

@Rune_AlchemistTsumiki damn well just might.
"Go wild."
~Tsumiki Grimmond 2017

@1Charak2"No."
~Tsumiki Grimmond 2017

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

@Delta44Okay, so I haven't been able to completely go over every aspect of the character. At least, I went over the sheet, but I need to give a slightly deeper analysis myself. But for now, go over some of the points made by @Suku and @1Charak2. You need to elaborate and clarify on these subject, not just for them, but for me as well. Interesting character, needless to say, but still can't overlook some of the instances of unclear writing. I would also need to add, that we have, I believe, two glass cannons. Argos and kenji could both count as they're just about done in Close combat, Kenji more so. And then there is Alistair. Technically he isn't in the peerage yet, but he still faces this in combat problem, hence his hit and run tactics.
@Rune_AlchemistI'd pay to see that... XD
@The Irish TreeDon't make it weird bro XD
@Guess WhoUnexpectedly.

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Okay so I posted. And then edited the post. I'll probably add a picture or something of Lutra if you never saw it in the ooc since I decided. King's familiar gonna rat ya out. lol XD

For now play out as you are until Tsumiki returns.

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

Tsumiki chuckled as he watched the crystals recede to leave his knight free of their sanctuary. It was an interesting power to say the least. Perhaps better suited for a pawn or rook, but that was neither here nor there. "Open your eyes Nora," Tsumiki spoke softly, a calm smile spread across his face. "I'm sure you'll be more than surprised," he added as he held his hand out to help her up.

More than likely she had noticed the change in his voice. It was clearer now, no longer blocked by the crystalline enclosure. All that was left was to take his hand so he could pull her to her feet. Today was the day. She would be meeting the peerage. He new friends and family for the rest of her near immortal life. "We've only begun to scratch the surface of your potential.

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@Guess Who

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As the group continued to go about its business Lutra sat in the upper corner of the room on a shelf. As the familiar of their king, it was his job to watch and report the events that transpired in the club room to Tsumiki. He was quiet, taking notes in his otter form. For the most post everyone knew of his existence save for Kohana, though only due to her relatively new status among the group. In its minuscule hands were a notepad and pencil.

Still, things had seemed to settle after Kohana left the room. But then somebody new barged it. It was shocking to say the least. Lutra tilted his head ever so slightly to the left as he watched the idiot called out to what he assumed to be Siegfried though he wasn't quite 100% sure on it.

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Okay, sorry I didn't hold up my end of the bargain in its entirety. By tonight I'll have read and posted. Yesterday got away from me. It was a real train wreck of events.

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

@1Charak2there is literally nothing I could change or point out about the character that wouldn't be nitpicky. So as far as I'm concerned, the dude is accepted.

Deal with the Devil: A High School DxD RP

Okay!!! Although I did send a message to the discord, I will also post here.

I have been very busy. I apologize for my absence. HOWEVER! I will properly look over the newly submitted character AND the IC. I will also post and move us along. All of this WILL be done in the next 24 hours. Thank you for your time and patience.