Sep

Crisis: Mars! [Full unless you're Brilliant]

Hey @Sep, can I use a different template? It's more detailed and it helps me write better. I'll make sure to address all parts of yours.

@Peaceless

Go for it.

Crisis: Mars! - A super power RP

@Sep yo bro, put the OOC link in your signature

@Peaceless

My bad, done it now.

Star Wars - Scum and Villainy

Tony sat looking at the ship just sitting there, by itself. Tors comment was completely unhelpful. "Yeah, but we're not in a standard ship ourselves. We'll be fine. Though I have no idea what we're supposed to be doing. We didn't get a full set of instructions, remember?" He sat there tapping his fingers on the dash of the ship. He then just flicked the comm switch trying to open a channel. On it appeared a Zeltron woman, a recognisable one too. "Hey Tony, Tor.""Fierfek, why is it you Dela?""What do you mean?""We save your life one time, and you turn up everywhere. Did you not get enough of Tor before you tried to kill us both?"

She gave the camera a wink. "Tor can visit me anytime.""Yeah, great. Fun times, what do you want?""I'm here to give you a ride-""Let me stop you right there.""I mean I'm here to take you to your job.""That's better.""Yeah I got this ship about a month or two back, jealous?""Not really, I could run rings around you and still beat your ass.""Is that ship envy I hear?""Get to the point Dela.""I run people to the prison, I was persuaded to carry your ship down to the planet through the shield. Once you're there, on your own. But I can at least get you to the surface, so are you ready yet or-""Give us a second." Tony flicked off the comm unit spinning his chair around to face the others.

"Whose up for a terrible idea?"

Crisis: Mars! - A super power RP

"Another incident on Mars today when-""...U.S.F Confirms another incident-""Announced five missing, presumed dead-""We simply have more questions than answers at this time-""... No official comment on the issue-""... Man who can breathe fire."
"I can't believe it. Those bastards did it."

The Year is 2200, the 17th generation of colonists on the Red Planet Mars. Once inhospitable thanks to, rudementary, terraforming techniques now a inhabitable and severly profitable red planet. However after roughly one hundred and seventy years of nothing but building and mining something strange has happened. People have begun to perform amazing feats. Create fire seemingly from thin air, read minds, create illusions and so many more abilities seem to exist. The problem is not everyone can control it, and with the loss of innocent life the United planets Security Force has stepped in to take control of the incident. Now Aire is on lock down, nobody in nobody out except members of the U.S.F and powered people are being hunted down.

It's time for answers, why is this happening? Why to only certain people?

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Throughout the course of the RP there will be people with powers, or gaining powers trying to avoid the forces of the U.S.F - United planetary Security Force and as such imprisonment or even death. Though what will you do with these powers is up to you. Try to become a super villain, hero or just find out why this is happening it is up to you. Though be careful, you're being watched and while there will be empaphizers trying to help you there is still the ongoing investigation to find out what happened...

Whose side will you be on?

OOC

More information in the OOC, or just ask here!

Crisis: Mars! [Full unless you're Brilliant]

LIST OF ACCEPTED CHARACTERS ON THE OOC

Watcher

Name:Watcher
Age:Unknown
Gender:Presumed Male
Ability:Presumed to have Precognative Abilities.
Personal Skills:Unknown
Personal Weaknesses: Unknown
History:Unknown.

Ryan Wells

Name:Ryan Wells

Age:29

Gender:Male

Equipment:Protective mining gear

Ability: Elemental - Control over Stone

-Abilities Strengths: His skin has hardened, and possibly his internal organs too. Right now it's a pale marble like substance that takes a saw or several bullets to break. Though he fears it is getting harder. Also as long as he is connected to the ground or some form of stone he can manipulate it, erecting walls or pulling the ground up to hit someone. If he is in the air or not touching the ground he cannot control it, he also cannot control any earth once it is already airborne. He is stronger than the average man, coupled with the fact he is a recent immigrant to mars it makes him a formidable opponent.

-Abilities Weaknesses: If he isn't touching the ground he can't control it, his thicker skin and stone composition make him far slower than he would usually be. He is also more vulnerable to the possibility of shattering with enough force. He is also far heavier than he used to be, and even with Mars Gravity that's starting to take it's toll on where he walks.

Personal Skills: Brute force and ignorance: has always been physically strong, boxer, experience with mining equipment, intiricate knowledge of Aires mines, connections within the less scrupulous areas of Aire.

Personal Weaknesses: Stubborn: Slow to accept change, definitely not a tactician, not much for out of the box thinking, no real life experience other than working in mines.

History: Ryan, unlike his younger sister. Took after their father. Their father being a boxer and a miner, just like he turned out to be. Originally from Earth the family moved to Mars when the Lorne Corporation required more miners in Aire, and rather than hiring on Mars it was more beneficial to move people from Earth with the fact that they would have extreme strength in the lesser atmosphere. Not much happened interestingly in his life throughout school, he flunked a bit and started boxing taking a real shining to a sport where he could solve problems by hitting things. It was during this time that him and his sister began to drift apart, his sister on the academic path and him on the path of a fighter and a miner they had little in common and fought more often than not on how things should be done.

