Hexaflexagon

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I'm grading homework and will probably be grading homework for the rest of the night. All reviews, questions, comments, et cetra will continue tomorrow. @Dogematix@Dark Wind Do not worry I have not forgotten you.

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@Virgil
Thanks, sorry for being a pain.

Split time is fun! It's going to get even more fun. Cause while the future/present time line flows like it's supposed to the past once is a mess filled with time-skips as its really just to serve as the "highlights" of the past. (The past part is really there tonjust set up some auxiliary background and flavor) Just pay attention to the little intro blurb in bold though and y'll should be fine!

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@Virgil
Nah the temple is fine.

Cause in your One Sun Post Aveless-Fall sectiom this happens. "and a sensation like rain-droplets pelting his face overcame him: Job to be done. Voice's orders. Meet at the Weeping-Gate within the Hour. Pack Light."

Tarkus talks to you lot in the before the fall section.(In the intro post the first part at the keep is in the future, the second part at the camp is in the past.)

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@Virgil
I was actually correct the first time! I'm just really tired. There are some time issues my dear friend. Basically the end of your two sections should be flipped is the easiest way of putting it. Cause in the past (the camp) Tarkus spoke in your guys heads while in the Future(Keep) Verse is going to gather you folks up. You have it the other way round. Besides that everything looks good!

Can't deal with rebels yet if the city hasn't been captured and all.

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Ignore this.

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Ignore

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@Drunken Conquistador
I'm gonna say it anyway. In fact all the Voices can do it. It's part of where their names come from. _{You see I think about these things sometimes.}

But that's about as far as they can extend with most people. Since Verse is Tainted if they really want to they can hijack her entire body as need be. Though that's more of an Undying thing to do than a Voice thing and if the Undying is doing something like that well you better be on the next continent because they do not like having to intervene with such insignificant matters.

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@Virgil
Yep

You guys got thrown together because Tarkus needed people to do it, and you folks fit the bill. And by fitting the bill that means in most of your cases probably everybody more qualified were doing other more important shit than go on a suicide mission.

In the future, since that all worked out well and dandy, the tunnel was taken and the wall came down, you folks are pretty much a squad now. Doing the shit nobody else wants to do like dealing with the Anthem. Cause everybody else would rather storm the giant wizard fortress and get roasted alive instead of chilling with them.

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@Draken
I mean the Order do have a giant magical floating city. Tracking them down means going to a Cathedral and then getting either an Inquisitor or a Maiden to Sponsor you and then getting legit teleported to said floating city because miracles are weird like that. But it is an idea, even Vangar doesn't willing antagonize the Order mostly because they have more important things to worry about than some people that like to pray a lot in their big ass floating metropolis, save for the Inquisitors who you only have to worry about if you are like idk using the Mist for not fun stuff like attempting Necromancy or something.

@AlexStarsion
Maybe they are evil? Who really knows? Though Trent would probably now that the Order wouldn't be a big fan of those robots, creating false life and all that.

@Mercenary Lord
Yay!

Plot post should be coming along by Friday, maybe sooner!

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@Dogematix
I'll take a gander at the best fry cook in the land in a little bit!