KoL

Genesis: Land of the Gods

@Ya Boy Tendou

This seems kinda neat. I was pointed here by a certain someone up above *points at @TheWindel*, and I really like what I see.

I have a question, though, can I do a character that wields any oh these kinds of magic, including space? 'cause the concept that I have in mind would fit that type of magic like a glove.

In Hunting Beasts and Monsters

I'll try to get a post up today.

@TheWindel

Likewise.

Chasers - Boundary of the Crimson Sky [remake]

@Otaku95

Sorry for not replying to the PM before, but I was at work, so... Anyway, I'm sorry to say that, but the way he's written right now is not what I'd prefer as a player character for this RP. You can adjust him by making he have normal human form (albeit with enhanced senses and physical attributes), and a "Dragon Trigger" to change into his half-Youkai form, since it's more like the idea of Chaser that I have in mind.

Also, regarding his powers, dragons are aligned with a single element, so he should be resistant (even immune) to one thing only (very much probably fire), not all those other sub resistances. You can remove that weakness to cold as well, since the dragons here don't work like D&D ones, but rather like, say... Smaug, or Fafnir, being near-unkillable, fire (or other things)-breathing, scaly-winged, monstrosities that you should pray to never cross paths with. Turning on the AC won't do any harm to them.

That resistance to magic and paralysis makes little to no sense as well exactly for the same reason as above, the kind of combo-platter powers that dragons have on D&D doesn't apply here. They are pure brutes, so to say and the reason why they are so resistant is simply because they are hulking masses of carbon fiber like muscles bound by scales that would make any Abrams look like a tin can.

Do these alterations and then we can talk again.

@KoL
Hm, so in this case, it's less about actually affecting reality, and more about making people believe that reality has changed? Would knowing the effects of her powers then diminish its potency? Sorta like how, if you know someone is a liar, you're not going to trust their words easily? Or does her power override an individual's common sense and previous knowledge as well?

@Ashifili

Well, her words affect your perception of reality itself on a primal level, knowing that she can do it (because even a liar can say the truth if they want to), doesn't help you very much. However, once you have acknowledged a certain truth, you'll not feel compelled to recheck it, without good reason. For example, she can't trick Ling with the pants line again without a good cause.

However, if she gives simpler instructions that are plausible in any situation, they can be repeated for as much as need. Things like: "You cannot see here!", or "Your hands can reach the place where I'm standing!" Are where she focus during most fights. Got it?

Chasers - Boundary of the Crimson Sky [remake]

@Ashifili

It's not really reality warping, like I said, a powerful suggestion. Something based on your perception of reality.

If he's not looking, how can he be 100% sure that he doesn't have one and that it isn't open? So, he would feel compelled to check, only then to remember that no, his pants have no fly.

Simply put it's like someone telling you that your string is untied while you are walking absentmindedly, you thank the person but when you go look you are wearing dress shoes, which means that they pranked you.

Or, in other words, Haruka's power is the ability to play the ultimate prank. Got it?

Chasers - Boundary of the Crimson Sky [remake]

@Shisa@IncredibleBee

I'm sorry, I have things planned for you both, including Alice's Archnemesis (The Queen of Hearts) and a target Worthy of Vincent's skills making their debut, but I'm just too tired to write more tonight, please, allow me at least a couple more days.

Okay, this looks interesting. Ya'll wouldn't mind someone else applying would you? �

@Otaku95

Just throw in your idea. At the moment we are still taking more players.

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When you can, would you mind posting your review over Atlas and any changes that need to be made?

@Savo

Please, pardon my stupidity, he actually has been deemed OK by us three, however there's a few points (just about your writing structure) that I'd like to discuss before you post his CS. I'll send the PM later.

So...I can't port Suki over QAQ?
She's technically human :3

@Kimiyosis

We can work this up, I don't see any problems with her, but at least she'll need a revision.

did....did Kat just get hugged by Kirby? xD

My reading skills. I seem to be misreading a lot of things lately. Tsk.

