Lord Wraith

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You say replacement, I say upgrade :P

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I like the CFL.

*ducks*

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No issues here, though I am curious to see how Arthur Curry/Orin could fit into it if a player were so inclined.

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@Sloth I prefer Tim anyways. That Jason kid was a rotten egg.

@Nightrunner

I prefer Chinese.

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@GreenGrenade, @Gowi, all good to go on my end.

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Both, I guess. Like you said, there's some stuff here and there in your posts and others - run-on's, repeating certain words, purple prose - that people tend not to see until they're pointed out. There's a lot of stuff in my writing I didn't catch until an editor called me on it (and who keeps calling me on it) and there's probably stuff I'm still not seeing. Like the fact I wrote stuff three times (four times including the last).

@Agent Orange

I would personally approach as if someone asks for critique, go for it or if something is preventing your comprehension of the post. Otherwise most of what you mention above is just nitpicking and unless asked to be corrected will potentially upset and drive away writers. Most people on the Guild even in advanced are doing this for fun or as a hobby.

Battle of the Leviathans (X-Men/Hunger Games RP)

GreenGrenade and I wrote our post as being on the train already.

Well at least in the train, the trip is still in progress.

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Ditto to the above.

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@Gowi No qualms from me.

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@Morden Man

Lets not blow our tops about this.