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9 yrs ago
Happy Thanksgiving!
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9 yrs ago
When you see that you no longer owe anymore posts and have nothing to write *insanity ensues* Aaaaah!HSkjhaksjhdjf
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10 yrs ago
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10 yrs ago
Happy Birthday to me.
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Hello all. I am an experienced writer who is writing my own fiction stories on the side. I can role play any genre. What I love most is being able to go-all-out when weaving tales with other writers. It just makes the story more interesting, so I can't wait to write with you. :)

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@KalasIf he's affected by the "agro" of Chains's <<Fighting Spirit>> skill, then he can knock some sense into him without the <<Shame>>.
@LeeRoy@PatrickDrummer@Stern Algorithm@jasonwolf@Mirrodin@Kaalee@BreakingMe@jasonwolf@Elegance@Mirrodin@Archangel89

I'll get us moving again. I was trying to give other people a chance to post.
@EzmeraldaI apologize. I'll tone it down and vague it up.

Edit: I deleted some things and toned it down some. Let me know if you find it still offensive.
The proceedings occurring in the Mt. Meggido Grand Hall were a subtle warped noise to his ears. Out of the rows of upright crimson robe wearers, there was one who was face-down, head on table. A pool of drool had formed next to the secret member’s head complete with soft snoring. To what the slumbering member could see, there was a man seated upright behind him emitting the same “Zzz” noise and a third bent over the table, red-sleeve covered arms hanging over the edge along with its hooded head. The robed figure sandwiched between them had his face buried between the swells of the bent-over robed figure's ass. While the Grand Master and Fenixrite were dealing with Hikaru, Chains was happily elsewhere. Some place dimly-lit and private with a warrior female. Jesus their armor skins were so hot.

The teal-haired warrior had her hands up and fingers curled. Her round hips twisted to her run and hair whipped behind her like a banner. Her blue armor was hardly practical—if this had been reality and it wasn’t! It left nothing to the imagination as her every curve, cheek, and swell shook and bounced in absurd physics. His dream was the mod-version of Sword Art Online.

“Kyaaa~! Chains-sama, don’t chase me. You’re so scary!” the cute warrior girl cried.

Chains had a first-person POV and couldn’t see his body (or the damn bodies of those clones—yes!). All he saw were his armor-covered grabby hands, growing closer and closer to the metal babe.

“Oh, I’m more than just scary! Come on, let’s play something else.”

The warrior squeaked as she suddenly tripped and fell over. Chains was caught off-guard by her fall and spread his arms to slow his pursuit. He staggered and fell over, face plummeting into her bottom. Oh god yes!

“No; Chains-sama! Not there! Kyaa~!”

Back in game-reality, beneath his hood, Chains’s lips unzipped into a lewd grin as more drool spilled from between his teeth to roll and drip off the table. His two other clones were grinning similarly but their faces were all obscured by the Regent.

“Oh baby…your ass…turning me on so much…”

The horror unleashed by the sudden death of Fenixrite disturbed Chains from his dream. The babe was fading from his conscience. No! He was waking up! His eyelids cracked open as lines of silver blearily peeked through them. The grin had melted from his face as he groggily stared at the edge of his hood that was obscuring his vision.

Everyone close your eyes!

Chains’s brows crashed together as he blinked sleepily. Was he missing something?

FLASH!


Chains shot up in his chair, his eyes squinting as the flash was already fading. Cool air touched the wet spot at the corner of his mouth and before he made a motion to wipe it, he noticed his hand clutching the ass cheek of one of his clones. The tank’s face paled in horror as he quickly retracted it in disgust. He quickly rubbed the drool spot away from his mouth and his attention was drawn to a man screaming in rage next to him.

“RAAAAAHHH!” the robed figure screamed.

Chains stared blankly at him.

“RAAARAAH! AAAAH!”

He stared some more confused and unsure what to do here. It was actually kind of disturbing.

The robed man finally drew a dagger and whirled on Chains with every intention of stabbing him with it. There we go! The tank swiftly thrust out his hand, the metal of his palm colliding with the soft tissue of the dagger-wielder’s face. Slap! Slap! It felt as though two other slaps had collided with the dagger-wielder’s face, causing his head to crank around to the side. The blow had been swift for unarmed combat was the fastest combat in the game, and also the weakest without STR. The dagger-wielder fell backwards out of his chair to the floor, his feet comically flying up into the air.

“Chains used <<Bitch Slap>>. It’s super effective!” he narrated for himself.

What the hell was going on here? God damn it, he had to fall asleep and miss everything! From what he could see, people were killing each other in rage. <<Hate>>? Had someone used the hater spell? He remembered the flash. It had been <<Spiritual Light>> to be exact.

