DarkwolfX37

Puella Magi Madoka Magica Roleplay

Well, looks like I missed out. I'll express interest in case, even though chances are no openings will appear.

Myriad Reality

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fuck nevermind

Myriad Reality

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The way you set up their personalities, 3 acted the most realistically, and 1 or 2 sounds like setting up for a fanfic while 3 sounds like an actual work.

@Techspert

Kk. Tanks. I'll see which if any is allowed, starting with 3.

Myriad Reality

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The reactions based on the personality were, not personality based on the actions. And it felt the least cliche.

@Techspert

reword

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The other two felt much shallower than the third. The first two were "Woe is me, I'm depressed, bad things happen, a wish can save everything maybe." The third is "How can I tweak the system to the extent that all of your loopholes are broken?"

@Techspert

And that's more realistic for a 16 year old girl?

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Character-wise, yes.

@Techspert

elaborate

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@DarkwolfX37

The first and second ones are sad, although the second one is sad for the sake of several lives. The third one is tamer and quite interesting, but I'm hovering between that and number two.

@Balance

dead little brother doesn't count as sad lol
Alright but why are two and three better than one?

@DarkwolfX37
3, because it seems the most realistic and developed, but all three adopt very similar tones, themes, and motifs.

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Cute!

You monster.

@Etcetera

3 is the most realistic?
These are rough drafts, so development is notwithstanding.

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Option A: "I wish I didn't have any mental disorders." OCD, Asperger's, Depression, Schizophrenia(?). Having been suicidal many times because of them, and being generally bored with life, refusing to leave her room unless to go to school, and often refusing to go because of them, she grew tired of living. After her depression reached levels she had to go to intensive psych care because she believed she caused her boyfriend to commit suicide, and later learning that she was lied to, she decided to take life easy without any commitment or motivation. Her friends didn't notice a difference, and some time later she attempted suicide due to her brother's actions and her OCD becoming overwhelming. She became distracted while in the process of overdosing and was stopped by her grandmother, who convinced her to never again try to kill herself. She recently moved to this new town after getting into a major fight at her old school, causing her to move alongside her father who was moving here because of work. She met an incubator while boarding to go there from her old hometown.

Option B: "I wish they didn't have to die!" - A vehicle carrying thin iron girders had one slide out and through the vehicle she was in. She was pierced by it and the car crashed, nearly killing her entire close family. (Mother, Sister, Brother, Grandfather.) A girl with sever depression and past suicidal tendencies who changed when faced with the reality of a death by another cause than her own choice. Not wanting her family to suffer or die, she made a wish with an incubator who appeared that they would live. Becoming a magical girl made her wounds non-fatal to her, and saved her family, however her new deathlessness made her family ostracize her with only her twin brother maintaining any contact with her. He used his saved up allowance and money from jobs he's had, having kept it his whole life in hopes of getting enough money to work towards his dream, to help send her to a new town to start a new life. She is staying with her distant uncle who is unaware of the details of what happened when she made her contract, believing that the girder landed in front of the car and caused it to flip, allowing everyone to survive mostly unharmed. Her depression ebbs and flows out of her control, remembering both the feeling of facing death and that her family now despises her for her unnatural traits. This event caused her to lose her religious faith, (A mixture of various religions) though remnants still remain in her despite this.

Option C: "Tell me more. I won't accept any contract I don't know the fine print of." "I wish magical girls, after becoming witches, returned to normal humans and didn't die when they were killed as witches." "Then could I make that wish for myself only?" "I wish that witches came about separate from the magical girl they used to be. That the girl's soul returned to them and the witch became a separate entity." "Fine then. I wish that I could be a magical girl who could use their soul gem as a purifier for others. That I could absorb their soul gem's corruption for myself, and hold it until I could use a 'grief seed,' you called it? That is my wish." A precocious girl who spent her late childhood developing and discarding countless philosophies and interests of the world, she had settled on one of irrelevance to the universe and personal worthlessness until she met the incubator. Taking many weeks to think on what she wished for, and asking many questions about what being a magical girl means, she came to the conclusion that she could overcome not entropy, but rather her lack of worth or value to the universe or even simply other people by making a wish. Her early attempts at wishes were deemed impossible, and she eventually settled on one that the incubator was capable of granting. Regardless of living with an indifferent mother and doting step father, her views of adults are usually negative. Combined with a distrust of her peers fostered by a lifetime of abuse both verbal and physical for her personality and flightiness, she is a misanthrope through and through, giving exception only to those younger than their teens. Her younger brother held a special place in her heart, and added to the development of her opinion of herself when she was unable to save his life, taken by an infant playing with open electricity who he was helping watch in place of it's parents. This event and the image and sound of her brother's pained scream and corpse haunt her to this day. She moved to this city upon becoming 16, when people in her old home were considered adults, and her housing and similar needs are paid for by her birth father and her maternal grandmother.

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Which of these sounds best and why?

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