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Back when dinosaurs ruled the Earth, I got started with writing online on the Spore forums. Man, those were the days. We're talking like 12 years ago!

I've been here on and off for almost as long, and have GM'd a bunch of different things to varying success.

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The Iceborn





There was no time to see the mystical flames race up the stick and consume his flesh, just as there was no time to see lightning before it struck. There was only agony.

Everything went dark and for a moment Sigdar was sure that he had died. He heard voices calling to him from beyond the physical world.

And then he was awake once more, and some sort of living lightning did strike him. Amidst the deluge he was beaten down onto the ground and hammered into something new, like a lump of molten iron as it was shaped into an axe. But when Sigdar rose back to his feet, he had been made into a weapon more deadly than any axe. He suddenly knew what to do.

With inhuman speed he raced through the forests, the wild storm proving to be not even the slightest hindrance. What trees he did not weave around were battered down as he charged back towards Dagshall, every leaping bound covering the distance of ten strides from a normal man.

When he arrived back at Dagshall, he wasn't even out of breath. This trial of his might had only just begun. He looked out across the muddied fields beyond the village's palisade and saw the monsters, just as he knew he would. He would not rest so long as a single one of the vile beasts drew breath, but how to kill them all?

He suddenly became cognizant of the great axe in his hand. He hadn't even realized that he had picked it up near the runestone, and in the time since then it had felt so natural in his grip that it may as well have been another arm. But now that he knew that he had the axe, the weapon would have its bloodlust sated.

With a roar the resonated like thunder, Sigdar First-Chosen leaped into battle. In a trance-like state, he fought with both a savage fury and an inhuman mastery of combat; combined with his gigantic stature, his foes were broken like earth beneath a till. He waded through their ranks and in his wake there was left nothing but gore and the shrieks of death.




As the tribe's defenders formed their shieldwalls at the palisade gates and were met with the Deep Ones' wild charge, all hell broke loose. So deafening was the thunder and so hard the rain that it was difficult to even see, much less coordinate. But they all stood their ground shield to shield, striking at the monsters as they threw themselves at the shieldwall with suicidal abandon. The corpses of the fish-men began to fall into the muddy ground and pile up, but even then the waves of them did not relent. Through gaps in the shieldwalls shot briny swords and spears, and while they paid a great price in their own blood for every Iceborn warrior that they slayed, they were steadily breaking their enemies' morale and weakening the defense. It looked like it was only going to be a matter of time before Dagshall fell, assuming the ceaseless deluge didn't wash away the entire town before that.

But then there was deliverance. From out of the storm leaped a gigantic champion; though Dag had managed to recognize his son, with such poor visibility in the rain most men saw only Sigdar's gigantic stature and glowing eyes, so recognized him not as the chieftain's son but as Kjorn himself, their god of war. Perhaps their assessment was more accurate than Dag's.

But it hardly mattered. A wild cheer erupted when Sigdar leaped over the ramparts, landed amidst the horde of fishmen whilst crushing two or three beneath his feet, and then cleaved his way through their ranks. Despite being engulfed in the horde of monsters and surrounded on all sides, his rampage was unstoppable. Even through the rain they saw the shine of his great axe as it severed too many limbs to count. Perhaps it was just the wind and rain washing the weapon clean, but there was no blood that they could see upon Sigdar's axe; it was as if the weapon itself thirsted for blood and drank it all.

Sigdar waded through the ranks of fishmen, slowly making his way back towards the palisade. Suddenly aware of the enemy behind them, those Deep Ones locked in close combat with the Iceborn shieldwall began to fight even more savagely if such a thing was possible, desperately trying to break through the defenses and make it into the village before they were trapped between the shieldwall and Sigdar. But the Iceborn remained steadfast, and within moments Sigdar was there. With one great horizontal swing of his axe, he bisected a half dozen of the fishmen at the waist. Blood spattered into the air and rained down upon the awed Iceborn. Then Sigdar turned back around, roared with deafening power, and charged back into the fishmen's ranks. The Iceborn followed at his heels, and just like that the tides of battle had changed.

Where before the Iceborn were in a defensive position and slowly crumbling as their enemy endlessly pressed forward, now it was the Iceborn who were on the offensive as they sallied out of Dagshall's pallisade. Chaos broke out in the fishmen's ranks as those closest to the village saw the tides change and tried to flee, whilst others in the back of the fishmen's army still pressed forward. It quickly turned into a massacre with the Deep Ones being forced back to the shores.



