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Reluctantly retired roleplayer.

Except when I'm not.

Why are you here when you should be writing posts?

You can edit a bad draft, but you cannot edit a blank page.

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5/10.
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Oh nothing serious at all.

I just forgot I'd said I was going to make a half-pint reference in every post.


Ah, I read 'very key' at face value.

My mistake.
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EDIT:

I forgot a very key part of my post, added via edit.


I hate to be that guy.

But comparing the new edited post and the original I still had pulled up on my phone. What exactly was the edit?
It's going to be really awkward a month later when two objects make it through that early warning detection system and then another spacecraft.
Also, fascinating choice to not only have Hank Pym go full throttle into being an abuser, but to also have him be a war profiteer instead of a pacifist and already be Yellowjacket instead of Antman. Was he ever Antman, or is there a chance he'll have a reverse growth arc from his usual? Kinda surprised you didn't have him have Ultron as his weapon instead of Yellowjacket. I can see that Yellowjacket is the closer counterpart to Iron Man, but Ultron is a prime example of a weapon that only needs to fire once going badly off the rails.


I definitely think the research started there, but I flesh things out as I write, so I don't have all the answers at the moment. This is definitely a more villainous take on Pym at this point, but perhaps he'll have a redeeming arc later.

As for Ultron, that's an Avengers-level threat. So maybe, that can wait until there's actually a superhero team around.
Happy Worlds Collide World's Finest Friday Double Feature.

...to those who celebrate.
@Lord Wraith Fair enough, it's why i put something safe and generic, but i will know for next time. Pretty much was thinking "What would Jimmy write? Alliteration."

If you want me to change it, let me know.


Nah, don't worry about it for this time. Just more or less a future note.
@mattmanganon for future reference as Lionel Luthor owns the Daily Planet, I'll need any headlines run through me.
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