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Black Lily [High Casual]

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Black Lily [High Casual]

Thanks for setting a deadline. Now I'll find the motivation to actually get off my ass and do it 👌 no sarcasm

I was about 30%-ish through my first app and I lost it, so I'm starting from scratch, but I'll get it in on time for sure

Elimination of the Supers!

You can't create all that build-up and then just leave us hanging

I Wanna Hear Your Opinions On The Different Wrting Levels/Forums.

I think he was talking about "collab posts" where several people enter a PiratePad room or download a Google Doc and then all work together on writing the same post. In theory we do it to give everyone a simultaneous chance to respond to the scene but more often it serves to muddle together several incompatible writing styles until the piece seems to have no clear "voice" at all outside the matter-of-factness of the events happening therein.

Share your technique, and critique.

Comma splices are worse than Hitler. That is all.

Edit: Nah, I'll expound eventually. My two biggest writing peeves both revolve around punctuation.

I Wanna Hear Your Opinions On The Different Wrting Levels/Forums.

I just didn't see the point in spouting points already made at someone who already conceded to them:

While I agree with most of the rest, I must say I respectfully disagree [with this passage].

HaleyTheRandom

Your philosophy is different, it would seem.

RPGC #19: Beware The Metal Age - Prompt and Entries

Notice there's never any birds around anymore ... used to be birds. Singin' in the morning to wake you up. Singin' at night, lookin' for girl birds to meet up with. Kinda sad.

I Wanna Hear Your Opinions On The Different Wrting Levels/Forums.

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And the worst side of free roleplay are uninspiring posts condensed into one or two sentences.

This argument goes for literally any of the sections -- and at that point becomes a non-argument. What you are saying here is much less an argument than 'bad writing is bad writing.'

@Odin

And Haley already agreed with those. Pointing them out is a tautology.

Black Lily [High Casual]

Yeah, yeah. As long as that sort of villainous role will see conflict, I'm eager to try something a little different.

But middle-management are the worst kind of people...

@Stern Algorithm

I know; they're the everyday villain

Black Lily [High Casual]

I was thinking more logistical stuff — keeping the party fed, maintaining its finances, grooming its public image ...

An army marches on its stomach yadda yadda