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No worries, I'm winging it too some of the time.

I'm not sure if I should post and keep this going, or wait for some of those who haven't chimed in.

I think I'll wait, at least for the mean time. I won't wait too long because I don't want people to forget what's going on and lose interest(waiting is RP death, in my experience), but at the same time I know that not everyone is as available as me or some of the rest of us, and I don't want to leave the busier players behind.
And I wanna say, just in general, be careful with the size and particularly the number of actions in your posts. When there's multiple characters in the same area, you can't possibly respond to everything and eventually it will become a clusterfuck of events whose timeline is impossible to objectively decide.

An example is Michael putting the bill on teh counter, and the narration in Zoey's post remarking that there wasn't anyone there. When I made the post, Ellion's post had come before it, and in it Zoey had already returned to the front counter, but because of the large number of things happening, events got confused and it stopped making sense.

This sort of thing happens a lot when posts all try to react with each other. You have to be careful to keep the order of events clear, and this is the major disadvantage of longer posts, and the reason I typically advocate smaller ones for scenes with multiple players.
Healing: 3

Anti Machine: 1

Time stop: 0

Wound Transfer: 0

Looks like healing it is. Though there's a few who haven't voted yet, so maybe one of the others will turn around.

@malmshodes
@SouffleGirl123
@mskennedy615
@Polyphemus
@Wicked Sweet

Just poking some people we haven't heard from in the IC/vote.
Go ahead, I may as well see it.

I'm holding off on posting again. I want to get to my computer so I can bump the players who haven't posted/haven't voted yet. Make sure they know there's stuff to do.
For real? I was naming them after a Cutthroat Kitchen judge.
Thomas and Michael Morhaime: A pair of twins, brown hair, blue eyes, square features. Michael wears his hair short, and Thomas’ comes down to his shoulders when it's not pulled up.
The freshest legacy members of the Greenbriar Rogues, and mechanics in Springer Automotive, the shop that Audrey’s grandfather owns.

Solomon and Padma Majumdar: another pair of twins, but these ones fraternal. Mixed ethnicity, with an Indian father and African American mother. Both parents work in energy technology.
The twins are pretty hippy dippy, and both very concerned with environmental sciences. Solomon surfs, but Padma is afraid of the ocean.
Both are on a fast track to a good college in California.

Anthony Finch: in the same year as most of the characters. He is the oldest sickly baby from the lights eighteen years ago. He basically lived in hospitals until he was twelve, at which point his family just bit the bullet and brought the equipment he needed home, hiring a nurse to keep him alive.
He attended school haltingly, and often had to leave in the middle of the day to rest.

Some pretty basic info on background characters who will likely play roles in future events.
@Gisk So this light you described in your post, is it the light activating the powers? Cause in that casse I should mention my powers starting to appear in my next post.


Yeah, though you haven't posted yet, so you can have some time in the beginning before the lights.

@gisk do you want the jist of my changes/responses to your characters/the scene to help finish setting the stage? So, if other people walk in on the scene, we won't have over talk?


Yeah, I'm not sure how much change is necessary, but tell me what you did. Or I'll just read it after the edit.

Try not to make me need an edit XD
My post is up. Sorry for the length, and trigger warning for attempted suicide. If you don't want to read that, stop after the part in the cafe.
Audrey’s bike gave a low rumble as it rolled down the highway. She was going slower than usually, trying to make the most of the dollar-and-thirty-nine-cents worth of gasoline she had put in miles and hours ago. It was making her regret everything she loved about her bike, because for all of its power, it drank fuel greedily. She put on a final burst just after taking the exit ramp, and flew across the Greenbriar city limits.

With a few hours before high tide, Audrey procrastinated the inevitable return to her grandpa’s house by hitting Beach street, and parking just past the cafe. Rather than patronizing the coffee shop(with what money?), she walked past it toward the cliff, where there was a series of switchback stairs carved right out of the stone. She marched down them, hands in her pockets, and across the beach to lean against a mussel covered rock and stare out at the ocean until the tide hit her boots.

As she looked, she caught sight of a figure out on the waves that were crashing against the rocks. She didn't have to look too hard, there were only a few people crazy enough to surf in these waters at all, let alone at night. She waved Sol over, and he turned his board toward her.

A glow reflected on the water made her turn around to witness something that was striking fear into the hearts of parents all across town. A spread of lights across the only sky, outshining the moon and in shades of red, mingled with yellow and orange. They enveloped most of the sky directly over the town, with some tendrils spreading out even as far as where Audrey stood.

She turns back to Sol, her mouth open in surprise, just in time to see him lose control of his surfboard and strike one of the jagged rocks that dotted the shore. Audrey made to rush into the water to help, but the dark figure never reached the water. Indeed, the figure didn't stay dark. A white hot glow emanated from him, and rather than flailing into the water, he suddenly shot off like a glowing rocket into the sky.

“Fucking shit!”

~~~

Two Harleys roared down Beach Street, carrying tall men in matching denim vests. One pointed, as they came up on the Cliffside Cafe, to the the bank of vehicles parked on the street. The other looked, and suddenly both veered across the the street to park among them.

“Look at this piece of shit!” Thomas Morhaime said as he came upon the other motorcycle that was already parked there.

“Yup,” Michael, who matched him in more ways than clothing, replied. “Don't think anyone else rides a Honda, let alone this sparkly eyesore. Think she's inside?”

“Good bet.” He snatched the helmet that Audrey had left on the handlebar and the twins marched into the Cliffside Cafe.

They were a year ahead of the current graduating class, but were still among what everyone called the “Greenbriar Miracles,” who had survived the mysterious rash of infant deaths some eighteen or nineteen years ago. They were even more miraculous than some, as those two years had brought an unusual amount of twins, and they were one of only two pairs that had both survived. They were tall, lean and swaggering, with brown hair, blue eyes, and square features.

When they came in, Michael approached the counter, ignoring that Maren was already there, and slapped a twenty on the counter.

“Two coffees, leave a little room,” he patted the pocket of his vest that had a flask in it. Then, in a magnanimous voice as if this was a great deal of money to throw around, he added “Keep the change.”

Thomas, meanwhile, had already made a round of the few patrons in the shop, and peered out the window. He shrugged back at his twin when their eyes met, and Michael looked back between Zoey and Maren.

“Where’s Aud?” His voice was just barely on the right side of casual, with a hint of ill intent behind it.

Thomas was peering out onto the balcony seating when the windows were all lit up by a warm glow from the sky. He called his brother over, and he looked out just in time to see something blindingly bright soar up and out of sight, close enough to rattle the windows.

~~~

I'm a windowless basement, where the sky couldn't be seen, even as miraculous lights filled it, another graduate sat alone. Anthony Finch, sickly and frail as ever, was still wearing his graduation gown and cap. He had a blank look on his face, and his mouth was somewhat slack.

This passage into adulthood meant nothing to someone who could never travel far from home, who needed his dialysis every other day. Who became tired and had to sit and rest twice and hour.

What could someone like him accomplish? What sort of life was he doomed to?

He didn't mean to find out.

He twiddled the razor blade in his hand for a moment longer, but no matter how he twisted his mind, he couldn't talk himself out of it.

He put the blade to work.
@Ellion Actually, you'll see in my post there's a set of stairs right by the cafe, set into the cliff.

You can say that she saw Audrey pass by on her way down if you like. It might be useful for her to know where she is.
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