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@KawaiiKyoukoTsaagan Mori sounds like the most Rider-worthy NP to me. The ghost-soldiers would be cool too, but if you wanna have ghost soldiers riding the horses, they should probably deal mental interference damage or no damage at all so as to avoid ripping off Iskander.
I'll just roll with Benkei. or Fionn.


A Fionn is fine too.
Most Thematically Locusta goes with Albert.

Because... Both are connoisseurs of their arts.




Locusta and Albert after unintentionally melting small animals into goop while testing a new kind of horse tranquilizer.
@Turboshitter Yeah.

Speaking of, the most thematically compatible Servants for my character are likely to be Rider Genghis or Caster Daedalus (tho tbh I like Caster better with Oly). So I'm gonna go ahead and preemptively ping @KawaiiKyouko

EDIT: Actually, either Lancer would come in third, now that I think about it.


From what you told me, I think Genghis would be best. Unless @Cu Chulainn decides to play Benkei after all.
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Oh really? I didn't know that, but if I gave it a rank... Probably D-rank? It was supposed to be something grander but I didn't have time to put the full thing in mind out so its just awkwardly there... (Tbh, I'll just remove it)

Edit: @Turboshitter
The idea I had in my head was that Ayondale was an ambitious person climbing up the hierarchy of the Clocktower, burning people where he needed to so that he could get where he is today. I planned him to be a previous student of his from ages ago perhaps not a 'rebellious student' but more grudge that has been held on for some time similar to what Sonja might have. Combine with several courses that Robert took at the Clocktower before Ayondale, I think it would match up. Of course, this is counting that Ayondale himself was a teacher 10 years ago...

(Although I can knock several years if you want, I'd prefer him to be in his late 20s at minimum however. I do see some age anomalies in his backstory but that may be just me)


Late 20s is still too old, I'm afraid. Red Faction is made up of current students, not graduates or dropouts, none of whom are near Kairi's age. The Clocktower is, as far as we know, an institution of learning for those who are highschool through university level. Please rework him to be 15-24.

@GreyThink you'll be done with your Master some time in the next few days?
@vancexentanLancer is tentatively accepted so long as we're all in agreement on the issue of Divinity. If we're not, he can use Benkei. Rider should also be accepted as soon as we work out the kinks.
@DuckfieldA mage's origin is the core of their personality what they would default to if they got rid of everything else. For example I'd say Shirou's would be 'Hero'.


Actually it's "Sword", but that was after it was forcibly altered by Avalon.
@TurboshitterTurbo just to remind you you still haven't made albert's bio. Also we should start assigning or having people pick who is teaming up with who.


About that. I'll PM you, just one sec.
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Alright, srs tiem now. I agree with much of what has been said so far, namely that Magic Resistance of a modest or low Rank should be added, Bow and Arrow Creation is redundant given Servants seemingly being able to spawn arrows, daggers, and most non-NP weapons out of nothing, Military Tactics or Clairvoyance being good replacements for the previous, and her "OUR ARROWS WILL BLOT OUT THE SUN!" NP running on her Master's prana being a terrible idea. Those are all things that you should fix, and thankfully, they're relatively easy things to patch.

However, there are two other issues I'd like to add. First is that instead of giving this Rider-class Servant a horsey NP like some have mentioned, you gave her an NP that's basically Achilles' Dueling Field except it's at a lower rank and therefore probably less costly to use despite doing pretty much the same thing (also fuck Achilles and his OP bullshit, seriously). I would suggest ditching that NP and replacing it with the mount NP that has so far been discussed. Second is that I think she could honestly stand to have higher AGL and MAG rather than STR and END, since Rider's whole job is to go fast and spam Anti-Army NPs that guzzle mana like a wizard with the shits.
Ugh, my schedule is getting cramped so I can't put anymore time into my character sheet so I hope he is fine. Personally, I hate his spell section as there were many drafts that I trashed and finally gave up on a easier concept.



>38 years old

Uhhhhhhh... to be honest, I thought Sonja being in her early twenties was even pushing it a little for a Clocktower student. 38 though... he's just too old to fit the "rebellious students" premise of this RP. Could you make him younger at all?
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