Anyways...still unsure whether she'd shoot it or something else xD
Will think, and work on a post later.

@Rune_Alchemist

hmm.. yeah. I'm waiting to see that reaction.

Angel Beats: Unending Beat!

I'll be posting again around Thursday, people. Just a heads up for those who haven't done anything yet.

Chasers - Boundary of the Crimson Sky [remake]

Such a ginormous post... I wanted to do a bit more, but I'm way too tired for that. I believe I'll be posting again in a couple days to continue what I began.

Chasers - Boundary of the Crimson Sky [remake]

Sonomachi City - Amagumi Park

BGM

After the Chasers finally made their decisions and worked out the plan to take on the huge task of exploring the park, they set about each on their separate ways. What fate waited them in this land beyond the thin veil of crimson?

The Lake

Hider

Just as Jun arrived, he would noticed the well known fact that the 'lake' was more like a glorified artificial pond. In fact, it was shallow enough that even at its deepest parts, it didn't went bellow the waist-height of an average sized citizen. The margins, demarked by a fancy fence, had several wooden benches lined along a cobbled lane that encircled the whole structure, which was shaped like a pear 100 meters long at the widest spot and 200 meters across the main axis. A couple of public restrooms, a few fountains and the eventual selling machine complete the scenario of the number one place for outdoor activities in the park.

However, Jun wouldn't have much time to spend admiring the view, since the reported lights were once again dancing over the mist at right about teh center of the lake. They seemed to be describing an interesting patern, as a group raised and the other went back to the water's edge. No smell or discernike sound came from them, and they seemed to be oblivious of Jun's presence for the time being, eaving the outcome of this encounter complelety at Cryoslinger's hands.

The Playground

Hider

Just as Kat into the playground, which wasn't an area dedicated only to the enfants of Sonomachi, since it had a number of public chess tables and even board game sets that one could borrow from the park's administration. However, the main attractive of the playgroubd would be the ever populat swings, laying right between the sandbox and a couple of centuries old ginkgos, the ones here were built to last with the best steel available half a century amd as an estatement of their quality, they were still functional even to this day. A little greasing every now and then, though would be good to tone down the madening creak produced by the rainbow painted contraptions.

Kat would notice that (despite the lack of wind) the swings were indeed, well... swinging as if something, or someone were playing with them at this late hour. A light sob filled the still air and before Kat could react, a veritable tsunami of sand washed over her, pushing with the expected weitgh of such a mass, before taking the shape of a six feet wide mass, faintly resembling a very popular pink character that proceed to try to, erm... hug Havoc Aegis?

What the hell was happening here?

The Shell

Hider

Kazuki arrived at the shell, just a little time after his companion would get to their destinations, since it was the point that laid farthest to the main gate. In fact, it wasn't as much an acoustic shell as it was an amphitheater, with rolls of seats that could easily accomodate a thousand expectators to whatever performance would be held at the Greek inspired building. A bust of Plato (based of the famous depiction shown in The School of Athens, by Raphael) featuring one of his most famous quotes from The Republic —"the beginning in every task is the chief thing"— laid right besides the aisle that lead straight to the backstage entrance.

A moment after Kazuki set his feet at the shell, a voice, as ethereal as the atmosphere of this ghostly night sounded at the stage, singing in a faintly childish tone, a song that's perhaps known to all no matter where in the world do you happen to live. It seemed to be coming out of nowhere, though the only other abnormal thing about the whole place was what looked like a plush bunny dropped by the center of the stage. What would happen from now on was Mosaic Soul's choice, however.

Sonomachi City - Seaside Freeway

BGM

Hider

After a heated discussion that inevitably led to Rui-Ling trading blows with some of the low grunts of the Jackets, Suzumebachi stepped in cracking his knuckles "Yo, Cow Lick, if you wanna us to do something you'd better do it like always, but I warn you, bozo, this time a surprise for ya!"