“So…we can leave right? Meeting’s over?” Chains asked sarcastically as he climbed onto the table and rose to his feet. It bothered him to see so many brothers turning on each other, but it bothered him even more not knowing whether he was allowed to kill them or not. Several brothers were rushing to the defense of the Grand Master, some were smitten by the hate, others were just avoiding the slaughter all together, and the final few heroes were chasing Hikaru.

Well that’s boring. There isn’t much for me to do but bitch slap other players, he mused.

“RAAAH!”

Welp, that was his cue to scram. Chains sprang off the table, his Regent billowing and yet still not revealing what he had underneath. Below him was a hate-cursed swordsman, twisting about to and fro after having cut two brothers down. He was snarling like a wild animal, and only briefly did he stop, suspecting that something was amiss. He looked up in time to catch a face-full of crotch. His body bent backwards, face contorting in rage and disgust to have his head trapped between another man’s legs. The weight of the other player forced him to fall backwards until the back of his headed collided with the floor.

Chains landed nuts-in-face on top of the other player, his heavy armored-behind crushing the player’s head. Chains was certain that if the player had been in his right mind that he would have been thanking the game makers for making HP bars.

“Chains used <<Tea Bag>>…” he winced a little as he rose off the floor, rubbing his ass. “It’s super effective.”

HEY! It’s me you want, right? Come and—

Chains watched with a plain expression the Grand Master get launched across the room by a greatsword wielder.

And I thought I was the tank? he mused. She dispatched of her assailant much as he would have expected, but the mob that charged her didn’t seem quite fair. It was as though she had been the hater’s true target (derp!). Ezmeralda rushed to the Grand Master’s side. When Chains saw Ezmeralda cut down several former brothers, he got the answer to his past question.

“Oooh, so we can kill them,” Chains said with a delighted smile curling at his lips.

A naginata suddenly ripped through his chest from behind, causing his eyes to widen a little in startle. As he turned to look behind him at his assailant, another player was charging him from the front with a one-handed long sword poised to cut him down. Chains reached a hand back to grasp the arm of the naginata to keep the other player from drawing it out. He <<Parry>> the other player’s sword with the blade of the naginata and then stepped forward to impale the player through the chest with it. The player’s eyes widened in shock as Chains brought his free arm around in a half-embrace, drawing him closer into him until his chin rested over his shoulder.

Hnn; come here. Big hug!” he said lovingly.

The player shattered in his arms.

DEAD

The player behind him was trying to jerk his weapon from the tank’s grip. Chains’s hand went to grasp the red cloak that was around him, the material crumpling within his fist. He drew it free and cast it to the floor, revealing who he was. The man stood in thick, steel-grey armor. The clawed fingers of his gauntlets were coiled about the player’s naginata as he turned his silver and wolfish eyes over his shoulder to gaze at the player who was still raging. His eyelids became half-lidded as he extended his free arm and digitizing into his hand was a massive greataxe that he held horizontally aloft with ease.

“There’s no getting through to you is there?” Chains asked.

“RAAAAH!” came the reply.

“Huh!” he laughed. “I knew you’d say that.”

Chains yanked the naginata blade out of his chest and turned into the motion of his swinging greataxe, dropping the weapon in a downward chop. The weapon appeared to have missed the pole user by a few inches. The air cleaved by the swing blasted in his face. The pole user’s face was still tense with fury, and a second after, it brightened with shock. A red line passed down his forehead, between his stunned eyes, all the way down his chest and abdomen, having split him perfectly in two. The blade-like hole in Chains’s chest sealed up with a flash of green sparkles. The pole-user burst like how all players did when they died in the game.

DEAD

Swinging his massive ax onto his left shoulder, Chains turned to Ezmeralda, Vegnya, Ornstein, and Akira who were all gathered together. He raised his hand into the air and waved it around.

“Heeeey~! I see you guys are surviving all right.” Dropping his hand, he raked his armored fingers back through his black hair [always got to look cool for the ladies ;)] and smirked. “Leave these guys to me. If you want to escape, I’ll cover you. There are still some sane people left (Raema, Ramiela, Jester, Kirameku, Aster (Hater), and Prometheus), but I don’t think they’ll be worrying too much about them after I cast this.”

The ground beneath his feet exploded with a burst of orange light that reflected within Chains’s gleaming eyes. The four around him might have experienced the regen effects of <<Fighting Spirit>> a skill that normally would be used to taunt monsters, but in PVP status, it was just as effective on enemy players. It might have seemed crazy and suicidal for Chains to agro all the hateful players within his vicinity, but he was foolishly confident in his abilities. Covering for his team was what he was designed to do, and he had designed his build around it.

