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7 yrs ago
Current Try checking the Articles and Guides section
7 yrs ago
I'm not victim blaming but all generalizations are false, even this one.
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8 yrs ago
It does.
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8 yrs ago
PC and Tablet ded, send help
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I lived the land of no internet
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Yasuri

Interacting with @Vec@Grueslayer


Yasuri had been prepared to meet the beast, but it seemed it intended to go for Meng Wu instead. A mistake as it turned out, Meng Wu nimbly moved out of the way and sliced the beast in two, causing it to collapse to the ground in two pieces. Yasuri nodded once. "It is likely you are right, but it was a skillful kill none the less. As long as we proceed with equal care we will be well off." Yasuri said calmly, taking one more glance at the beast to confirm it had no intent of rising up on follow them , could never be too safe after all; before continuing further into the city. One had to wonder about the origin of the animal, but there were precious little clues as to that, so it would be a futile endeavor.
Azura Cerulean

Lustre Academy, Combat Mission Board
@Shadow Daedalus@CadenGallic




Azure nodded in response to Ven's prompt. "Alrighty, patrolling it is! But first... To the armory!" Azure said with an overly loud shout and began running over to check her gear, plus she could see what weapon Lynn used. Solitude wouldn't need much checking, it literally only did 1 thing and it wasn't even that complicated. Of course it didn't need to be complicated to kick some baddie butt! She wondered how the mission would go. It could be anything from a horde of bandits controlling a monstrous grim to fight for them to bird watching.
Lancer


Interacting with @Grey@Turboshitter@1Charak2




Lancer patiently waited for his master to continue speaking, as he was under the assumption that the man was not suicidal, though you never really could know for sure. Lancer eyed Sos with a vague sense of amusement. "I may be a man from a time long past but I still have an understanding of how jokes work master." Lancer said with a friendly smile. His gaze shifted to Ren, "As master said, I have some experience with magic, enough to be summoned as a caster: So my knowledge may be useful to you."

Sos began pacing around while muttering to himself, while Lancer continued relaxing. Rider seemed very frustrated with the both of them, though she didn't say much in that regard. Of course perhaps the foot stomping was indication enough on its own. It seemed the servant and master were talking to each other however, as Ren dashed upstairs for a pair of glasses. Rider, or Medusa, put on the glasses and looked at them all, passing new judgments upon them. Lancer laughed upon receiving his own judgement, an open-ended insult but decidedly an insult none the less.

Rider asked for new clothes and the boy seemed to realize anew how she was dressed, hurriedly running off to get new clothes, obviously rather embarrassed. What an amusing duo, though relations forged amidst the war for the holy grail never seemed to end well, it wasn't really his place to give that advice. Rider hated him enough as was. "Anything you need from me? Or shall I leave you two alone and follow my wandering master?"
Good flaw, your character is more of a character now ^.^

I assume propro is fine with your character if not wait for him to clear it, then feel free to put yourself in the character tabpreferably in a hider, look for a place to jump in IC or make your own.
Boop
Power is much better, thanky. The only other real thing I would suggest is, your character doesn't feel like he has much in the way of flaws. He has a lot of skills but you seem to likely have the intent for him to be rather balanced thematically. His only real flaw is that he can't genuinely trust people. Perhaps another flaw or two would round him out more as a character, not a ultimatium, simply a suggestion.
@Spiffy
Hmm. I think the 'perfect solder' part is played up a bit here, not necessarily bad eh. Your parahumanism seems to be two unrelated powers, mental manipulation as well as physical enhancement. Parahumanism generally falls under 1 direct theme or ability, for you two have both of those you'd have to a have a more valid explanation for why that is the case. A one-mile radius is also a big area, just how strong is his ability to manipulate people? Are we talking forcing a normal functioning person being driven to suicide in a few moments, or causing them so feel unsure and doubt themselves, making mistakes and feeling depressed? His derangement is also I personally feel not very impactful. It's more of a result of his powers rather than a cause. If you'll look at other cs's their power has directly changed the way their mind works, where as yours is simply a result of acquiring his powers, if that makes sense.
I believe you want your format to look something more like this? I've give it a look over in a moment.

Évelyne Sylvestre


An expression of revulsion crossed Évelyne's face briefly. Filthy beasts, they all deserved to die. Still apparently there goblins stronger than this. Which meant she needed to get stronger, a level of 5 in fencing was insufficient. Plus her special ability wasn't very strong yet, if she could get it to affect her arm, or eventually her whole body she'd be much better off. Training then. She'd try it on her own first, seeing if she could increase her level on her own. If not well... she'd need help, but only because whatever had taken them here hadn't bothered explaining the rules. "I see. In which case I'm looking for a town within a few miles of here, mind pointing me in the right direction?" Évelyne asked calmly. Whatever had brought them here had told them a place to begin was located in a town three miles from here. That should mean it'd be a place to grow stronger and learn more about this world. At least it was a good place to start figuring things out, and this place was dangerous if it had roaming goblins like that, so wandering around like this was risky.
I'd be more alarmed if I didn't have an escape rope handy. Which works obviously. Since there's no reason it wouldn't... right? XD
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