Crimson Raven

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@Leslie Hall

*sees lurking*

*jumps on*

"YOU CANNOT ESCAPE!"

My Gif and image drop (Please do not post on. PM if you wish to add something.)

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

A little pick me up for those who need it.

@Zarkun

What, we are sharing music now?

Here is one that always picks me up.

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@Leslie Hall

"Tomorrow^TM"

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

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Gotta agree, it's been buggy for the last hour or so.

@Joshua Tamashii

Same here. Buggy and very slow.

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@Crimson Raven
Yes, but you could've said it differently. More to the point, there is a line, and I certainly feel like you crossed it.

When you're about to shoot a man in the face, it costs nothing to be kind.

@BurningDaisies

Yes, you are right, but at the same time, no, you are not.

When you are correcting someone, some harshness is needed as long as it is also with kindness. Sugar coating is not beneficial for either the Shooter or the Shootiee. Firstly, as nice as it sounds, real life does not work that way. People will not always be considerate when they stomp on your feelings. Now, thta does not mean that because of that, we have an excuse to do it. Secondly, some harshness goes a long way in making the person realize "Hey, I screwed up." That's probably the hardest part, and the most abused/misunderstood.

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I disagree. Letting ignorance be is a crime.

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That was kind.

I made him forever ago, but had to work for a living so I disappeared a bit. Ran it by the Lead gm and he said it was fine that why I didn't know the whole dragon restriction. The personality I thought was valid, since I won't be jumping around acting randomly, I could of said he was kind of a joker with more words. Regardless, personality if by far the most absurd thing to claim in any RP as everyone will act however they want, cause we're human and react differently to our situation, but how of course does depend on our personality as a person when we post. Keeping the characters just in mind on how we think they would act, but can never really do it justice since we act on OUR own personality. I guess it works great if you have a multiple personality disorder.

The history is of course is very short and sweet so it may develop(if the chance ever arises, they rarely don't in these kinds of RP's unless the user goes out on the limb for it). The history was more just prior information he would have told anyone who would ask, without revealing too much.

With the Power, sure that could always be fixed, but I won't cause I'm definitely not going to be part of this RP. Apparently I don't match the skill of writing or RPing to match you or the others with my absolutely no substance character. Regardless how I was going to actually play him. I obviously don't have the ability to even try with all your recommendations on how to improve it from your "critique".

I bid you all adieu. Hope you all have a blast with Rp, it looks like a fun one and good luck!

@Thecrash20

Edit: Alright, some of my fellow RPers here feel that I was too harsh, so what you see below is an clean-up version.

And boom, like that, you fail.

Being able to lisen and learn from critique is perhaps the ultimate skill needed for a writer. Even bad critique. ESPECIALLY bad critique. (Not saying what I said was bad. I stand by it.)

You many not realize what you did, but to me, it looks like when faced with opposition you threw your arguments in my face and metaphoricaly stormed off.

That may not have been ment, but that is how it came across.

Now, onward to refute my criticism.

Lead GM: I do not know the particulars of what She told you but I do know this, Dragons, in the AU have not been around for several centuries. Therefore, it would be very very strange for a family of Dragon Hunters to still exist. Second off, Fairy Tail is not like Final Fantasy, where people can gear up and hunt dragons. Dragons are incredibly powerful beings, in perspective, the biggest Big Bad in Fairy Tail (Zerif) is scared of them. Second, the reason Dragon Slayer magic came into being was BECAUSE they could not kill them by any other method.

Now, the personality. There is a phrase for the type of character you are talking about, and it is called a self-insert. Now, these types are by no means bad. They can be done well, but my gripe is specifically with how you have described it. Skipping back a bit, self-inserts generally do not work in a roleplay because you can see everything that lies before you from a 'unbiased' point of view, thus leading to a tendency to always pick the "right" choice, leading to Mary Sue-dom (and trust me, I don't throw that out lightly, see my sig). Characters and their personalities describe and limit what you do, and are paramount to establishing a good Character. Now, what you said it true, you are limited by your own personality, which is why you need a character so you can say "Okay, here is what I would do, but what would my character do in this situation?" That takes flexibility of thinking that is only attained by practice.

Do you want to know how you gain skill? Do you want to know how you improve? You work with other people who are more skilled. You learn from others who are less skilled. You take criticism, and learn how to give it back, and how to defend your point of view.

Now, lets not turn this into a flame war, if you have more to say, then fire off a PM, and we can take it up in there.

Phoenix Wing (A Fairy Tail RP-Always Open, Open)

I'm just so tired of it all

@Caits

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Kage

Guild Membership Card

“... ... ... ... ...”

