Lord Wraith

Wraith's Little Workshop of Horrors

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U N I V E R S A L ™ (Accepting New Players!)

Just means we need to get back on point.

@The Kid Lantern

And as far away from politics as possible.

Until the New Athens' Civil War happens anyways.

UNIVERSAL ™ iCheck [OC superhero Build-A-Universe]

Archetype: The Evil Monarch
Name: Dave
Alias: My boss
Age: 65
Powers: Being an asshole
Weaknesses: Vacations
Alignment: villain
Personality: full, of, nothing, but, shit
Appearance: Best left to the imagination

@Jotunn Draugr

Quality sheet there.

The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis

Also @Lord Wraith That's soooo weird, I don't remember saying your pending character could post ICly.

@Stein

The power has gone to his head. Run for your lives!

U N I V E R S A L ™ (Accepting New Players!)

Unless Aro has actually been an alternative account for KL all along! Dun Dun Dun!

The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis

I'll get a post up by the end of the week! :)

Damn Wraith stole my speech colour! D:

@Natty

I can change it haha

The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis

Out of Continuity

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^{"Can you feel the darkness, is all around. Shadows burns at your mind, fire in the sky. Can you hear the night?"}

ᒪ ᗩ ᖇ I ᔕ ᔕ ᗩ | T ᕼ ᕮ ᔕ O ᑌ ᑎ ᗪ

^{May 2016 - One Night After The Explosion}

The candle light flickered in the darkness of the apartment. The power outages across the city had rendered the entire district in the dark, not even the street lamps outside where lit. The silence from the street below was deafening, barely a car had drove by since the explosion had rocked the city yesterday. A tense still hung over the apartment as the set of eyes stared intently at the woman across from him.

"I hate to do this, but I'm afraid I have no choice." The voice began as he reached forward.

"No, you don't have to do that, c'mon I'm begging you here." The female replied, her voice quivering slightly as the male made his move.

"Sorry..." The voice said with a chuckle as the cards were laid on the table. "Pick up eight El."

"C'mon Harley! Why do you do this to me?" Ellara asked with a mock groan as she reached towards the center of the table. Picking up the required cards from the pile at the center of the table, Ellara nodded to Alexis. "Your son is evil."

"He gets it from you, I'm a freakin' angel." Replied Alexis as she placed her cards, eliciting a groan from Harley as the colour of the deck changed.

"C'mon, what was so bad about red?" He bemoaned.

"I don't have any." Smiling, Alexis watched as Ellara reached into her deck and placed a few cards on the table.

"I hope the power comes back on soon. I don't think the food in the fridge will keep much longer." She commented looking towards the dark kitchen.

"I think the super said he was going to get a generator running in the basement." Added Alexis as she followed Ellara's gaze to the kitchen. "Don't think I can handle eating anymore mock chicken, it's supposed to last a week, not go in two days."

"And it's suppose to be for my lunches!" Harley piped up.

"That it is buddy." Ellara said with a smile as she knocked on the table while holding up a single card. "Uno."

"You bitch!" Alexis exclaimed with a light punch to Ellara's arm.

"Mommy said a bad word!" Harley yelled pointing at Alexis as she gasped upon realizing what had come out of her mouth.

"You hear nothing child. Now stop her!" Alexis said as placed a card on the pile.

"I don't have anything!" Cried Harley as he threw a random card on the deck.

"Thank you Harley." Ellara said smugly as she placed her final card on the pile. "And I believe that's a win for me."

"You bitch!" Harley said, parroting his mother from moments ago.

"HARLEY!" Scolded Alexis.

"What?" He asked innocently, "How come you can say it and I can't?"

"I... will have to get back to you on that one." Alexis said with a slight pause. "But what I do know is that it's time for you to get to bed. We may not have power but you have school tomorrow."

"Night Harley!" Called Ellara as she leaned back in her chair. "Hey Lex, I'm going to go out. See if I can't find a burger joint open. You want me to bring you back anything?"

"Maybe just some fries?" Alexis called back.

"Can do." Replied Ellara as she grabbed her leather jacket and headed out the door. Locking the door behind her, Ellara took a few steps before pausing and turning back to the apartment. Testing the door knob, she put her shoulder into the door, ensuring it didn't budge. Satisfied, Ellara made a move to walk away before checking the door one last time and heading towards the stairs. Although numerous cars were damaged in the explosion, it was primarily the state of emergency keeping people off the road. That part didn't bother Ellara too much especially since over the past year she'd been putting her fists into the face of Larissa's scum.

Things were changing in both Larissa and Ellara. She wasn't nearly as timid as she had been before meeting Alexis. Perhaps all she needed ten years ago was a friend. But Ellara was moving in the opposite direction of Larissa, the city herself was going down. Crime had been on a steady rise and no doubt the explosion had prompted several sprees across the Greater Larissa Area. Ellara had even heard rumors of a re-emergence of the Harbour Kings' gang. Jumping over the door of her GTO, Ellara pushed the key into the ignition and turned as the engine roared to life. Without most of the modern electronics, the old Pontiac was unaffected by the explosion that had rocked the city. Putting the car into gear, Ellara drove out of the garage and into the night.

The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis

O-kay! I've added a bit more meat onto my previously bare-bones sheet, and added the thing that Dirge totally didn't forget. ;) If this isn't enough to get me accepted, please let me know what needs to be fixed so I can fix it post-haste!

@Tojin

I really hate to do this, but as with Knighthawk I'm afraid the declination has to stick. With the other players taking their acceptances, all the predetermined slots have been filled. If any players drop out down the road I can give you a shout but for the time being I'm afraid we have no more room.

The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis

My first post is feeling exceptionally boring. Yay. But I think I'm halfway through. I'm not sure I've got a reason for him to react to David, but I'm hoping going after him immediately isn't necessary.

@Nemaisare

Nope it's not. Feel free to build to it over a couple posts.

Fixed some things up, added a skills section and spruced up the motivation section. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be done.

@Dirge

You're still missing one teeny tiny thing that would belong in your notes section. Not sure if you forgot it because it sounded like you realized what it was earlier.

@Lord Wraith
Is there an appeal process to fix what is wrong?

@knighthawk

Unfortunately as I stated before in order to stick within the original amount of slots that the RP is tailored for, not everyone was going to make it through the character reviews. As much as I liked the concept of your character, the spelling, punctuation and grammatical error were too numerous to over look in your CS. Furthermore they were consistent in your provided sample.

I do thank you both for applying and for your patience but I'm afraid we do have to stay firm on that declination.

The Mavericks | Neo-Genesis

@Lord Wraith Hopefully I'll be over there soon

@FantasyChic

Yes definitely looking forward to getting things on the move!