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Are you still accepting
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@EpicKDP We certainly are! :)
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@RoccanIronclad If you do not mind fighting now, we can collab our fight together. I prefer via Google Doc, but whether PM or Doc is up to you.


Just keep the time frame of the whole RP in mind while do whatever you want to do.

Are you still accepting


For the time being, yes, we are. Welcome.
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I was gonna make the fight like one or two minutes only. And no KO or anything. But is it ok?
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Trying to think what Mako's reaction to seeing Reiko dressed in full witch garb will be, while Mako's in a sweater and jacket.
Hidden 6 yrs ago 6 yrs ago Post by Awesomoman64
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@Conscripts

Your fight is ok, so long as you follow KoL's words about time frame to other events.

@Awesomoman64

I don't think Paladin is a species; is he a human who's occupation is being a Paladin? Also, I'll need to think about your Other section and whether or not I want the unrest you suggest to exist.
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@Awesomoman64

I don't think Paladin is a species; is he a human who's occupation is being a Paladin? Also, I'll need to think about your Other section and whether or not I want the unrest you suggest to exist.


Yeah, I didn't know where else to put it so I slapped it with species since I saw other's putting things like "human mage" there. I can make a new spot for class or just toss that into other if you want.

As for the unrest, that really is just a suggestion for like an added plot device that could be used or not. If it messes with the main plot too much, however, I have no issue with trashing it.
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@Awesomoman64

Maybe just adding it in Abilities is best as it can explain his Holy powers. As for the unrest thing, I'm going to go ahead and say that messes with the lore too much and decline it.

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@Awesomoman64

Maybe just adding it in Abilities is best as it can explain his Holy powers. As for the unrest thing, I'm going to go ahead and say that messes with the lore too much and decline it.


Edits made. Anything else you'd like me to change?
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@Awesomoman64

It's fine by me. Await for KoL.
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@Awesomoman64

Accepted.
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• Name: Luna Elyse
• Title: Student
• Age: 129-looks 17 years old
• Species: Mermaid

• Abilities: Luna is able to grow legs as soon as she dries off, which allows her to explore the human world. She also has an awful singing voice; her brother once quoted “it would make any mortals ears begin to bleed” so beware of her Siren Scream. When she is under the water she has the ability to communicate with animals.

• Skills: Luna likes mixing things, potions and cocktails to be exact. She can whip up any intoxicating delight as well as mix up a powerful potion.

• Inventory: Luna is accompanied by a Purrmaid. Yes that’s right, not a catfish, a Purrmaid. It also grows four legs when dried off. Its name is Hamish. A white cat (Purrmaid) that is very devoted to Luna and her well-being. Under the sea these Purrmaids take on the role of assistant to some mermaids; dressing them in pearls and flowers, accompanying them around for friendship, they are even known to attack or punish young mermaids or creatures that tormented their mermaid. Hamish is by Luna’s side almost all the time, usually he does not interfere with her day to day activities, unless he feels he needs to.

• Sample Post:
Luna was at the ripe age of 99 when she (like most mermaids her age) noticed a change in herself. Her tail got shinier, her body changed, and the ocean just seemed…brighter. And of course there was that urge, the urge to enter the human world. That’s the calling you see. Around that age all mermaids feel the calling and venture into the human world. It’s almost like a rite of passage. It indicates the tail is able to morph and the mermaid is able to form legs. Luna felt it deep in her chest, and almost as if she were under hypnosis, she swam to the surface.
Popping her head up to make sure the coast was clear; she found a secluded beach surrounded by cliffs. And there she flopped up the beach out of the surf and let the warm sun dry her. It felt funny at first, almost as if she were turning to jelly but then the sensations of skin against sand and warmth on her legs quickly grew as legs seems to appear as a tail melted away, leaving only a cluster of thin iridescent scales behind to be washed away at high tide. Luna firmly placed her hands on the shifting sand and boosted herself up. Almost instantly she fell down. She struggled for many minutes just trying to get up; once she was stable she wobbled a bit and shuffled her feet around the beach, slowly picking her feet up higher each time. Luna had fallen so many times she experienced a sore feeling in her backside that was never there before. But after a few hours she was walking almost like normal.
Now, Luna has spent more time in the human world and no longer walks like a duck. She visits the ocean often to collect ingredients for her potions.


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@CrazyCatCaitlin

You may want to polish the structure of that CS. Space out the sections and break that sample into paragraphs, and maybe expand on that in length a little. Just makes things easier to read over all.
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@Lonewolf685I cant get the picture to work! ive tried everything. Btw, Does that look better?
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@CrazyCatCaitlin

That format is much appreciated.

As for the picture, you can get it to work through the Guild's picture system. Save the picture you want to your computer, then go into your profile and find the images tab. Then you can upload the pic into the guild and get a link that is compatible to the Guild's formatting.
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Picture works fine. If you want to gild the lily, you can center it with [ center ] [ / center ]
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@CrazyCatCaitlin

She looks fine to me, though consider spacing your paragraphs apart in the future. Await for KoL's words.
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Either tomorrow or the 26th, I will post. I definitely won't be able to at christmas
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