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The Twelve Labours: General Discussion

Oh, dear. Where did all this doubt that I am suddenly feeling about the readability of my entry suddenly come from? Allow me to take cover while I expect the worst for some reason. Hahahaha.

Pokémon: Start

@Delta44 Nicely posted~

Yupp! That should do nicely. Lots of reactions and different people. And we've gotten quite the set-up now. Yupp.

I'll post in a day, possibly giving Erika and Reiji time to make their post as well. But, even if they don't, the rest should still be able to get their shows on the road~

The Twelve Labours: General Discussion

My little opinions on the entries plus two short comments on my own entry. Assumes the reader has already read the entries, of course. In any case, yupp.

The Breaking

Woah. That... was beautiful. Thank you. … Alright, that is most certainly someone who has no equal, interesting take on the challenge requirements. I assume this is that he overwhelmed his ”foe”. Impressively done. I like this. It feels so... natural. And yet, yeah... it had to end like that, didn't it. Too bad, really. Oh, well.

Very, very nicely done. So much charm in this piece. I like it. Thanks for letting me read it.

Thomas' Last Proof

... Woh. Impressive. That was somewhat intense. You made a debate intense without actually writing them speaking, and then the stakes increased. It was fairly obvious what would happen, given the labour, but it was still intense. Nicely done. I'd say you accomplished the labour's requirements flawlessly. Well done.

Starbound

Hm. I wonder if I made it unnecessarily long? … Eh! That's how long it became when I wrote it!

I did want it to end some other way, with the main character triumphing over the villain somehow after her death and resurection, buuuuut... That would have made the story unfathomably longer, and I didn't want to torture the judges by actually writing that long story! XD

The Dragon Queen

And that... appears to be a way to complete this challenge through the mortality route while still retaining a positive ending. I like it. Well done. The action felt a little like it was just there so she could be killed, it didn't really feel like the bad guy's success was justified, but eh, details. His motivations were as basic evil as it could get, too. Eh, I can't say too much on that front, with all likelihood. Regardless. I like it. Guess we'll see what Terminal says now, but I think you nailed it pretty well. Haha.

An Unfulfilled Challenge

... Alright. So, avoiding conflict with her sister, Ariana was forced to be exiled and then live a normal life. Yeah, that accomplishes one of the means of completing this labour. Though, we'll see what Terminal says. I spent the first half of the entry confused, though you cleared that up and I now know what was happening. But yeah, I didn't really have the time to enjoy what was going on. Now afterwards, I appreciate the situation you set up, the entry became better in my eyes after I was done with it compared to while I was reading it. I wonder what that means about the entry itself? Hm. Oh, well. It's rather nice, somewhat clever way of accomplishing the goal. Wonder if she's Mary Sue enough. Haha. In any case. I will say ”well done”. So. Well done.

Pokémon: Start

@Delta44 Looking forward to it~

@Rune_Alchemist I like it. You make it feel like the encounter with Ewan here was part of fate and not at all just the remnants after the rest had picked. Well posted~

@Pikmin Eye@Eklispe@Lasrever Teh-heh, there's actually enough in there that I could respond now. Maybe Martin/Dawkin wants to respond to Abigail suddenly wanting to join in, but otherwise, it quite feels ready to be posted and me to respond to~ Haha~

Of course, the choice of how complete it is relies entirely on you guys' opinion~

Pokémon: Start

@Pirouette If you're okay with that, yes. I mean, any and all of you are free to object at any time and we can see what we can do, but if you're fine with Vivia, then yes, you're fighting Vivia~

@Rune_Alchemist Alright~ I look forward to it~

@Keyblade87 I'M HAPPY TO SEE YOU'RE ON IT. XD
You might have lost the privilege to pick whom you're fighting, but the one who's left appears to be Joshua, if you don't mind that and nobody else minds that. Haha. You're all probably going to be able to fight anyone later anyways~

Pokémon: Start

So. Yeah. Um. Those who feel ready can post, if you feel you need permission for that, with whatever ideas you have in mind at this point, I just wanted this little discussion, if you're doing collabs or whatever, really. If anyone is feeling unsure about anything or waiting for someone else, do report that here, because that's the best way of dealing with it. Myself I'll post either when there's a bit more to respond to or when a certain amount of time has gone.

The Twelve Labours: General Discussion

Entry sent in. I'm mildly proud of it. I don't consider it my best work ever, but I'm mildly proud of it.

Pokémon: Start

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docs.google.com/document/d/1265fwmv-4Y..

... For that potential collab, will this do? Now, if you do start writing in it, remember to save often. I put it so anyone who has the link can edit, so random people can come in and do things, but I did feel that it was the most convenient so I didn't have to add the names of those who can edit. Then again, if you wish to do that, then I suppose you can PM me your emails or something and I can edit so that only you can edit... Yeah, pretty much. If you're going to use that, that is, I'm currently unsure of what exactly you're all thinking. I'm just trying to be helpful by providing means to an end. Haha.

Pokémon: Start

@Pirouette Okay, haha.

@Pyromaniacwolf@Delta44 *debates if posting the link directly is a good idea or not oh, well*

Like this? The link Discord provided me to invite people. I'm not experienced with Discord, so I don't actually know how to use it, but that's what it gave me.

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discord.gg/zk5MpSk

Pokémon: Start

Ptah. Okay, that week-end turned busier than I intended anyways! Let's see what's going on, here!

@Eklispe@Pikmin Eye@Lasrever Oh, my. Alright. So you're doing that. That sounds like a lot of fun, yes. Tihi. Okay. Um. Collabs are difficult, but if it's only between 3 or 4 people (are you including me? Haha) then it could work.

How is you guys experience with making collaborations, then? Do you two agree with Eklispe on that point? I've known collabs made over PMs and over Google Docs... Hm. What do you say?

@Pirouette Ops, looks like I got one of your picks involved in a tripple battle. Haha.
So, is Vivia alright with you, then?

@Pyromaniacwolf Teh-heh. Alright, you made the first move. I like it. Nicely posted. Let's see. Ren can probably post now, too, to possibly join in if she wants to, assuming no more people intends to get involved in this battle.

As for communications. I do like here. But, if you guys want to use something, then Discord could do the trick. Should I set such a room up, then?

@Pink Madness So you choose Cathia. Alright. This is entirely alright, and I can see this turning amusing. Okay. So, would you like to have this battle alone now or with some more joining in? Haha. Nicely posted, anyway.

Alright, that leaves...

Ewan and Joshua, somehow, then. Unless we replace an opponent to let Dawkin fight Ewan, but eh. Haha. … So, @Rune_Alchemist, would you prefer any of these two?

I do need to leave one opponent behind for @Keyblade87, should he return with a new computer...

Let's see. I wonder if I forgot anything. But yes, if you have any desires which so far have gone unfulfilled, voice them, and we can see what we can do. Haha.