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Astrid Kim

Fire.
Blue flames wreathed the land, stretching into the sky as if to block anyone else from bearing witness to what was within. She, of course, was in the middle of it all. In her arms, an older man, bearing on his face a pair of glasses, lay limp. She, too, seemed to have no strength in her limbs; her legs refused to move, and her hands remained firmly clasped in place.
And as the flames grew brighter, the heat grew, until finally——

Astrid opened her eyes as the apparent nightmare ended, the mild concern evident on her face as she groggily got up from her bed and stretched her arms. The scene that presented itself was unnaturally vivid, and the young woman could feel the cold sweat on her forehead slowly dripping down. While the caffeine from last night's coffee had done its job well (down to the perfectly timed crash following her shower and change of clothes), the scant hours of sleep she had been given were just a few too little. The sun seemed to barely rise over the horizon, judging by the light barely streaming through her window, but that meant this was probably one of the best times to handle any other issues at hand. It was definitely far too early to go shopping—that'd have to come after some breakfast—but at the very least, she could attempt to contact her mother. It was probably sometime in the evening in Korea, anyhow, and it wasn't as if she was a magus with the ability to prepare. She could make a few runes, yes, but without actually having burned any resources during their scouting last night there wasn't much of a point in doing so.

With that in mind, the half-valkyrie pulled out a laptop from her luggage and, after setting up whatever needed to be set up, attempted to contact her mother. The miracle of the internet was not something to be underestimated, and Astrid wasn't so fixated on tradition that she would pass up the opportunity to use this on the job anyhow.

"Oh, right, Lancer," Astrid remarked as the somewhat obnoxious sound of the call connecting bounced through the room, "we should visit the Church before buying you a change of clothes. I believe that was something mandatory to be handled...?"

Before long, the sound resonating from the computer stopped, and after a second of pause, the sight of a woman with blonde hair chatting with an older Korean man popped up on screen.

"Oh, Astrid!" the man said, waving at the screen from the other side as she waved back. "I heard you went to America for—"

"Not now, Seong-il!" berated the woman next to him, and before long the old man was shooed off somewhere to the side. "So, young lady, did you meet any troubles over there?"

"Er... No, not particularly, but I did meet... I don't know, one of my aunts? I think that's the best way to describe the situation..."

"Oh?"

Given that her father wasn't exactly aware of anything involving magi, Astrid found this to be the easiest way of dancing around the issue. It was possible that Lancer would poke her head in to speak, but... Well, she'd cross that bridge when she came to it.

@KoL

Archer

Once the matters for the night were handled and his Master returned back to his base, Archer wasted no time in slipping out and scouting the rest of the town out. Finding 'contacts' was far easier than he had expected, and the funds that he had obtained from his Master were enough to at least set up a basic information network. Despite learning of the marvel that was modern technology, the idea of having something so easily traceable by others turned the old dandy off from the idea of utilizing it altogether. While it might be easy to connect with others, a system like that made it just as simple for any plebian to follow the tracks back to him.

That was far from the ideal.

Once that was handled, though, Archer returned back to the hotel where his Master was and took some time for himself to sleep. Despite being a Servant (and, by all means, dead), the feeling of rest after having accomplished something was still something worth savoring. There was still more to be done later, but for now...

This would do fine.

Awakening early the next morning was a simple task, but it was a matter of waiting for his Master to be awake and alert before seeing if any of the seeds he had sewn had borne fruit.

@King Cosmos
Once the barrage of magical missiles had finished firing and the vanguard had cleaved their target in two, Tiral, though still wary, allowed his barriers to drop. Despite the distance from where he was relative to the witch, the apparent lack of blood from Tyaethe's swing was quite apparent. It was a given, then, that once that body double had dissipated into a swarm of butterflies that he would move to examine the leftovers. At the very least, the mage-knight assumed that it might be possible to trace the source. Puppetting a copy would likely leave something behind, which would make finding a trail far simpler.

"Pardon me," he said, running up the stairs and setting up a magic circle to attempt something, with a singular needle of ice floating above it to act as a compass. The results were made apparent in a few minutes: the needle spun around a few times before pointing in a direction that caused Tiral to balk.

"...The town? We need to move."
@Sync: Fine now. Accepted.
@Sync: Let's see...

1. Whoa, 10m range is big. *Big*. Dial it back a bit, esp for a char at 40. Also, elemental bomber without invoking elements feels weird.
2. Sleight, not Sleigh (assuming it's a typo, nbd).

I think once the FORMER is fixed you're good to go. Latter I would like fixed because I'm a bit nitpicky.
@Rin: Accepted.
@Sync: Yes, still open.
@Experiment 249: Seems fine now. Accepted.

@ERode: I guess they're fine for now? It's really hard to judge this without seeing it in action. I'll say if there's anything that oversteps bounds, but else? Accepted.
Either or is fine.
@Experiment 249
-cracks knuckles-
Okay, stuff handled, let's check this out.

1. Abilities are definitely scaled way too high for what the char's level is. The gear seems like an endgame set, not a midgame set. This, I am sure of. Too many bonuses. All of these bonuses.

What the heck, nerf that. I'd slap the dev who came up with this if they proposed this as any sense of 'balanced'.

2. First paragraph of Backstory section. Wrong game buddy-o.

3. Looping back to abilities (under the assumption that we handle literally everything gear related because seriously what the heck), well...
Eladrin seems like it's got too much going for it. Remove.
Fey Step remove.
Dancer's Fog is okay assuming the character doesn't suddenly have a max HP buff since it's a HoT and not burst heal. I'm also working under the assumption that because it's fog, it lowers visibility as a tradeoff?
Dryad is fine.
Fairy Swarm is fine.
Mirror Image is fine.

4. XP as compared to combat experience? Because in an RPG of any sort, you'll get EXP to get levels. I think that should be clarified.

5. Size is fine, you can shrink more if you want. Just don't be unreasonable.

That's all for now. I think. I'll let you know more if you change more.
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