Stryder BC
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Neziul
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Pathei Mathos
Oso
@Draku69
Okay, i am going to try and say this in the nicest, least condescending way possible. Just note, I am not trying to cause offence. I don't think you have ability to take part in a Advanced RP. I don't say this lightly. I have spent the best part of day mulling this over in my head and it is the only conclusion I can draw. Your character just seems... flat, two-dimensional, there is nothing there that just grabs me like it does with other peoples characters.
I do have other concerns. Usually when i look at potential RPers i go through and look at their previous posts, chat through discord or PMs about their character. We work out the kinks in the character and we talk a little bit about their development. I don't get that from you. It makes me think you aren't invested in your own character, maybe a creative spark just isn't there. Every other application has come along with a barrage of messages and PMs about ideas and history and lore, and it is nothing short of amazing the level of commitment these people have. Letting you in on this character sheet, sorta feels like I am letting everyone else down.
I haven't even gotten the main point, which is I have high expectations of the second-in-command characters. They are just as important as the Leaders, and a integral part of the story. So i a lot stricter with my requirements for those positions. I also personally don't think you could write at the level required for a advanced RP. I don't have any evidence to suggest you do. Even when I went through all of your posts, I couldn't actually find a IC post. And you have been here for over 1500 days. You made 55 posts in 1500 days. To me, that spells flight risk. And that is a risk i am unwilling to take.
Sorry if it sounds all negative, but on this occasion i am going to have to decline your character sheet.
Okay, i am going to try and say this in the nicest, least condescending way possible. Just note, I am not trying to cause offence. I don't think you have ability to take part in a Advanced RP. I don't say this lightly. I have spent the best part of day mulling this over in my head and it is the only conclusion I can draw. Your character just seems... flat, two-dimensional, there is nothing there that just grabs me like it does with other peoples characters.
I do have other concerns. Usually when i look at potential RPers i go through and look at their previous posts, chat through discord or PMs about their character. We work out the kinks in the character and we talk a little bit about their development. I don't get that from you. It makes me think you aren't invested in your own character, maybe a creative spark just isn't there. Every other application has come along with a barrage of messages and PMs about ideas and history and lore, and it is nothing short of amazing the level of commitment these people have. Letting you in on this character sheet, sorta feels like I am letting everyone else down.
I haven't even gotten the main point, which is I have high expectations of the second-in-command characters. They are just as important as the Leaders, and a integral part of the story. So i a lot stricter with my requirements for those positions. I also personally don't think you could write at the level required for a advanced RP. I don't have any evidence to suggest you do. Even when I went through all of your posts, I couldn't actually find a IC post. And you have been here for over 1500 days. You made 55 posts in 1500 days. To me, that spells flight risk. And that is a risk i am unwilling to take.
Sorry if it sounds all negative, but on this occasion i am going to have to decline your character sheet.