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okay....Then can I make a mage who works for the rebellion?
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@LordVoldemort Dramon is the one who's gathering people to send south to search for signs of a rebellion. XD

@Nymeria Well, we're not sure if there is a rebellion in the first place... we're just going south to see if there is. If you really wanted to make a mage that works for the rebellion, that means you'd be a bad guy and would constantly be separated from the main group, and I rather avoid that early on in the RP. ^^
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@Ambra Unless other people wanted to play for the rebellion....

But I understand. I just can't see playing a mage who willingly works for the government that oppresses them. Unless they were begrudgingly doing it.

Maybe I won't play a mage. I'll have to brainstorm a bit more.
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@Ambra

Okay I think I fixed it.
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@Wick There's still the issue of being able to land everything she aims. Like I said before, that's impossible, because even deadshots miss.

I also just realized she started to practice after the war... the war was fifty years ago. Which means she should be 50+ years if she started after the war like you said. That also voids the mages killing the people in her village, since again, the Holy War was fifty years ago and there haven't been any wars since.

You say she studied combat from 10-14 years. That's a reasonable amount of time, but is there a reason she stopped? Soldiers study combat even though they may be experienced warriors. Practice makes perfect. :)
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I made my changes in bold so you see them. I had put the word almost after never somehow. I fixed that and I only saw a long long time ago as to how far back the war was so I changed it to reflect a random attack.

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*100% Hit Chance with only ever taking a single shot in her entire life*
As long as you don't plan to ruin it, it sticks. XD

@Ambra So just wanted to ask, how are tomes created, what makes them have magical powers? The material that constructs it, the writing, the power of the one who writes it, the ink used to write it? Are they special for each person or some are mass printed?
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Tell me if I need to change anything!
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@Wick I would still rather prefer you leave out the "almost never missing" part because that'll make combat pretty dull, especially if it ever comes to PvP.

As for the mages attacking her village, it's still unrealistic. You can have it that it was a group of bandits that caused the most damage, and that there was a mage among them, but a whole cluster of mages doesn't make sense in this situation.
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@Bishop Tomes are created by mages themselves, though the process isn't really specified. They're pretty much a mystery. All that's known is that they're created by mages (since they are the ones that come up with new spells), are copied down by mages, and are passed down by mages.

@Polaris North I see nothing wrong with Aram, though I'd like to know why his father said there would be consequences if he didn't join Dramon's cause.

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@Ambra

Well, his father sees it as a chance for Aram to 'redeem' himself. See, because Aram is part of the family, he has to serve as a mage hunter. Since he had retired despite the fact that he could fully heal and can be returned to his top condition, his family started to see this as a negative thing and constantly wants him to get back to the fight. So, his father gives him this last chance or else, he will be driven out of Remulus and probably kicked ou to the Southernlands.
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@Polaris North Aight! Accepted.
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@Ambra

Since the CS is going to be permalinked, I assume that I don't have to post it on the Character Tab or am I still supposed to?
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@Polaris North You can, cause I can permalink it from the character tab.
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I had ideas flowing for possible male status, but I won't be able to work on the cs until tomorrow!! Hoping to get it out as soo as I can!
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@Ambra
I said a couple of mages not a cluster. There are always a few bad seeds. I did what you asked. If that isn't good enough I withdraw.
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@Wick There are always a few "bad seeds" but mages don't usually travel in groups because that makes them easier to signal out. Not to mention, they don't just spontaneously decide to attack a random village and kill everyone there.

If you heard of Dragon Age, I've taken multiple aspects of it when it comes to mages. Mages aren't bad. Sure, there might be bad seeds, but they aren't really easy to come across since they don't go around and commit random acts of terrorism or violence because that means being killed.

If you don't agree with me on this aspect, then unfortunately this is when I can't do anything else for you. Your history is not realistic for this setting. If you don't want to change it, then it's fine, but that means you can't participate in this RP. Sorry.
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@Ambra

Did you even read it. Half of what you are claiming isn't even correct. I said two men were killed by two mages. I'm too tired to do this with you. Maybe another rp but count me out of this one.
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@Wick That's unfortunate.
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