Dervish

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I don't envy you your choice.

Just remember who has the babby cows

@Rtron

You've already given me what I wanted. I have already won.

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Alrighty, I've all but caught up on reading sheets. Still gotta record notes/ go over Poop's Alim revision, but if all goes well I'll have feedback for those I haven't got to yet for tonight or tomorrow and the lucky 8 for Tuesday. I won't be critiquing sheets submitted on Monday since there won't be time for players to get the feedback and rectify any issues since I'm working tomorrow again and all of you folks East of the Atlantic will probably be asleep by the time I'm off work and working in RP stuff.

I will say I lovehate you all for making fantastic submissions. They've been a treat to read! I will say that anyone who doesn't get selected will be put on a roster if they want and be informed of drop outs snd openings. If Fox, Shaft, and I feel we can manage more than the initial 8 we may increase that number. You've all been great and thank you from all of us for the time and effort you put into this; you are awesome.

Ahem. Enough sentimental refuse. Let's get back to shitposting.

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@Leidenschaft@Dervish

You guys still accepting?

@NecroKnight

We're taking applications until Monday. Then we'll be picking the 8 starting players and go from there.

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Moar like duminion, amirite fellas?

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

@Frizan As someone who moved this year, I know your pain. Just remember to forward your mail.

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Look at all this reading you're making me ignore for Overwatch.

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@That1Guy Adding to what Fox said, there's definitely a few things that still need addressing.

Notes

*You never actually said where Zevran is from. I assume High Rock, but no locations are mentioned.
*His encounter with the necromancer got weird; what could a necromancer possibly be doing with dwemer automata? They are machines, and unless the necromancer just likes tinkering, I don't see what it has to do with experimenting on animals.
*If he is from High Rock, have you seen what Leidenschaft wrote in regards to that region? There are a lot of things that would have potentially affected Zevran and his family.

Plus the other concerns Fox brought up.

I appreciate your cooperation and willingness to work with our criticism, but we are somewhat concerned that this game might be outside of your comfort range as a writer. Compared to the other submissions we've had so far, your character sheets are very scant and lacking details, and there's definitely a number of items we felt needed to be addressed, and as stands, even if we had less than 8 submissions, we wouldn't be accepting your character as-is. There's a standard of writing that everyone has to meet so the story flows smoothly, and we fear that you might get overwhelmed or not give other players much to work with when it comes to posting.

We do want this to be a fun environment for everyone, and the main reason we run this out of Advanced rather than Casual is because we do write a hell of a lot in our posts and are very detail-oriented, as well in personal experiences you tend to have all the writers comfortable with that kind of writing and working with detailed characters.

If you feel like you can write on a comparable level and produce a sheet like the others, fantastic! I'll happily read it over on Monday, but for now you need to ask yourself if this game is going to work out for you. I don't want you feeling like you wasted your time or to give your hopes up if you don't quite make the cut.

The Elder Scrolls: Swords & Septims

@Dervish Probably Daro'Vasora at one point.

hider for hehe's

@DearTrickster

allegedly

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@BurningCold I actually don't see an issue with that; it's basically the same spell, and I think the reason it's two separate ones in the video game is because the game isn't designed to give the same spell a couple of functions. I'd just call it magelight and have it perform both functions.

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Honestly, I don't worry about the coins carried that much because micromanaging inventory is a tedious job and I've rarely encountered situations in roleplays where characters are actually buying stuff that isn't just super minor roleplay flavourings like food or the occasional potion. We're not going to throw you in a situation where it's like "that'll be 1,200 septims for the dildo hammer. You'll have that much after 3 missions!"