As a mob of angry players started to charge him, Chains lowered his ax from his shoulder as a relaxed smile stretched on his face.

“I’ll buy them some time.”

XXX || Dispatched: 2 || Shamed: 2 || Players Directly Involved: @akirashadow@Ezmeralda@Volenvradica@iHxzardx




"XXX" is literally his name. The user was unable to find a screenname that wasn't already taken and so out of frustration, the user typed in those three letters and surprisingly the name worked. It might have triggered a glitch in the system for usually three character names were not allowed. Other players have called him ridiculous nicknames such as "Triple X," "Porno," and his most preferred name besides his epithets, "Chains."



The Undying - Chains is renowned for being quite the tank and bruiser in combat. His breaker allows him to survive in a fight longer than most and venture into quite the amount of dungeons without need for a full team. As far as his PVP career goes, no player has ever seen him lose. This doesn't mean he can't lose just no one has ever seen or heard of him ever losing, so he might have lost in secret once upon a time [Open for Character Rivalry if another player wants to fit in his past history]. Short story shorter, Chains health bar is deemed to be broken.
Cerberus - There's just something about his fighting style that players can't seem to figure out, but many have reported that it's like fighting against three different weapon skills.
Beelzebub - He is even named after his favorite greataxe, Beelzebub and for good reason because his weapon is quite the nightmare.
Grey Wolf - Due to the fur that lines his armor.


Brotherhood



Mid-twenties



Orange



Chains is a tall (6’3”) man who dons heavy fur-lined armor, a trademark armor that is wolfish in appearance. His silky black hair grows from his scalp in blade-like layers that brush his brows and the shells of his ears. The sides of his head to the nape of his neck are buzzed and bristly to the touch, leaving the hair on the crown of his head as the longest by 3 to 4 inches. His eyes are a bright silver, and in contrast with his dark features, stand out as one of his most attractive qualities. His right brow cosmetically has a scar splitting through it down his cheekbone and a second thinly going across the bridge of his nose beneath his eyes. Cosmetically, beneath his armor, are several Norse/rune-like tattoos that go down his strong arms and behind the swells of his muscled back. From the edges of his jaw down to his chin is rough stubble that creates the shadow of a goatee. Chains's overall appearance and demeanor is of a wild and untamed man that when he grins, some envision him with fangs.





Beelzebub is a boss drop from «Beelzebub» a secret boss Chains found on accident when exploring. The devil was a sadist who fed off the health of players for the duration they remained in his realm. Players with average health points quickly succumbed to the devil’s leeching attacks but because of Chains’s breaker, he was able to survive long enough to vanquish the creature.

Beelzebub is a greataxe that is just as diabolical as the boss who dropped it. The weapon is just as much a glutton, relishing in the pain and anguish it happily dishes out to enemies in bursts. The axe deals an increased amount of critical damage also known as burst damage for it is designed to take down heavily armored enemies. It saps 10% of the enemy’s HP (and heals its wielder for the same amount) for each successful strike, and can randomly inflict the status effect Delay if an enemy were to sustain too many successful hits from the crippling weapon. A final buff the weapon grants is only activated when Beelzebub successfully strikes an opponent. The weapon grows excited from the taste of blood and pain and will increase the user’s attack speed by 10% for each successful strike made, stacking up to 5 times but only for that specific adversary. If Chains were to switch enemies, then his attack speed resets to normal. If he stops attacking the enemy he has the stacks on for 60 secs, then his weapon will rest and his attack speed resets to normal until he lands a successful strike again.

The length of the greataxe is 7.5 feet and its total reach is 10.5 feet if swung from the base. The weapon is bound to the account and cannot be sold, traded, or dropped by the user.






• Two-Handed Battleaxe
• Battle Healing
• Fighting Spirit
• Heavy Metal Equipment
• Parry




Chains’s breaker is an unseen one but just because it’s unseen doesn’t mean it isn’t noticeable in combat. What players see is a 2H Axe user, and in battle, they see the character swinging around a greataxe; but there are some motions that don’t make sense for an axe-wielder to perform such as thrusting or reaching further than what the character’s arms allow. In Beelzebub’s case, the reach of the axe is roughly 8 feet depending on Chains’s hand position, and even though the axe will stop at 8 feet, the weapon will still somehow strike a target standing 10 feet away. Chains will even be seen moving his hands closer to the axe-head for close-quarters combat and wield his axe like one would a sword. What the players cannot see are what the user sees, three character clones sandwiched together in a horrendous crotch-to-ass cluster: one wielding a one-handed sword, one wielding a two-handed axe (the one that is actually visible to other players and should be the actual character model), and one wielding a polearm. The damage inflicted by these weapons is the same as the damage inflicted by whatever weapon the real Chains is wielding at the time. These two extra men have also granted Chains a drastic increase in his total health, which is why most players who battle him in PVP claim he is Undying, “hax!” or his health bar is broken. The enemy is actually fighting three opponents in one, taking down three health bars with the same passive abilities as the main user, thus the Cerberus complex — lop off one head and there are still two more. Reducing one of the extra man’s health to zero will make Chains’s health bar instantly drop to 0, leaving the true status of his health unseen to those with the ability to see it. While logically, he still has two health bars left, it can’t be determined how much health he has left after the first man is murdered. As long as the main character survives, then the other two will resurrect with healing over time.