After school his dad set him up with a Job in the same mines as him, and it was here he worked during the day. At night he started fighting professionally, the fights began to earn him more money than the mines. It was always of interest for people to watch boxers from Earth fight, they were always more serioues. The blows harder which made the whole fight more interesting to watch. It was during one of these fights, years later. That the incident happened, nobody noticed it of course.

There was no explosion, no flash of light. It just happened, Ryans skin began hardening in the middle of a fight and as his opponent punched him his hand was broken on contact as that piece of skin on his chest instantly hardened into a red stone. From there the stone spread, most of his body into a pale stone. Not knowing what happened people began to panic including him, he couldn't tell what happened next for next thing he knew he was in a prison cell within the Keep. Still feeling himself changing, ever so slowly.

Cassie Wells

Name:Cassandra "Cassie" Wells

Age:24

Gender:Female

Equipment:Nothing in particular

Ability: Spacial - Teleportation

-Abilities Strengths:Can teleport from one place to another.

-Abilities Weaknesses:The greater the distance, the more exhausted she becomes. Repeated small teleports also exhaust her quickly. She has to have a) Enough energy to teleport to the place (Or she'll fall sort), b) Able to see the place she's going or c) A memory of where she's going (This is risky as it may have changed or her memory could be distorted) or d) A strong connection with someone in that place (Dangerous for the same reasons as above)

Personal Skills: Well educated, tactical thinker, patient, charismatic.

Personal Weaknesses: While she has the perks of being the complete oppisite of her brother that has its flaws too. While she is well educated she doesn't have much real life experience outside of being an intern at a lab, and while she is a recent immigrant to Mars due to a lack of exercise her muscles have suffered fatigue to the level that she is just as strong as any of the 17th generation Martians. While also patient she will be slow to act, tyring to plan ahead as soon as possible.

History: Her life is the opposite side of her brothers, studious and sticking in school. It was throughout school that the muscle fatigue kicked in and she lost the advantage she had over anybody else. Her body adapting to the lower gravity though she wasn't a fan of working out and she didn't see the problem anyway. She wasn't her brother, she didn't need to punch problems to solve them. This realization is what set them apart, and why they began to drift apart.

The constant rivalry, when she finally left to go to university they just grew more and more distant. Rarely seeing one another throughout her degree even whenever she returned home on holidays she never sought him out. When the incident happened it was actually during an attack. On her way home on a friday night from working lat in the lab she was cornered by a group of thugs which was a rare occurence especially in that part of the city. By reflex when one went to grab her she just thought about being safe back in her appartment, and in a flash she was there. Though the exertion exhausted her, passing out on the floor.

Since then she has been contacted by the mysterious Watcher trying to discover the source of these powers though recently she has discovered that her brother has been pegged for experimentation within the keep, and its time that changed.

Crisis: Mars! [Full unless you're Brilliant]

I would list cartoon constructs as an elemental power

@Weird Tales

Throw something together (Just the bare bones) so I know what it is exactly you're trying to do and then we'll see. I could be having a completely different view in my head to what you're saying. Even if you just put together the Abilities part of the CS we'll see what's going on.

Crisis: Mars! [Full unless you're Brilliant]

Cool - cool :)

@Unknown100

After being awake and thinking about things we've went to going into a dome, just so you're aware. It'll be a pretty big dome, but very lightweight and durable at the same time. I was just reading and thinking about it and my previous answer didn't make sense.

Star Wars: Rebel Scum | Recruiting because of bailouts.

If this RP stays alive, it would make a lot of sense for Thanner to be on the slicer team. He would have insider knowledge about the Imperial networks.

@ZeusTheMoose

Do you have no faith on it continuing? :P

All RPs have the FLASH when the IC starts and then they kinda slow down.

Crisis: Mars! [Full unless you're Brilliant]

Working on my sheets now.

Crisis: Mars! [Full unless you're Brilliant]

Well, all this can seem a little confusing, but I'm sure I'll understand it all better in time :)
I have a few questions though.

1. Characters can breath outside right?

2. Does the city have rich, regular and poor sections?

3. What's the most normal kind of protection on the streets? Soldiers?

4. Can we control and make dialog for NPC's? Because that often makes for the most dynamic fight sequences and for good storytelling.

I will also take the time to say that I can see you have put a lot of work into this. *applause*
I also like that the military seem to really be able to put up a fight against people with powers. I always like when NPC's have strength too, because fights are more dynamic and exciting then.

@Unknown100

1) Thats actually something I meant to cover. Each of the three cities(Though we will all be starting in Aire) Will have a dome of breathable air.

2) Yes, again something I must have forgotten to put in (And will put in the OP later I am working on something IRL atm) towards the centre, and the actual space port will be the "nicer" area as that's the first bit people really see. The further out from the centre you go out and the closer you get to the wall and the industrial district the worse it gets, kind of like in real life.

3) Indeed, that's why they're the "security" force ;) With a little X3 backup (Check the robotic section of the USF)

4) You can indeed make Dialogue for NPCs. I mean if I need to make someone uber important I'll make sure it's known how important they are.

In terms of your applause thankee :P

and in terms of the military handling powers, expect it to change as it progresses. As it is the standard patrols will be X3s and Soldiers and there will be some Enforcers walking around but don't expect to see any Hunters or Pacification Units yet.