KoL

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@KoL Let's just put it as, he learns it and loses it when he gets another power, but if he sees a different better power he'll take it, like if he fights Crimson and takes her flash step, and fought someone else that had a cooler power ( in his case ) the he'd take it and lose the flash step because he's focusing on the new power. I guess you can say he's like a pokemon, he remembers certain moves but can't keep them all.

I feel like Eiko and Crimson will be good friends

@Spriggs27

@KoL Let's just put it as, he learns it and loses it when he gets another power, but if he sees a different better power he'll take it, like if he fights Crimson and takes her flash step, and fought someone else that had a cooler power ( in his case ) the he'd take it and lose the flash step because he's focusing on the new power. I guess you can say he's like a pokemon, he remembers certain moves but can't keep them all.

I feel like Eiko and Crimson will be good friends

@Spriggs27

I can allow something as that, as long as he has a nerfed version of the power he copies, like say, around half strength. Otherwise it takes the merit of the original owner of the power, which is no fun.

We can see about that other issue IC, but I have nothing against it.

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@KoL Surprised you didn't say Gaz's power was Oped since he could copy anyone's manifestations unless they were weapon based.

@Spriggs27

Copying a skill and being skilled on it's use are two completely different things. If yo said he could keep said skill for a long period of time, it would be an issue, but the way it's written (and the only one I'll accept w/o scrutiny) he should lose the copied skills by the end of a fight (thus not being very good in learning about it, unless he copies the same person over and over) and not hold more than one power at once. Those are the limits I'm imposing to his power, I should actually mentioned them earlier.

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@Xenonia@Ashifili

It depends on what you consider physical, or magical. The way it's written, it makes me thing that nothing that's non-energy based attacks can harm him. That's my point.

A rock created by magic wold still be rock, if you remember our previous discussion on the issue of firearms on this RP, thus said rock, even if it was a meteor wouldn't hurt him, as long as it only did crushing damage. That's the point I'm trying to make/understand; if you explain it in a more clear way, I could change my opinion, of course.

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Sorry for the double post, but I'm on my phone and the stupid thing sometimes seems to have it's own will.

@Spriggs27

Your characters are ok, on my end.

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Also, everyone, I should say, as is my tradition that any characters reviewed by me are still subject to @TheWindel's revision as well. You can post them, but obey whatever he says about what you should do. The contrary is valid, of course as well, if Windel reviews a CS while I'm not here, you can post it, but mind whatever I say later, if I do.

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@j8cob

Both of your characters are good in pretty much everything (*note to self: create a Freddy-based Youkai*), except one part, powers. Your second character (Erisa) is ok (lower the range of her shots a bit, though), but the first one is way too strong in my opinion. Here are some points of concern:

- The amount of power he can "generate" is too big, I can't simply have a beginner character that has a power that is unlimited, even if it requires some time to charge. You can make it a quicker charge but lower it to a reasonable quantity of power a lightning's worth of power is already strong enough IMO.

- The fact that he can charge power without any visible signs is way too OP and, senseless as well. At the very least he should have one of these classic electricity user side-effects (sparks flying around him, a distinctive electric buzz, or ozone smell), naturally the size of the charge influences on the scale of the side-effects, so he can charge up to a certain portion of his power w/o looking like it, but when the power reaches a certain point (say, around a power line level) there should be an indication of what's going on, otherwise it's too strong for my tastes.

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@Xenonia

I like your character, you can join as well.

Even thought that dress is a bit too powerful, to say the truth. I think you should put at least one practical limitation on it, like... needing to remain immobile for it to work as described, otherwise it would be just as good as... say, a Juggernaut suit from CoD? Is that good?

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@changhana

Well, what more you want to know? If I can help I will.

God's Shattering [Concluded]

Well, we've all aligned into our own nicely compartmentalized sub-stories, so there's less chaotic action. :P

@The 42nd Gecko

For the time being, you mean. Chaos will ensue soon enough again, that you can be sure off. As long as I'm the holder of the Power of Entropy and the seal of the ancient Snake Gods, you can be sure of that. Mwahahahaha!

Here's a handy theme song, for your dearest appreciation:

This RP is slowly becoming more quiet :((

@BlueAjah

There's nothing disallowing us from turning it the other way around, there's?

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So like is this open, because holy hell this looks fun

@SolisHeretic

Yup! You can come in.

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@Brithwyr

Your character is ok, you can post her on the CS tab whenever you want to.