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@Sinsystems Seems Alright by me. The only thing that has me confused is this:

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Are you speaking of cutting as healing because of surgery, or do they have magical properties that allow you to heal with them? Just have to be sure here. Wait for @LuckyBlackCat 's approval to post in CS Tab!

@Suneli I feel like you focus a bit too much on being ''fair'' and ''not overpowered''. Those are definetely rules, but they're also much more a guideline. I wouldn't necessarily mind if your Power was a one shot kill anything as long as it's properly used and difficult to perform - high risk/high reward kind of thing. The thing though is people that go that route has to prove they can write compelling characters and fight scenes without abusing their powers. It's very do-able.

I'm saying this mostly because when I read the description for the Hanged Man's, that's what I was feeling with all the restrictions that seems to be a bit random and too complicated for the Magic. I absolutely love the idea of the random powers for the Tarot Cards draw. I do not even deem it necessary to be one power per day.

I would have gone with something more akin to being able to draw cards as much as she wants, but can only draw the same card once per day, let's say. With that route, you could even start with a bigger cards decks and make the pwoers a bit simpler, but have more.

Or you could go with a different limitation - such as your Pixie's magical reserve.

In the end, it's your decision. Your character can be accepted as it is, just keep me updated on what you decide to do, okay? OS: I just love that face claim.

@Mistress Dizzy Hey ! That can happen. Personally, I tend to go fish for pictures or musics that strikes or inspire me, and I flesh out a character from there. I hope that can help.
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@Killy Sorry! I missed it ! No personality? Is it still a WIP? Just gotta be sure.

The constructs are a bit liek Green Lantern's constructs? Also, there's one thing bothering me a bit. The Pixie's transformed state is supposed to be something mundane to hide as. Marilyn can totally rock a Crown if you so wish it, I just need to specify.




Did I miss anyone? It would very much be like me. Sorry if I did, just poke me anywhere !

Also, again, I strongly encourage everyone to join the Discord if you are able to. :P Even if you are not too active, I try to build of a small community of nice people and it's easier to everyday discussions as well as RP updates. @Sinsystems THank you for the update, I will see to it to post a non-outdating one.


Ok, sorry for the delay everyone ^^; Anyway...

@Sinsystems I like it, although yeah the "healing cutting" thing needs clearing up. Am I right in thinking you're referring to magically enhanced surgery? Once that detail is clarified, consider the CS accepted.

@Suneli Ah, sorry if I intimidated you yesterday! For the most part it looks good, it's just that yeah, you seem to be a little worried about making your character overpowered, and underpowering her instead. I'd personally relax some of the restrictions on The Hanged Man, especially as she isn't guaranteed to get it at any one time. Very creative though, and I like the personality changes as a side effect of her powers.

@Mistress Dizzy Yep, that suggestion seems like a good one to go with. Considering things weren't at all easy for black people in the 1800s, a servant background would be likely. As for the magic, got to say you need to elaborate on it. The versatility looks good though, and I'm interested in seeing more details.

@Killy Once you write the personality section, your character seems fun, especially with the bug magic! That's pretty unique.

@Vega7285 Hehe, classic light and dark, lawful good and chaotic good duo. I'd recommend having them both as foils, although it's understandable if you only want to go with one. You'd always be able to bring the other in later.

@Majoras End Yup, vampire concept looks good so far! Let us know when the CS is complete.

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Whew! That's way more characters than we expected. It's probably time to close applications, and start the RP soon.


Ahh, yeah I get that often. It kinda became a habit to heavily restrict abilities I think could be considered OP, thanks a bunch for the suggestions btw! I love the suggestion of drawing however many, but only once a day! I'll upload the sheet after implementing a few of those suggestions, tysm!
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Last magical girl anime I watched was Yuki Yuna is a Hero~

I totally understand if this needs re-balancing, this is the repost with updated abilities.
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Here's my finished cs too.
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@Sinsystems Seems Alright by me. The only thing that has me confused is this:

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Are you speaking of cutting as healing because of surgery, or do they have magical properties that allow you to heal with them? Just have to be sure here. Wait for @LuckyBlackCat 's approval to post in CS Tab!


Ok, sorry for the delay everyone ^^; Anyway...

@Sinsystems I like it, although yeah the "healing cutting" thing needs clearing up. Am I right in thinking you're referring to magically enhanced surgery? Once that detail is clarified, consider the CS accepted.

Yes it's basically magically enhanced surgery. The rough idea is that the sharpness of the blades coupled with the fact that they numb the areas they cut (thus meaning no pain) makes them perfect for Jackie to perform impromptu surgeries while administering some tonics or other healing liquids from her Medicine bag.

So for instance say someone has a broken bone or something lodged in their body, Jackie can easily cut away the flesh, apply the required healing tonic/put everything back where it should be and then seal up the wound without causing additional pain to the patient.

Surgery was pretty terrible in this time period after all as last I checked proper ways to anesthetize people are still being refined. As such I think that having a set of knives perfect for both killing painlessly but also performing these crucial procedures without added pain fits rather nicely with my general aesthetic.

Also @SimpleWriter I joined the discord so now I just need the permissions to actually see/do stuff there.
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@Killy Accepted as far as I am concerned. That Pixie's name and Ladybug/Scarab theme wasn't lost on me. Love it. Good potential. Wait for LuckyBLackCat's approval.

@Suneli Accepted for me. :) Wait for LuckyBlackCat's approval !

@Vega7285 This is long overdue and I'm sorry about it, but definitely accepted. I love them both ! You can post them in the CS tab. (If LuckyBLackCat approved, which I think she did.)

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@Killy Accepted, and yep I'm liking the mythology reference with the pixie's name! Your character's going to contrast nicely with the more upstanding magical girls.

@Suneli Yep, that keeps her balanced while being a competent fighter/supporter, and I'm looking forward to seeing how she develops. Accepted!

@Sinsystems You'll already know this from our Discord chat, but here's your official welcome on board.

@Vega7285 Yup, I approved both of them :)
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Hmm, well I am interested, though it looks like you have a decent amount of people at this point. May app something if only for the waitlist, and otherwise keep an eye on this.
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Oh hi Mark-

I haven't even continued work on Emily yet. :'D
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Oh hi Mark-

I haven't even continued work on Emily yet. :'D


Who is this Mark you speak of? I know no Marks? Only Daves.

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Who is this Mark you speak of? I know no Marks? Only Daves.

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Ya mean this Dave?

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@Majoras End @Mistress Dizzy @Hammerman @Killy

There seem to have been some issues with Discord links, so here's another one: discord.gg/Bt2uvAu
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Hey Everyone !

The first IC post is there ! Won't be long after that for the story to lift off. ;)
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Let's try this again. I dropped the fog idea and went with something else. All I need is a suitable name; anyone want to help?


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@Mistress Dizzy There are a lot of options from mythology. The three fates from Greco-Roman myth, the Norns, probably more I don't know. The whole threads of fate is a common enough thing in world myth.

Not much else comes immediately to mind.
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@Vega7285 That got me looking for myths. I'm going to call her Arachne.
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@Mistress Dizzy Arachne, good choice! Liking the sewing theme, all the CS needs is a picture or description, and SimpleWriter's approval.
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@Mistress Dizzy You got my approval also. You can put her in the CS and post.

So this is the last Character we'll be accepting for now. :)
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So this is the last Character we'll be accepting for now. :)


Alright. Hit me up if a spot does appear.
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What Flame said!
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