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Anyone else working on their sheet or weren't able to see this?
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I'm working on one but it will be Monday before I can post it
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My interest was entirely predicated on a character I already had from previous uses being a good fit here. Since the full & proper explanation of things, I am somewhat less confident in said character fitting. Therefore the priority of a CS for this has taken a backburner to other endeavors. In other words, it gets done when it gets done if it gets done at all. I wouldn't advise relying or waiting on me.
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So for everyone to know, I'm planning on making a noble who ran away from home in search of glory.
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@Ambra Here is my CS. Let me know of changes you'd like to see.

Name: Brother Roland of House Calafia

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Country of Origin: Kingdom of Graelia

Weapons: Mace and shield. He's trained with a sling but hates using it (it's a peasant's weapon)

Abilities: Knows healing. Modern people would say it's science, but to Roland it's divine magic.


Personality: Friendly and outgoing. Has great faith in the Creator. See's the Creator's hand in everything. He is a nobleman and the son of a nobleman. He has trained his whole life to be a knight. He is confident in his skill at arms and in his social status. He is a Nobleman because it's the Creator's will that he be a nobleman. His training as a priest has soften (a little) his arrogance and the way he looks down at peasants and others with a lower social status. He stills looks down at them, but now he knows it's his duty to help, protect and serve them.

Short Biography: Roland is an ordained priest of the Creator. He is the second son of a nobleman. His older brother will inherit the family's lands and title. Roland is fulfilling his duty by serving the Church. He has graduated from the Seminary at Temple Square in Clanark. Roland is still a warrior. He is now a holy warrior if the Creator. He has fought for the Church in several skirmishes. He also serves the Church as a priest; teaching, giving blessings, healing and other duties of a young priest.

Other: Roland has been assigned by the Church to accompany the expedition south and aid it in any and every way possible. Roland has always served under his superiors of the Church. This will be his first assignment alone.
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Since my confidence that this is going to be let through in a satisfying way has dropped upon fully catching up on the thread and going over the first-post a second time ... I'm just going to make a few name changes to the sheet-generic of this character so that its lore-compatible and throw it up here so that I can get a definitive answer sooner rather than later.

Will this character work without major alterations and/or stripping away the pendant? Yes or no? This is to judge whether or not it's worth it for me to actually work through a CS for this, rather than just drawing on my one of my master sheet-generics.
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@Ambra I'm passing on this.
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@Garth I'll get to your sheet when I'm on my laptop.

@Sierra Sorry but I'm gonna have to pass on the pendant thing. Firstly the dark sorcerer character never existed in the universe and he certainly didn't reign terror for 10 years. Secondly, souls definitely do not work like that in this universe, either. It's highly unlikely that a person can just wish away a soul, especially if it's a part of such a strong and vengeful mage's one. Once it gets a decent grasp on its host's mind, it is probably not gonna let it go without a hell of a fight. The act of getting the sorcerer's POWERS (which is kind of overpowered if he was so strong) is a little too strong for this RP.
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A simple no would have told me everything I needed. I more or less figured as much given that unwritten lore is the theme of the game so far. That settles that then.
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Imma just post here to let you know I'm lurkin', and if I get a hankering for tossing up a CS over the next few days, I'll make it for this.
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Awesome!
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@Garth Again, I'm going over your sheet in an in-depth fashion, so please don't take this personally.

1. Magic and Weapons: The OP says you can't have magic and weapons since it's very, very rare, and that's only with magic and a sword. Imagine magic with a mace, a shield, and a sling? Not to mention, knowing magic makes you a mage and... well, mages are looked down upon, so I think it'll be best if you just make him someone with a weapon and knows how to fight rather than giving him magic. Maybe he just knows how to heal wounds through salves and potions rather than magic?

2. His appearance: the picture doesn't really tell us how he looks like. In fact, he looks much older than 22 in the picture, and that's probably because of the cowl/robe thing. If you can't find a picture of his face, you can describe it through words.

