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18 days ago
Current Noble Arms is now either four years old, or three years and eleven months. The third thread had lasted for more than one year.
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1 mo ago
New Interest Check, everybody!
2 mos ago
My Roleplay, Noble Arms: The ASEAN War, will reach its 4th year in June or July. It's been a long journey.
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2 mos ago
Despite its massive flaws, my RP, Noble Arms: The ASEAN War, is still one of the longest ongoing RPs in RPGuild - It turns 4 years old in July and the current thread itself is more than a year old.
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3 mos ago
On 4/14/2026 (on my end), my RP, Noble Arms: The ASEAN War, is now three years and ten months old, and the current thread is one year and four months.
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@Gisk, Accepted, post it in the Characters Tab.

@ShadowVentus, your turn now.
@Nerevarine, Accepted, move it to the Characters Tab.
@Gisk, your character?
Mikhail Chekhov

Mikhail's first reaction at learning the (presumed) identity of his tormentor was to begin another angry rant, even as his eyes betrayed the shock and fear that would normally come with such a revelation.

"Excuse me, I'm the Witch?!" Mikhail said to 'Ashcroft' (the quotation marks were if this was another impostor after all - No possibility can be set aside right now), "You're the one using some hocus-pocus bullshit to transport people to your own Medieval Torture Dungeon! And those pentagrams, no real pious man would bear them beside a crucifix!"

Then the full implications of 'Ashcroft's' words hit him. "Wait a second... You're referring to my efforts to reproduce that poison, aren't you? How did you find out about that, you prick?! And how did you know about Hak - Hatto-san and find out enough to use him to lure me?!"

Roused to new fury, Mikhail would shout, "You've been stalking Hatto-san and who knows how many students as well! And knowing how much of an uptight goose you are, I know you'd want to hurt him!" He grasped the bars of his dungeon cell tighter. "Well let me make this clear, you fucking loser hypocrite - I am not going to be intimidated by you and your damn empty threats! I will escape this place and expose the truth about you before you even..." He trailed off as more implications of more words hit him, "You genuinely do want to hurt and kill Hatto-san! And me! You fucking bastard son of a bitch, you're not going to take me down so easily!"

He drew back a few steps, observing 'Ashcroft's' spear and the hand that held it in the torchlight, before gazing around at his minions. "I am Mikhail Chekhov, son of Vasily Chekhov! It'll take more than weird spears and torture implements to kill me!" Granted, that wasn't true at the very least, but he had to bluster. "So give it your best shot - Unless of course, there was a reason your minions didn't tear me apart right away, or stick me into those torture machines?"

A sudden realization of more plausibilities, "You're turning me into bait of some sort, right? Or are assembling a 'collection' of students you don't like so you can torture and kill them all at once! Well it won't work, your plans won't work!"
@Shiyonichi, You can post your chars on the Characters Tab now.
Jack is literally meant to be a Jack of a trades with inclination towards healing. I think a that’s just a wording choice problem on my part. He doesn’t have the formal training to be the best, it just that he was taught through necessity to at least dabble in everything. Basically he’s not going to have the raga level spells for any magic with the exception of cure, but he’ll have at least base level magics, with a few ra level of spells in Fire, Ice, Thunder, and Barrier. Due to those being the most used besides cure.

Basically, Jack is a solo post apocalyptic survivor, which is why he has so many skills, since in a situation like that, not knowing how to do something could be the difference in life and death. At the same time he doesn’t have many masteries due to not having a formal education in anything.

And I’m not avoiding it, I just had to go to sleep and didn’t have the time to correct myself.

And I don’t know if it’s my wording but I thought the notes indicated that it that would be the case.


Ah, I see. Well, sometimes, what's clear to you might not be clear to other people/readers, which is where the issue comes from.
@Shiyonichi, Double-post and further addition: I know I permitted powerful characters, but Jack is good at everything and has no weaknesses and being a master of *all* Magic is both vague and overpowered. I know he's meant to be a shonen protagonist, but this is an RP that is meant to fit multiple characters and having one PC be able to do everything gives the others nothing to do but be his support.
@Shiyonichi, Can you resize it when you have access to your computer, then? And also make sure that the images are underneath, not beside, the 'Appearance' marker?

Then can you add a sentence to Jack and Reina's biographies saying that more of their biographies will be revealed in the RP itself? Note that when you are available on Discord, I still need to talk to you about their backstories in PMs so that the latter won't contradict my own plot secrets.

Other than that, I know grammar and spelling can be hard, but can you make an effort to fix things anyway?
@Shiyonichi, Sorry, double-post.
@Shiyonichi, Can you make the images smaller, extend the bios into three paragraphs of five lines each or the equivalent, and correct various spelling and grammar errors?
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