It's the big gap between the Ironhearts, Venomweald, and Nice Mountains. Because it now leads into the Venomweald and Ommok's kingdom, it's not particularly relevant for nomads or merchants anymore. But it's still a place that the ogres and others could cross.
It might be worth keeping the Howling Gap labelled, even now that Basheer is free and the mountain pass no longer howls nearly so much.
Being the poster child for someone with way too many plots to juggle, I won't jump on and claim Aeramen (or Crucibar and his rabble!) in case someone else wants to do something. However, I might well try to find ways to weave this into future plots.

What's the timeline on when Aeramen was visited by Vestec? I have an idea for a post with Xos making the rounds and paying a visit to some djinni lords.
I have a question to ask everyone:

What do you think Teknall looks like?


I've never pictured him as some really big, bearded, masculine hulk. More of the clever engineer than brawny blacksmith type. After all, the playground bully Logos scares him.
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I do that sometimes tbh.


i do it everytime in my spartan existence
@Muttonhawk

The ogre expansion into the Hain confederation was happening during and before the Realta attack. Not that it matters too much; the Realta invasion didn't impact the ogres much, it's just that whenever the ogres inevitably interact with nearby civilizations a few years down the line, those civilizations will have recovered somewhat from the Realta and the ogres will have had time to consolidate their holdings and begin looking for more.

That timestamp that you have for the beginning of the ogres' southwards expansion is probably closer to when Dargok's expedition tried to cross the Ironhearts and fought the battle against the organized urtelem and the sculptor.

I had envisioned Kyre's death having happened right around there, but it's odd for there to be such a large gap between that and him visiting the Celestial Citadel. Even by divine standards four years is a long time to do nothing, and I had imagined all the events concerning Xos on Galbar would happen within half a year. That'd be starting with him killing Kyre and ending with the inevitable confrontation between him and the trifecta that's plotting against him.

Edit: Oh, and Aihtiraq appears before all of this because he shows up in Shaqmar's story which entirely predates the Realta invasion. Though you did just say "rumors of Aihtiraq spread", so admittedly there's some leeway between the time of his actual appearance and his existence being common known among the Hain.
The Iceborn





B) Improve Military Technology

The Iceborn were many things: hardened sailors, master shipbuilders, and formidable warriors. They were not philosophers, and this sentiment was reflected in Sigdar who chose not to dwell too long on thinking about what to do with the flame. Father Frost was the more mysterious of the Iceborn's two patron deities; that god worked in strange and subtle ways, but in none of the tales was it Kjorn's way to care about such petty things as how a flame was transported from one place to another. Kjorn cared about the truth, the only truth that mattered--strength.

So without much thought, Sigdar used a knife to pierce the bark of a tree. Coating the end of a stick in the resinous sap that bled from the tree, he created what would serve well enough as a torch. Not knowing what to expect, Sigdar then attempted to light the torch with the strange flame that still burned within the runestone.

In Dagshall, the chieftain was left with the difficult decision of how to react in the face of the recent attack. He was keenly aware that cowering behind the walls of their settlement would leave those in the mining outpost and lumber camp relatively exposed. Since the tribe had enough iron and lumber in their stores for the foreseeable future, Dag ultimately decided to have the miners and lumberjacks all ordered to abandon their posts and return to Dagshall. The mineshafts and trees would still be there once the ocean was red with the blood of whatever enemy lurked out there.

With those orders sent out, the tribe was hunkered down and ready to wait for their enemy to make another appearance. The palisade and shipyard were defended day and night and the warriors kept ready, so there would be no surprises.

While they waited and watched, there was still time for work to be done. The Iceborn had plenty of swords, axes, spears, and even bows with which to wage war; however, in terms of defenses the tribe was lacking. There were a few odd pieces of armor that had been brought to this new land from their old continent, but even those were growing old and rusty. The tribe needed armor to equip the warriors, and they had plenty of materials to make it. Shields wouldn't hurt either. The pounding of red-hot iron echoed throughout the village as the smithy began forging armor, whilst inside the longhouses others fashioned shields out of wood and hide.



@Kho

Your odds of getting away with it have dropped precipitously now that you've mentioned it, lol. ALL THEY GOTTA DO IS CLICK YOUR PROFILE AND LOOK AT YOUR POST HISTORY TO SEE EVIDENCE OF YOUR CONSPIRACY TO AVOID JUSTICE, BRO

so gouge their eyes out
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