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Setting: Dark Heavy fantasy. Low tech level, their highest tech is battering rams, for military tech.


Hey, sorry but this stuck out for me.

A battering ram could literally be a log used to bash down the gate. If you meant the actual engineered thing with wheels and such, then that is different. However, if siege engineering is a thing then obviously they'd have access to at least catapults, but possibly Trebuchet which were far more advanced for the dark age siege weaponry. That would make it more fantasy because otherwise you'd date that world to pre-Roman, possibly pre-Ancient Greece, which means you'll miss out on steel smithing, armor advancement, and so on.

But you might have been going for that, in which case, carry on.
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It is, but then why have a BIO section to begin with?


A Bio section only really has a place in an RP where one's backstory will help shape future plot points. It is very important for story-driven narratives and for most RPs it is useful. For a multiuniverse RP, it isn't really all that vital unless the overall narrative is often times forcing characters to encounter their history. I have read no trace of that occurring in this RP, so therefore, I believe a Bio for this RP is not necessary.

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Because of you, I had to listen to spider dance. Now I have to listen to it again.


* Muffet does a synchronized dance with the other spiders.
@The_written_John

The difference between writing useless information that can just be left out due to lack of neccessity versus writing for an rp post is that i enjoy writing the useless detail for rping. Also, if you'd kindly stop using gifs it'd be much appreciated. It's starting to get rather annoying, and if you respond with a wall of gifs i'm going to start ignoring you.


I agree with the point he (Tyki) is trying to make.

Writing the character in IC is waaaayy more useful and better for exploring a character.
@Pirouette I'd have them notice them in my next post for sure. I thought they were up higher in orbit so thats why I sorta waited for them to come actually down. But I'll have them notice them by your next post.


They did a fly-over above the city and they were noisy. :/

Also what now? Wait for the other fleet to show up?
No one noticed my ships.... :(
BoP Fleet, Asari Transcendence
Arcadia-2
Commander Miranda Keyes


"Exiting universal jump, Ma'am."

The Transcendence was the first ship to suddenly and violently appear in the atmosphere of Arcadia-2. There was a loud crack as if a lightning bolt struck that reverberated across the farmland below and eventually reached the city that lay just on the horizon. Several more ships would appear shortly after, each with its own audible entrance to anyone and everything in range of the entry point. Even after the last shockwave of entry had swept through the land, denizens of this area could hear and feel the low rumbling of the ships' powerful engines.

"Sitrep. Where are we?" Miranda Keyes sternly called out to no individual in particular. "Earth, although I don't think this is the one we were looking for, Ma'am." Someone from the command deck called back. "Then take us out of atmosphere. Deploy all drones and sweep the planet for confirmation. Put scout teams on standby and send them out before we escape atmosphere." Miranda ordered as she leaned back in her chair, rubbing her chin quizzically as the officers and enlisted saluted with a "Yes, Ma'am!". She was sure that they had been on course for Arcadia-1 so why had they ended up elsewhere. Data was limited but they were looking for a barren Earth, not one that was still lush.

The whole fleet began a steady ascent with a trajectory that would have them fly over the nearby city in an unintentional but impressive display of power. The ships were far up in the stratosphere before they reached the city so risk of impact was just as likely as the fleet being interpreted as hostile, entirely ignoring the city. The only thing invasive was the loud rumbling of their engines as they flew overhead. It didn't take a keen eye to notice that it was a mix of ships but it would take a very keen one to notice the call to arms painted on each ship. A large black bird with a red background was printed on every ship, a symbol that most wouldn't know but the Birds of Prey were scattered and large enough that a few might.

Right as the ships had cleared the city, Pelican transports were dispatched carrying small scouting crews to follow the drones in their search for the terminal to Arcadia-1.
Okay I moved everything over. I also included tangible numbers to put into account at what strength the Birds of Prey are at. The number is more of my reminder but feel free to consult it for fun. It is focused on fleet strength but includes ground capabilities for standard troops. The numbers will change depending on the course of the RP, so expect it to go down... poor girls. :/









@Pirouette I suppose you could establish your gurls and the fleet in Arcadia-2.


Fleet enroute to Arcadia-2
So erm.... What happens now?
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