And so he did, as Suzumebachi revealed right as they arrived at the junction leading to the freeway, this time he somehow managed to snag a Suzuki Hayabusa (AKA the fastest production motorcycle in the world at her time), and was way too sure of his chances of victory now that he had one of those.

However, before he and Ling could dash off to their highspeed battle, at the track that was known to be way too dangerous because of the trucks driving away at crazy speeds and the winding nature of the road, a voice, female at it said, sounding way too pissed off that someone had interrupted her, erm... bonding with her... girlfriend?

"Can you please cut that? I'm trying to treat my girlfriend here, by all that's sacred." The girl said, "but if you insist, we can join your game as well. In fact, if you lose this race, I believe you'll be so ind as to tell us what's happening with your lot these days, not?" Anyone who knew of the Chaser currently on Sonomachi would know of Haruka and Kiaraand of the first ill spoken power of compelling others with her words as well as of her shrewdness, if Haruka was here something must have happened behind the stage. Or perhaps, was she really just trying to get some with her girlfriend when some bastards broke her mood, who knows?

The only certain thing is that as the last couple of competitors for this lawless race lined in their own sports motorcycle was that this would be one hell of a grand prix.

"By the way", Haruka said to Rui-Ling, using her power nonetheless, just as beginning of the the race was signaled by one of the Jacket's girls, "isn't your fly open?" Certainly something he'd like to check, unless he liked the breeze, not?

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@Rune_Alchemist@TheWindel@GrafRoy Zeppeli@rechonq@Ashifili@McFazzer

Deep Ground Online (Hiatus)

The first half of Eris' updated CS, I worked a few changes on her, but other than the design, she's 99% equal to the one at the CS Tab. I'll update Eclipse Princess later as well:

♡Eris♡

Name: Eris Valkeyr Reinhardt.
Age: 17 years.
Height: 156 cm.
Weight: 48 kg.
Year: 3rd.
Eye Color: Red.
Hair Color: Blond.
Nationality: German.

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Appearance:

Personality:

Eris is brooding and this filled with a deep discontentment for her upbringing so she tends to be dry and blunt when talking to other people, almost to the point of being obnoxious sometimes. She thinks that she doesn't needs friends and such, since they will only be more trouble to her, but still can't avoid social interactions, since she knows all too well that human being can't live alone.

She's not a bad person to hang around, since she doesn't tend to lash a other people so frequently, but her lack of social finesse can cause some people to feel a certain discomfort around Eris, not that she cares in the very least.

Bio:

The second daughter of an influential German family with a long streak of wins at DGO, Eris has always lived at the shadow of her older brother, who's an ace but about to reach the age cap and thus has already secured quite a good living. As is expected from a child that got forced by her parents to strive for a living that she might not have wanted, Eris got fed up with her life rather quickly and instead of playing DGO to fulfill her parents' ambitions, she simply used it as a place to vent her rage.

Inside the virtual world she became a deadly warrior who clings to the dark corners and fights with wild abandon swinging a two-handed sword at foes much stronger or numerous than her, knowing that the worst that can happen is for her avatar to die and become unavailable for a few hours.

Knowing that she would be a problem child, Eris' parents put her on a plane and sent her to study at Purple Crown Academy to see if the time away from home would "cool" their daughter's temper.

Other:

None at the moment.

Theme

Deep Ground Online (Hiatus)

As soon as we get an official mention of the timeskip from @TheWindel I'll post it. However, I'll probably write it this afternoon, or tomorrow, I can send it over a PM if you want a preview.

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Is Eris gonna "play Monopoly" with Cassie? >:3

@McFazzer

Hah! Pitiful peasant, Monopoly is beneath Eris' level, she already is a winner of the Game of Life. Tough, given that Eris has given in to her inner card shark (like you and Windel suggested), she could more than gladly engage in adult games like Blackjack.