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I'll try to post tonight if playing Dishonored doesn't keep me too distracted.
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So he's basically this guy.
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@pkken Yes, being almost identical to a canon character is a big problem. There's going to likely need some large changes to make the character more unique and slightly less super-powered from the get go.

- The amount of force your wind has/weight it can lift is rather high, it'd be better if at least at this stage in the rp that was cut down so you'd be knocking over robots in the entrance exam rather than picking them up

- The intricacy of control your quirk allows over the wind basically makes it a telekenetic quirk, which we do already have a character based around in this rp

- The flying is something I'd recommend against unless the entire battle suit was dedicated to it, like a full wingsuit, without the hard metal defense that seemingly would be clunky and not nearly as aerodynamic as the description suggests.

The main problem is this character is almost identical to a canon character which has opportunity to appear in the rp, so we need some large degree of originality. Do you have any ideas of changes you could make?
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@KalasYeah pretty much.

@KreutzerI thought I had the greenlight from @olcharlieboi but apparently not.

I planned on the character being more focused on concentrating wind highly into a offensive force rather than mainly just gusts like the guy in cannon.

As for the weight of the wind that can easily be changed and idea for the suit I can roll with. Though it wasn't specifically meant for defensive purposes and more of a way to have a higher degree of control in the air.
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I had given the green light to make a CS and to use a Wind Quirk, I didn't say it had to be the same as a cannon character. There is always variations of quirks.
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He would pull out a notepad out from his bag as he glances at Conner.


Not even remotely suspicious.
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lol, no not suspicious at all... (glances around nervously)
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@olcharlieboiOh well, just gonna switch with the end idea then
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I'll be withdrawing from the RP.
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Was working on this all day, hope I'm not too late.

Update: Made claws a bit stronger, he has to beat those robots to get into U.A. somehow right?

Update 2: Cleared the whole weakness thing in his wolf physiology, just to clear that up.
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@Kreutzer @NightmareInd
Chaotic Chao did show interest (though in the disccusion page) so he is still legible to join, to make sure you two know if you didn't remember him any.
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I would make it so his claws a bit stronger than just average claws, since it is a quirk things are normally on slightly stronger side even with mimicry or animalfication kind of quirks. Could make it where he can make his claws stronger and sharper through his development to easily cut metal.
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B-but the yeti girl :(
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If only I found this sooner



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@Heckno12 Well that reduces Makoto's total number of potential friends by one...
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Changed main concept of manipulating gusts to concentrating and channeling the wind.

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@pkken I'd still make the flight completely exclusive to while he's in his battle suit, other than that that part's looking better, I'll wait to see what Nightmare and Charlie have to say
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Hi there, I know that the RP is technically full. So I'll just be throwing out my character application and hope that a slot opens up in the near future. I'm going with a female character with a slime quirk.
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@Alupi Well we have had a couple players drop out already, so who knows?

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