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Reluctantly retired roleplayer.

Except when I'm not.

Why are you here when you should be writing posts?

You can edit a bad draft, but you cannot edit a blank page.

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In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
My first post is feeling exceptionally boring. Yay. But I think I'm halfway through. I'm not sure I've got a reason for him to react to David, but I'm hoping going after him immediately isn't necessary.


Nope it's not. Feel free to build to it over a couple posts.

Fixed some things up, added a skills section and spruced up the motivation section. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done.


You're still missing one teeny tiny thing that would belong in your notes section. Not sure if you forgot it because it sounded like you realized what it was earlier.

@Lord Wraith
Is there an appeal process to fix what is wrong?


Unfortunately as I stated before in order to stick within the original amount of slots that the RP is tailored for, not everyone was going to make it through the character reviews. As much as I liked the concept of your character, the spelling, punctuation and grammatical error were too numerous to over look in your CS. Furthermore they were consistent in your provided sample.

I do thank you both for applying and for your patience but I'm afraid we do have to stay firm on that declination.
In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
@Lord Wraith Hopefully I'll be over there soon


Yes definitely looking forward to getting things on the move!
In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
The roster is currently updated with all characters in the character tab and Miles who isn't.
In The New Frontier: A Marvel/DC One Universe RP → 10 yrs ago Forum: Advanced Roleplay
@Roosan by posting a CS

-laughs at how funny he is-


Funny enough for a triple post?
In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
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Got it. Seems like I just was in a rush to get to the backstory with ideas piling up that I completely overlooked chunks of cs at a time. I'll update in a little bit after eating something. Thanks


Sounds good.

@Lord Wraith I hope that works. I can always re-do another section, but it seemed to me her bio didn't fit with how I was portraying her. So I hope that clears that up. She has a lot going on that I didn't put to words, which was my own fault.


I definitely think it goes a long in helping shape Anastasia.
In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
@Lord Wraith Duuuuuuuh. Gawd Wraith, get it together.


I really like the new additions to the CS. Once I go over it with Stein, one of us will get back to you with an official verdict.
In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Hey could I get a little clarification on what the cs needs boosted? I'm gonna put what I have for now in the cs thread and I'll edit whenever I get any feedback.


Just trust me that if you read through the character creation rules it'll become crystal clear.
In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Ok I re-did her bio to give her a bit more color to her past and why she is more about the day-to-day. I wanted to leave it a bit open-ended because I think she will grow more as a person as we go on. If there is anything else I need, like if you want me to highlight what makes her tick so she isn't a Mary Sue, let me know.


Did you post the sheet twice? The one I've linked on the OP hasn't been edited since 12 days ago.

I should be wearing my glasses.
In Wraith's Little Workshop of Horrors → 10 yrs ago Forum: Character Sheets
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In The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis → 10 yrs ago Forum: Casual Roleplay
Also I should note, any one who's accepted can go ahead and post if they wish. The IC is up and open.
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