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Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@Noxx

Just as @TheWindel said, her backstory is ok, and I think the powers are pretty much alright as well, however, there are a few issues other than the number of gems that I'd like to ask about:

- The 100 m² area refers just to the building's perimeter or to the total floor area? In other words, if she had to create something with more than one floor, would she have to reduce reduce the area of the building to compensate for the extra floors, or not?

- Also, could you elaborate a bit more on how that force field traps being inside of it? Is it invisible or not? Also, how is it that the range increases from 10 to 50 feet just because she's protecting someone else?

These are the questions that I have in mind now, if I think of anything else I'll say it later.

Fate/Alter Divergence

Othianne Phorensia Obberhausen

"You said that out loud, Caster. If you really want to know, tea isn't my favorite drink. However, I'm not rude enough to not appreciate the quality of the one we have been served. We can continue this talk in our room," Othis said while observing as the other 'guests' filled the room. In fact, it seemed like someone had been there the whole time, a girl that escaped Othis' perception until her Servant spoke what seemed to be words of comfort before addressing everyone in what could only be described as a knightly way.

"The pleasure is ours, Archer and Archer's Master. I'm Othianne Phorensia Obberhausen, an alumna at the Atlas Institute, and this is one is the Servant I summoned, Caster," Othis replied in a polite, yet completely deadpan, voice as the last one of those she presumed to be a Master working under the Tohsaka household's banner finally arrived, bringing an excessively rowdy Servant with herself.

Tristan

"The pleasure is all mine, Lady Othianne, and Caste—" Tristan's reply was cut short when the last of the Masters walked finally arrived, bringing with herself a loud-mouthed Servant that no one who ever took a seat at the Round Table would ever be able to forget.

"No one who ever took a seat at the Round Table would forget this voice even after a thousand years," Tristan said in a collected voice before turning around to address the owner of said voice. However, what he saw before his eyes was enough of a surprise to make the Archer open his eyes and take a minute step back, momentarily breaking his stoic facade.

"So, the rumors about you being the son of King Arthur were true, Treacherous Knight, Mordred," he said after regaining his composure. "To think that we would be summoned to the same era and don't even have the luxury of being enemies of one another so that I could pay back my debt to the King by slaying the one who's responsible for Camelot's downfall. That's the saddest of all fates, indeed," Tristan added, choosing to ignore Mordred's remark about the Archer's (un)luck with women. After all, what rejected child like he knew about love?

KoL's Test Thread

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@Noxx and @A Lowly Wretch

Are you still with us?

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

I'll have a reply towards the weekend.

Fate/Transcendent Paradigm—Take 3 (Closed)

Elizabeth Bathory

"If I take just a bit it won't hurt, you know?" Elizabeth grinned as she noticed both Saber and Caster's reactions. Teasing the blonde duo was easier than she thought, even Nero was taken off guard by the mention of snacks. After all, Bathory had sworn off taking it by force, but if she could just convince someone to give it willingly it wasn't a bad thing, was it?

Nevertheless, the pink-haired Lancer turned her attention away from the street kids and back to her allies just as Saber was trying to barter with a merchant.

"Is that how you show your gratitude for the people who saved your skin and that of your loved ones? The least you could do was giving us some compensation, it's not like you'll go broke because of it," Bathory said in a condescending voice that could only come from the throat of a spoiled noble such as she.

"Thankfully for you, we are good saviors who don't want to impose too much on your way of living, so how about I repay your efforts with a private concert? I'm such your sales will double—no, triple— if become known as the merchant that sponsored the saviors' live concert," she added in a cheery voice as she produced a microphone seemingly out of nowhere and began to do some vocal exercises while waiting for the merchant's reply.

Discipline: Hide in the Fairytale

Sorry for the lateness, I had a three-week ride through hell, but now I'll be relatively free for sometime so I couldn't let go the chance to continue Seyrun and Nadia's conversation. I really like their interaction so far.

Discipline: Hide in the Fairytale

SEYRUN RIVIATHAN

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Sᴄʜᴏᴏʟ Cᴏᴜʀᴛʏᴀʀᴅ - ᴀᴄᴀᴅᴇ́ᴍɪᴇ ᴅᴇ ʟ'ᴇsᴘᴏɪʀ
4ᴛʜ ᴏꜰ Sᴇᴘᴛᴇᴍʙᴇʀ, 1917

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"That's a brilliant idea, Nadia, I'll begin working on a petition as soon as the opening ceremony is over and we are settled in our rooms," Seyrun said in an excited voice after she heard Nadalena's suggestion.

"If I ever become a famous explorer, you can be sure that I'll write about this moment in my memoirs," the blue haired princess said while flashing her typical cat-like grin; not at her conversation partner but at the vast blue skies overhead.

"Anyway, do you have plans for lunch today? If not, would you like to come with me to the garden?" Seyrun said while straightening her back, stretching like a cat in the morning sun. "A few first years asked me already, but if you are free, I can find a way to continue our conversation later. It's so rare for us to be able to have such a carefree talk, I don't want to lose this chance," she added before sighing wistfully.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

@Noxx

What @Lonewolf685 said. You can put it here just like everyone else, it would be more convenient for us this way.

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

Hm, just a thought...but is burying people alive actually an instant kill? All things considered, I would imagine that our characters are strong enough to blast through dirt fairly easily. Along a similar vein of thought, an unblockable attack doesn't necessarily equate to an undodgeable attack, nor does it mean it's a fatal attack.

@ERode

Some of them may be strong enough for that, but earth is heavy and you can get stuck pretty easily if you aren't really, really super strong. Most of the characters are at top human capacities and that's no where near enough to wrench themselves from an early entombing.

A completely unblockable attack from an opponent that can phase thought the ground and other solid objects can lead to some pretty one-sided fights, cheap fights indeed.

Lastly, Iron maidens would cause massive damage to pretty much any of the characters in the RP with seemingly no good way to avoid if they are combined with some of those other avatars.

Just picture Iron Maiden, plus entombing, plus death hacking at you while you suffocate slowly and bleed to death. This is the kind of thing I see and that I can't allow to happen.

The magical girls are strong, but none of them are super strong or super durable if it's not one of their specific abilities. Just much better than an normal person, or even a top athlete, but not super human.