Translation

"We are but dust and shadow."

| Nａｍｅ: |

--Forgotten--

| Alias|Nickames|Titles: |

Kage

| G e n d er: |

Female

| R a n k: |

A

| Ａｇｅ: |

N/A, 19, judging by height and stature

| Guild : |

???

| Personality : |

Kage is a strange person to be sure. Dispite her rather solum and mysterious appearance, she displays a sense of humor that is so throughly dry, that most miss it. She is constantly fascinated with seemingly mundane things and seems to not grasp socal norms. Her isolation has made her a bit odd in the head, it's extremely hard to tell what she is thinking or what she will do next. Kage also excludes a quicky personality, conveyed through body language and gestures. She has a chort temper with people who fail to understand what she is trying to convey. She is very passive, preferring to simply watch then interfere. She shows a frightening ferocious and lack of anything resembling mercy or honor when fighting; She fights savagely and without restraint.

| History: |

To tell her history, would be to tell the history of the her country, and the terrible fate that befell it...

The People

A long time ago there was a civilization, the original inhabitants of what would be known as Pandora. Their name was lost to history, they are referred to as the People by the few historians that know of them. They were a great and powerful empire, advanced for their time, in magic and mechanics, they built the original airships, upon which the modern airships are patterned, though these were much inferior to the ones now flown. Unlike most other humans, The People had powerful collective magic, which means that they could combine their strength to accomplish extraordinary things beyond even the most powerful Sorcerers. However to do this, they needed Archmages, people with the talent to shape and channel that power. These people were were very rare, and held in great esteem. But even rarer were the people who did not fit the mold and had unique magics of their own. These people were shunned as outcasts, often killed for even the tiniest reason.

The People built massive temples strange structures that still dot the jungle below and were a powerful nation that conquered most smaller regions nearby. They had to be, for the jungle was a dangerous place, but their collective magic made life possible. They had great wealth and prospered but it was not enough for them, they desired ever more power. As a result, they delved deep into research of the nature of magic. But one day, something went wrong. They awoke a Great Black Daemon. Enraged at this intrusion it cast a horrible curse known as the Blackening, so called for its symptom was a blight that spread throught the body turning the infected black. Those that contrected it were slowly devoured by it, going mad, dying outright, or worse, turning into monsters.

Their civilization collapsed practically overnight. In a desperate bid to save the people, the most powerful Archmages came together with most of the remnant of the people, and wove a powerful spell. What the spell was meant to do, precisely is unknown, but the being that originally unleashed the curse was not about to let them escape its wrath. As it was being cast, the daemon took the spell, combined it with the Blackening, and the end result was the People became Shadows. This event is called the Shading. They were beings neither alive nor dead, bare fit of their magic, and cursed to live an endless existence, no longer knowing pleasure, nor pain, nor food, nor water, nor warmth, nor joy. They are Wraiths, clinging the the world of light. They haunt the deepest reaches of the Jungle, where even sunlight does not reach.

But this is not their story.

For centuries after the Shading, The People drifted as wraiths, fading, forgetting, slowly loosing any semblance of sentience, becoming mindless, flighting shadows. All except one. Kage was one of the rare People born with a unique magic, Shadow magic. The curse reacted strangely with her magic. She, like the rest faded, but she kept her magic and her sentience, if not her sanity. For the centuries that followed, she merely existed. The first hundred years or so, it was not too bad, it took time for some people to fade completely, and she had company. But all too soon she was completely alone. The isolation, boredom, and the curse drove her mad. It took some time, but she eventually regained some sanity. She watched from the shadows as new people arrived, new cities were build and the floating islands were formed. She observed the powerful and unique magic that these people wielded, and eventually she formed a plan. Or a half-baked plan. She would join these 'Wizards' and see if they could lift the curse.

| Magic: |

Living Shadow: A strange and powerful form of Shadow magic, formed from human magic combined with that of a Shadow Daemon's. The most notable feature if this magic is that it turned the Caster into a living shadow.

Beneath the clothing Kage appears to be a 3D silhouette of a person, but she lacks details, face, eyes, or any identifying features.

As a shadow, she is completely insubstantial, it takes concentration and magic for her to solidify enough to affect the physical world. However she can use this to her advantage, most attacks will pass right through her. Her magic also gives her to ability to mold her body into any form she wishes, and use it like a weapon. She can merge with surfaces to become more like a literal shadow. Like this, she is almost completely invulnerable to attack. Other abilities her magic give her is to merge with other shadows and manipulate their owners like a puppet or steal shadows and use them.

Weaknesses:
-Light, Kage cannot exist without some form of shade, this can be other's shadows or the shadow of clothing. Natural light itself does not hurt her, per say, prolonged exposure will cause her to fade, but she can recover by hiding in shadow. The only way to truly kill her would be to isolate her from any form of shade. Light magic, on the other hand, does burn her, but instead of doing physical harm, it burns her magic, speeding her depletion.

-Magical Limits, Kage only has a finite amount of magic. It is the only reason she can interact with the physical world and it is also the only thing keeping her sentiance intact. Should she use too much, she will revert to a mindless shadow. She can recover, but it is possible that she will not.

-Communication, Kage cannot speak, nor make any noise at all. The only way to communicate is to use magic to become substantial and write, or use sign language, which not many know.

-Substance, it requires a significant amount of magic for Kage to become substantial. Breif periods are sustainable but extended use tires her quickly.

| Miscs : |

Her guild mark is embroidered on her cloak.
She is extremely good at charades.

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