KatherinWinter

Spliced

@dragonbuttsthanks for letting us know

Guild of Dishonor

The biggest problem I have right now is that I suck at fight scenes. I have no idea who is where. I thought Kai and Isago were no longer in the tavern. I thought it was just Ratte were in the tavern. I'll reread everything and see if I can get Griffin involved at least until everyone gets to the brothel.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@Raining@Searatim going to wait fir Essie to be disguised before having Griffin approach them. @Phantomlink959 I will have more information once Argus and Richard are near the zombies.

Guild of Dishonor

@Raptra@FalkiThomas I thought Kai was out. He slipped past the captain already. I thought he was outside in the clear. I thought having a more immediate threat, someone watching them in the tavern would get everyone interacting and planning. Thats the same reason I had Roxy disappear. After the heist everyone was doing their own thing and we needed a reason for them together. No one knows each other, plus the dann timeline, so they can easily contact each other and I didn't want to do another big heist so soon. You're right the long period between posts arent helping. I have mostly lost interest because the story isng going anywhere. While heist are fun I prefer stories that help the characters grow. Ive been trying to do that but I feel like ive failed.

Guild of Dishonor

@FalkiThomas@Raptra I don't see that. Maybe I'm applying to much logic. I think it would be easier to hide separate then together. Especially since they know nothing but each other's names. Griffin isnt going to attack. Kai has escaped. Rate is more than capable of doing so. I was hoping Griffin would get people interacting but it didn't really work. So we need something that gets the group together rather than scattered the way they are.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@Raining@Phantomlink959@Searat I forgot the mention button

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

The cemetery used to be on the edge of town at one point but the city had long ago grown and encompassed it. It was a two acre lot on the west side of the city. Like most cities there was a fence around here. When Argus and Richard arrived the scene was quiet. There would be traces of magic be they would be faint. The report said the witness stated they had been at the far right corner of the cemetery when he spotted the zombies.

Griffin parked his bike in the first spot he found downtown. Luckily it was easy to find a parking place for a motorcycle. He didn't think the girls would have such an easy time. Downtown was pretty busy this morning. He winced at the morning sun. He had never been up or out this early. Or late in his case. But the bureau was able to provide things to protect him so he could be of use to them. He wondered if they could do the same for Essie. Her abilities seemed limited from what he knew.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@Searat@Phantomlink959 I'll get that post up later tonight than.

The Bureau of Supernatural Affairs

@Searat@Raining
Do you guys want Astra and Essie to talk until they get there. I will have Griffin waiting for them but there is no need to rush. Also wrong type of shapeshifter

@LightningMaiden Thanks for letting me know

@Phantomlink959@Searat Let me know when you are ready for arrival information. It isn't much but I have been trying to pull a scene together for you.

Guild of Dishonor

Well I guess I need to do something. Griffin hasn't helped. SO I guess I will bring Roxy back and figure out an explanation later. Also need a reason for the group to stay together. Right now there isn't one. My only idea is arresting them all. Then they work together to escape but once their free we're back to why do they stay together. None of these people are the trusting type.