3. Specification: We don't really know how he's like in personality other than he's friendly and he used to be arrogant, but now he looks at peasants with a drive to protect. His history doesn't really reveal a lot about him either. Why is it his duty to serve the church? What skirmishes has he fought in? I feel like there should be more, you get what I'm saying?

Other than that, he's a pretty interesting character.
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@Ambra

Sorry i've been staring at a blank cs trying to put something together. My schedule just got busy so i thought i'd let you know that it might be a week or two before i have the time to pound my head into the wall until the creative juices start flowing on this sheet and ii am capable of doing my usual research for the perfection i seek in my cs'.

If you have to start without me go right ahead. If you'd prefer i withdrawl i can do so as well.

Apologies either way.
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@Dnafein You can come back when you're ready~
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@Ambra I am sorry my friend. I kept wondering if I'd have the time, but it looks like I don't :( It's why I never actually commented until you tagged haha. Perhaps sometime soon if the RP is still going, but I cannot atm.
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this intrigues me, maybe
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Glad to have you on board!
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@Ambra Here is my updated CS.

Name: Brother Roland of House Calafia

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Country of Origin: Kingdom of Graelia

Weapons: Mace and shield. He's trained with a sling but hates using it (it's a peasant's weapon)

Abilities: no magical abilities

Appearance: Roland is a young man. He keeps his dark brown hair short. He has piecing brown eyes. He keeps himself clean shaven. However, if out in the field for an extended time with the Army of the Church, he will let his dark facial hair grow. He is almost six feet tall and well built. His muscles are not massive, but toned and well developed. He often wears the blue robes of a priest of the Creator. They are the simple robes of a priest, but his robes are of a finer make and cut than the average priest. Also the holy symbol he wears is of finer quality than most priests can afford. When there is the need, he will don his plate mail to defeat the False Gods and their minions. His plate mail is nearly the same quality and make as many young knights. When in armor, he wears a blue and white surcoat over his armor. His helmet is opened faced; in battle, he is to be seen by his allies to serve as an example and role model. He carries his mace with him almost everywhere.

Personality: Friendly and outgoing. Has great faith in the Creator. He is a nobleman and the son of a nobleman. He has trained his whole life to be a knight. He is confident in his skill at arms and in his social status. He is a Nobleman because it's the Creator's will that he be a nobleman. His training as a priest has soften (a little) his arrogance and the way he looks down at peasants and others with a lower social status. He stills looks down at them, but now he knows it's his duty to help, protect and serve them. He has been trained as healer. He knows basic medicine and how to treat battlefield wounds. He teaches the people of the church how to avoid diseases and mixes some simple herbs to treat main aches and illnesses. Roland see's the hand of the Creator in almost everything he does. Roland may bless an archer's bow. Then when the archer makes a difficult shot, Roland will claim it is because of the Creator's blessings. Others may call it luck or skill. But in Roland's heart, it was divine intervention.

Short Biography: Roland is an ordained priest of the Creator. He is the second son of a nobleman. His older brother will inherit the family's lands and title. By long tradition, the second sons of his household have sworn loyalty to the Church and have become Knights of the Church. His uncle, his great uncle and many more than he could remember have become ordained priests before him. Now Roland is fulfilling his duty by serving the Church. He has graduated from the Seminary at Temple Square in Clanark. Roland is still a warrior. He is now a holy warrior if the Creator. One of his first assignments was to escort and guard of shipment of tithes collected from the villages. The small group was attacked by bandits. In his first battle, he showed his bravery and valor in almost single-handedly defeating three armed bandits. He has also fought with twenty other Priestly Knights against a band of cultists. In that fight he saved the cardinal when the cardinal was knocked off of his horse. Roland stood over the cardinal and held off the cultists until they were rescued. He has been in a number of fights, some lethal, some not, while serving as a guardian of the Church and clergy. When needed, he is a weapon in the hand of the Creator. He also serves the Church as a priest; teaching, giving blessings, healing and other duties of a young priest.

Other: Roland has been assigned by the Church to accompany the expedition south and aid it in any and every way possible. Roland has always served under his superiors of the Church. This will be his first assignment alone.
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