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9 yrs ago
Current Posted a Game Master Guide in the Guides section. If you need help with GMing, refer to it for some handy advice. If you don't need help, then don't read it.
9 yrs ago
Happy Thanksgiving!
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9 yrs ago
When you see that you no longer owe anymore posts and have nothing to write *insanity ensues* Aaaaah!HSkjhaksjhdjf
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10 yrs ago
Happy Thanksgiving!
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10 yrs ago
Happy Birthday to me.
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Hello all. I am an experienced writer who is writing my own fiction stories on the side. I can role play any genre. What I love most is being able to go-all-out when weaving tales with other writers. It just makes the story more interesting, so I can't wait to write with you. :)

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Grimjet

Location: Deck

The door uttered a loud slam when it struck Grimjet causing all the pirates to freeze in startle and regard the still door nervously. The door suddenly opened as Grimjet stepped through it as though it had been been locked in place by hinges. His eyes were shrunk with his own anger. The bitch @DeathXtheXTree had some nerve throwing a door at him!

“A FEW HOURS? YOU’RE GOING TO MAKE ME STARVE FOR A FEW HOURS?” he roared. He then turned his attention back toward his ship. The door fell over as he bellowed, “WHERE IS THAT PRINCESS DAMN IT!?”

Anastasia @HowlsOfWinter would find her moment of peace disturbed by two pirates barging into her quarters to suddenly drag her from her bed. They were taking her against her will to the captain on the main deck.





@TalijaKeyHave you heard anything from @Caits? I haven't seen her post anything for Charmander. I'm also wondering how your Noibat thing is going? You have been having some poor luck with Pokemon lol. If you want me to make a Pokemon for you, I can. At least you know it won't disappear lol.
To Unite All People Within Our Nation...



Mysterious Boy & Mysterious Girl


Situation Location: In front of the Trainer House




The Mysterious Girl arched a brow when a Vulpix emerged from the crowd and had some nerve to leap onto the table she had went through the trouble to find. She rolled her eyes at her plea and simply walked around the table with her hands on her hips, her plaid skirts swaying. Standing in front of the Vulpix to return the trainer crowd’s eyes to her, the Mysterious Girl cheerfully smiled and held up a finger.

“Ahem, actually, we don’t sell are world-class bred Pokemon. We allow trainers to trade in their current Pokemon for our awesome Pokemon. The Machamp and Garchomp were very happy with their new trainers. There are more stronger and eager Pokemon waiting to find a best friend. All you have to do is trade with us!” she announced.

A trainer stepped forth then:

Is what she says true?...Are you the ones responsible for these cowards that swing Pokemon around like tools? Like weapons?...Are you the ones that are making a mockery of everything that Trainers stand for?

The Mysterious Girl frowned at Seth before she turned her cheek to him, a cat-like smirk curling at her lips.

“The goal of every trainer is unique. What you believe trainers stand for may not be what everyone else believes.”

She then returned her attention to the crowd and thrust out her arm.

“There are those among you who do not understand your plight. Those of you whose Pokemon were stolen from you. Those who came all of this way just to have your dreams dashed to the ground by misfortune. Even you have a second chance. The Pokemon Club gives all trainers a chance to equally succeed. Perhaps some of you want to travel the long and arduous path to become a pro. The Pokemon Club gives those who would rather expedite the journey a best friend and a free walk to the finish line!”

Lowering her arm, the girl proudly smiled and waved her hand dismissively at Seth before glancing back over her shoulder at the Vulpix.

“Now for those of you who disagree with the Pokemon Club’s mission, take your protests elsewhere. We have some memberships to hand out.”

The words of Vulpix and Seth touched only a few trainers, but it didn’t stop the majority who stepped forward offering their Pokeballs. Humans were naturally lazy and liked the easy way out. Very few liked to work, and as a result, the Pokemon Club was still in business. The Mysterious Boy and Girl merely smiled triumphantly as they traded Pokeballs across the table around the Vulpix as though she didn’t exist. Trainers happily took their new balls and literally ran with them. Popping them open in the park like children opening Christmas gifts as powerful fully-evolved Pokemon emerged. The traded in balls were placed into boxes that were closed, taped, and loaded onto a van that had the abbreviation “PC” glued on the side.

Meanwhile at the Viridian City Police Department, Officer Sholtz and Arclady were investigating the gang members they had rounded up. They were writing a report, requesting permission to use a Hypno to hypnotize the thugs into talking so they could learn about their true motives behind the Route 1 attacks.

@TalijaKey@Bright_Ops@Saltwater Thief@Feisty-Pants@BlackPanther@Raijinslayer@Ashevelendar@Shadow Daedalus
@Holy Soldier Here goes my edits.



Everything looks good except for one line I highlighted in red in your character's profile. You mention your character and his sire joining the CIA and never ever mention the CIA ever again. Maybe you should just not even mention them ever joining the CIA because you don't go further to explain if he quit and how he ended up living in Australia while still working in the CIA. It just doesn't make much sense.
@XenoCyanideMediums are also psychic characters. They don't just commune with spirits. Your character used a lot of levitation in his bio without levitation even being an ability. His particle manipulation abilities are similar to what psychics can do with telekinesis. Majority of the spells you gave him seemed more mutant than spells, which is why he comes off more as a Medium.
@XenoCyanideYes, I want you to change it to something else because if we get a gate opener, you would be making that person invaluable.

You still haven't told me about your more Medium than Warlock situation.
I'm just playing mad "ketchup" T-T
@DeathXtheXTreeYou should respond to Shenanigans!
@redbaron1234Be glad to know that you are the first person to be approved for this game lol.
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