This breaker grants him a great amount of survivability that he uses to tank for his party and to survive mobs when soloing dungeons. He isn’t afraid to be the initiator in combat, jumping in first to draw the enemy’s attention while his team gets into strategical battle positions.
@Holy SoldierOkay, first of all, all I have ever done is make suggestions so that you guys can run your game way more smoothly. Because you just lay out a generic requirement but you’re demands are beyond picky. If your character sheet did not meet your own requirements, then you need to design it in such a way so that it does and so that you are not wasting the time of anyone who would even join this game. Because that is all you’re doing. You openly tell people to apply to your game, and then you slam them with nitpicking requirements that should have been addressed from the get-go.

I have every right to defend my concepts and maybe I shouldn’t have had to if you took the time to look over your game and plan it out in a logical manner because you shouldn’t be going through so much trouble with character creation. I haven’t been the only one to ask, “What do you want?” Because players were starting to see that just tossing a CS up wasn’t always going to work. Your CS template is quite the illusion.

You have wasted my time twice with my first CS application and then this second one. The second one has no issues whatsoever and then you wanted to make problems just to make problems because your interpretation of a Mary Sue is obviously someone who goes through abuse, smokes pot, and womanizes. I made my character as real and believable as most of those characters you already accepted at this point it was just blatant harassment and bullying because I went into PMs to clear the original problem, which was powers with you before I even made this. And then guess what, new problem. Now we don’t like the personality. I doubt that would have been the end of it because you guys got serious issues, and I hope smart people will avoid your games in the future because I certainly will. This is not going to happen again.

It really shouldn’t take 3 GMs with schedules too busy to even run this game to run one game. But you all are like a hive mind and apparently share the same koolaid-drinking psychology about how YOU think the world should be. It’s not going to get you anywhere. I’m just going to let you know now. You really should learn to be more open with ideas and also learn to organize because your game shouldn’t say one thing, and then you say something else. That’s terrible organization.

After going through so much hassle to get one damn sheet in—I was actually hoping that I would have been denied the opportunity to submit another sheet after Horus—I was hinted to the type of nitpicking, narrow-minded GMs that I was going to be working with, and that was the perfect sign to “Turn Away While You Can” because this game wasn’t going to be at all fun or worth anyone’s time. I will gladly leave this game and not look back, but if you thought that I was going to leave quietly, you got another thing coming because games like these cause problems. You make drama for yourself and then you want to go complaining about how some writer was unruly when actually it was your whole setup that brought it on and your attitude about how to go about handling the problem. So you can take your, “I need to make sure that your writing is on my level” bullshit and shove it. Like, seriously lol. Peace the fuck out.
@MiddleEarthRozeI added more to his personality and I fixed his fatal flaws.
@MiddleEarthRozeThat's why I said he would do it for someone he cares about and not just a pretty face. I will add some negatives in there, but to give further suggestions, you should add a "Quirks" section because when someone just puts up "Personality" on their CS template, I'm going to give a general run-down of the personality. If you want to see a specific thing, then having Quirks there requires the writer to fill out those things. Maybe not always negative but definitely silly and awkward. But Quirks mostly yield something negative socially: bad habits, mental disorders, superstitions...etc.
@MiddleEarthRozeIt's a slang term. It's the muscled area (the notorious man V) that men in shape have at the lower portion of their waist. It's called "The Apollo's Belt."

I'll go back over the personality and fatal flaws when I return. Again, I know how you guys want every single detail about a character's personality listed, but it will change in game as he interacts with others. So even if it's not listed there now, it doesn't mean you won't see negative traits in game. But I will add some in there when I get back to appease you.

As for the fatal flaw, I can see him as being the type to risk his own life to save another if that's even allowed. It sounds cliche, but it matches his personality. Especially if it's for a girl he likes. Maybe...pride. Like how I mentioned he doesn't care how big the guy/monster/it he might have pissed off is...so possibly the whole "bite off more than he can chew" situation.
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