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Woo! Finally done!

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Dar'Jzo looks pretty darn good from where I'm standing. He has a really believable story that's drenched in Khajiiti culture and I certainly appreciate the strong family approach you took with this character; it's easy to believe that his loved ones were the prime motivators in his life, and it's always interesting to see characters that struggle with immoral lifestyles and trying to do right by their family. I didn't see anything else I thought needed addressing, overall, looks great to me!
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@POOHEAD189, I don't see anything new for Dax, and only one sentence added for Alim. Alim's acceptable, since he entered towards the end, but Dax is not. Please add Dax's chapter 1 experience into his bio.

Also, you need to specify which attribute is major and which is minor.
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@Spoopy Scary, Dar'Jzo was an enjoyable read; you've put in a lot of effort for sure. With that said, my co-GMs and I still have a few issues.

1. Going from the local recruiter to the Mane is quite a jump. Your character could have contacted the regional military commander in between.

2. I appreciate the volume of content, however, the bio ended at "Winterhold was supposedly destroyed last month". I need to know how Dar'Jzo got from that ship to our group in Solitude.

3. Nashav, really? Better name pls.
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Thanks for the feedback! I have a busy day ahead of me so I may not be able to make the changes right away. You're right that recruiter to Mane is a large jump, and I should have been more thoughtful of that.

I thought the boat trip was just suggested to be uneventful, and I didn't want to bog it down with too much fat so I left it to the reader's inference. I guess I'll try to explain it better?

There are people named Bob and John out there in the world, man, throw me a bone 😭 Okay, okay, I'll work something out.
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Aight, nice. Switching my peeps over.
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Edits are made! YEEAH!
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I know what y'all are thinking: "Oh great. He has another character."

This is just an incomplete something that I made for fun a while back when I was thinking of joining one of Dervish's games if it ever opened (spoilers: it didn't), which is why the format is a little different from this one. I almost used him for this one, but decided against it. I'm just sharing it publicly for funsies and so I could waste everyone's time. Try to enjoy!

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Announcement: We will be temporarily limiting each player to only one character. Existing and returning second characters are exempt. This is done to prevent new players from being overwhelmed, and players with one character can create their second one once we've reached a steady pace. If you are in the process of creating a second character, please do not submit it at this moment, and hold onto it until further notice.
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Because of that rule I will be bringing back Niernen Venim after all. I'll take this opportunity to bring her old sheet up to the level of detail that I hold myself to these days, so it'll take a few days to get her up to snuff, I think.

I'll also obviously change Narzul's sheet to remove any references to Niernen being captured.

The new character I was working on (Akyoren) will be shelved for the foreseeable future. If I can't use him immediately I might as well take the time to fine-tune him to perfection and only introduce him when it makes more sense in the context of the plot for him to replace one of the Venim siblings, instead of just dropping Niernen off-screen.
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In case you guys need clarification on attributes, I've compiled their descriptions in all relevant TES games.

Please use your own discretion when choosing attributes. Pick what is relevant in terms of storytelling instead of maximizing stats.







Fatigue is the same as stamina.

Attributes do not exist in Skyrim and ESO.
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Unfortunately I'm going to have to step back :( Just remembered my summer's going to be jam packed so I'm already slicing away other rps. Hope you all have fun though :'D and if there's chance again in the future to join when I'm free, then I'll give it another go.
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@Greenie Definitely appreciate you coming by! If you have time free up, you know where we live!
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Thanks for your interest, @Greenie, and good luck with your other RPs.
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@Father Hank Looks great! I especially enjoy the additions to the background that covered the events of chapter 1, it flowed and meshed well with the original parts. Skills and spells all look good (they're identical to before if I recall), and she's starting off with a severe disadvantage with equipment and supplies. I'm on board!
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Officially I’m going to try my best to have a rough character sheet up by May 10th but I don’t believe it’ll be ready for acceptance. I’m working on a ‘mad scientist’ Redguard Conjurer. Other Redguards won’t much like her lmao.

I’m still interested and I have a barebones character sheet on the go.
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@Father Hank, Niernen's approved, go add her.
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