Memory

Myriad Reality

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*Sparks flying as our blades clash, clanging loudly. For a moment we just stand stalemated. Then I allow you to push me back, however in doing so I spin around slashing your side then kicking your chest sending an explosion of kinetic energy that sends you flying.*

@Dark Cloud

*Thrusts my blade into the ground after the impact and slows my momentum with a horrible scraping sound, leaving a deep gash in the planet's surface*

Myriad Reality

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Good effort. But enough.
*Rockets through you as if you are not even there at blinding speeds, demolishing your form again and headed straight for The Legend*

@Galaxy Raider

*A metallic object flashes from beneath the dissipating aura*

Myriad Reality

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*Glowering at you with hatred, I slam my blade into the path of the dagger. The upswing causing purple flames to erupt from the fractures in the planet and my blade. Stepping forwards I spin in a semicircle redoubling my assault with such fury it seems my rage burns the earth itself bathing it in grim flames.*

@Dark Cloud

*Slams into you and swings my blade in sync with yours, cutting a wide ravine to either side of us, filled with flames*

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*My sword is revealed in the absence of earth to have become red hot, as I continue my approach on solid blue pixelated panels that appear and disappear with each step, swinging the blade at mid range at you and sending an unstable red arc your way that quickly dissociates into smaller arcs, then themselves teleport all around you and slash you from all sides, annihilating anything in their path*

@Valiance

*They leave deep gashes in the aura, revealing my flesh beneath, healing from the blows

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*the speed and number of strikes increase tremendously, some fists dissipating as you punch through after images of my strike, allowing me to land monstrous blows unto you*

@Ignacious

*In retaliation, before the next blow lands I knock your fist away with my wrist and uses the opening to force my palm into your chest, releasing all of the stored energy in the black aura*

Myriad Reality

*Shockwaves and tremors from the battle cause my balance to falter, fury flashing in my eyes. And a low snarl echos beneath my mask, I right myself my weapon flashing as I stand upright then-*

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Why-
*The clang of my blade, now jet black sword echos as I slam the flat of square at your jaw.*
Won't-
*I slam the backswing into your chest by the hilt of the sword, fury and rage forcing my full strength to manifest. Each blow cracking the planets surface.*
YOU DIE!
*My last blow sends breaks the earth beneath us*

@Dark Cloud

*Slides backward across the surface of the planet from the force of the attack, and I throw an onyx dagger at you, propelled by the shadowy energy*

Myriad Reality

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*Dashes forward, taking wide strides toward you as the barrier drops and dragging my blade through the dirt*

@Valiance

*Stomps, causing trenches to burst open with the black energy and engulf you*

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*my head tilts upward hard and I smile, slugging you with uppercuts and hooks towards your chest and head, each connection is met with thunderous shockwaves*

@Ignacious

*Matches each strike with a blow of my own, resulting in shockwaves rocking the planet beneath us*

Myriad Reality

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*pushes my fist more and all of the magic circles overlap, creating an explosion that acts as a second, full-powered punch*

@Ignacious

*Takes the hit in order to uppercut you at the same time, releasing waves of the black aura that crumble the rocks at our feet*

Myriad Reality

Oh and if you want to edit that last one as a result, feel free. Up to you.

Myriad Reality

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*Holds my hands out in front of me as a curved blue barrier appears, reflecting the laser into several smaller lasers in random directions*

@Valiance

*Follows the attack with a burst of black spheroids that tug non-anchored surroundings into their centers*

Myriad Reality

@Memory Ah I've never done these boss like battles. I don't believe my character would give up. Also, thank you. How do I do a good job though?

@Dark Cloud

No worries. We try to keep things dynamic rather than scripted, so the fact that he's pushing doesn't mean that he's unbeatable, it just means that everyone needs to push harder =P
A lot of people struggle with showing how powerful attacks are with descriptions of how they impact the surrounding environment or visual effects that accompany them. It's a really good skill to have.

Myriad Reality

@Dark Cloud

Idk if it's any help or if this is just what you're doing with this guy, but final boss style fights in MR usually last a really long time, so a lot of back and forth posts are expected. If giving up is just what your guy would do, that's fine, but you don't have to if you don't want to. As a side note, you do an awesome job showing rather than telling with damage.