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Tokoshie no Ansoku

And there you go first OCC post is now up! I deiced to cut it in half to avoid making it too oppressively long meaning that you won't get to seem my CS just yeeeet. For now it's going to remain a mystery.

Tokoshie no Ansoku

When to this sense of fear and evil the inevitable fascination of wonder and curiosity is superadded, there is born a composite body of keen emotion and imaginative provocation whose vitality must of necessity endure as long as the human race itself. Children will always be afraid of the dark, and men with minds sensitive to hereditary impulse will always tremble at the thought of the hidden and fathomless worlds of strange life which may pulsate in the gulfs beyond the stars, or press hideously upon our own globe in unholy dimensions which only the dead and the moonstruck can glimpse.
~ H.P Lovecraft

Act 1: Baby Steps

Zone 2
Coalition Research Center 2-1 aka Babel

Many denizens of Zone 2 can rightfully claim that they have seen Babel before but not many can claim that they had ever entered the building. Built atop the remnants of the old Ministry of Defense building destroyed during the Long War. It was rather stereotypical in appearance to the government buildings created in the aftermath of the War, it towered above the rest of the city, five towers crafted of deep black stone that seemed to absorb all light that hit it, and connected by large glass walkways the glass tinted so that the public could not view inside. And yet there was something undoubtedly strange about the building. Specifically it had no outward fortifications to separate itself from the rest of the city, their were no guard post or high walled fences, no security of any kind could be determinable anywhere about the campus; yet no souls dared to move across the invisible boundary that lay between the sidewalk and the finely cut grass that surrounded that single pathway that lead up to the entrance of the primary tower, each stone engraved with the names of those that died in defense of the Zone. People on their commute stayed as close to the curb as possible as they hurried by, some even stepping in the streets than dare stepping on the grass. No squirrels dared to run across the grass to try and grab at an acorn fallen from a tree and not even the birds dared to fly above the building just like the rare planes from central that dared the hordes of demons to bring in personal and supplies to their island fortress who were always routed far and away from the building's airspace. It was as if none dared corrupt the sanctity of the place with their presence.

Though early in the morning before the sun peaked above the skies their was discernible moment happening around the campus. It was a routine that had happened four times before and would likely happen again afterwards. Large APCs arrived on the scene, first one arrived and then a second, and a third and forth before more than dozen came. They were parked so that they formed a small wall and that any curious onlookers breaking curfew or peering out from their windows wouldn't be able to see within. What they would of seen was a scene of organized chaos. Men and women in clean cut uniforms marking them as Coalition military began ushering children out of the vehicles, most seemed disorientated and some still had tears in their eyes. They were the profits of a successful mission that took place all across the Zone. More or less abducted from their dwellings and shoved into the APCs without much of a word they were all ushered back to Tokyo 2 for the next stage in the operation. It was more dangerous in night and they risk more attacks then but it had to be done, it was better this way. Then row by row, group by group they were ushered into the main tower. As they did the APCs vanished into the night and a maintenance team got to work wiping away any remnants of them ever being there.

Almost immediately upon stepping inside the children were assaulted by an array of medical staff with strange instruments. Physical checkups began: eye sight was tested, reaction time was checked, blood samples were taken and some in the process were taken away by the scientist never to be seen again in the latter stages. After this they were all strapped of any personal belongings including clothing all of which were placed in plastic bags and filed away, they were showered and then given all uniform jumpsuits all slate gray in color and each inscribed with a ten digit number sequence upon the breast pocket, all of which started with the number five. After this the children were brought to a large open room filled with beds, each bed with a number corresponding to the one on their uniform. After the children found their beds, the adults stopped for awhile and drifted away leaving only a few guards around the edge of the room stern and impassive refusing to answer any question that were thrown their way. Some freaked out, some broke down, and others tired to talking to one another to try and get a better sense of what was going on to little success. But from what they could gather all of them had tested successfully as being 'limiters' whatever that meant. In the end they all did the only thing they could do wait.

Eventually some hours later the whole process began again as the children were rearranged into rows by number and marched through the cold and silent hall ways of the complex. They eventually arrived within a large room that appeared to be a lecture hall of some sort and one by one they were seated. Two large television screens dominated the far walls and they currently showed a camera image focused on a lone podium at the bottom which was currently unoccupied. Their was clearly going to be a presentation of some sort but at the current moment their was no activity below. So once again the children were more or less left to themselves beside the armed guards that stood at the end of each row and at the exits preventing the children from leaving. And slowly the conversations began again.

Tokoshie no Ansoku

@greywolf375
That's totally okay, As I currently have the first so called 'act' of the game currently structured it'll be easy for to jump in even after we started. Anyway CS is done and I'm working on the IC post now, I'll post them both back to back once both are ready to go live!

Naruto: Consequences

Amd while taking longer than expected, I believe I have finally finished my application!

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Suzu Watanabe 鈴渡邉, The Closed Palm

Summary: A disliked, self-promoting, discourteous, and obnoxious individual who fights for a better future as if it's a god given task.
Age: 15
Rank: D
Village Affiliation: Iwagakure

Person Information

Personal Info

Fame:

Personality:
Suzu if anything else is that she stands by her convictions. This is something that she picked up from her own father's often gregarious and flamboyant actions when discussing his own matter of opinions. A man that never stood down when he knew he was right and always took the moral road forward even if it was wrought with misery. He made sure to instill these ideals into his daughter, his only small light to fling into a future ever growing darker.

It is because of this that Suzu often comes off as abrasive as she really doesn't shut up when she probably should. This generally leads to arguments among her peers and among those who probably no better than her. But fight on she does refusing to step down once an issue is made. To this degree she is unflinching in her words to the point where she does not care how cruel or consider she sounds her points will be made and her opinions on those around her will be well known by everyone and anyone that cares to listen. Consequently words like obnoxious and disliked float around her like a thick fog and label her as one to be avoided. Friends do not come easily to her as most already have her written off as a self-centered brat that doesn't know when to step down gracefully. Though you can't blame them as it sounds as good as any testament to Suzu's character and it's one to that she holds onto with pride.

Despite the fact that all her woes could be solved if she just stepped down for once she never does. It's a fault of hers as the world to her is displayed in two extremes of right and wrong. More often then not she sees herself in the right section of things. She continues her bitter remarks and arguments in her own way of moving towards the greater good. Some care just about saving people and doing good, but Suzu cares about making things right and in doing the right thing in the moment damn the consequences and damn what others think. Her ideals are simple things or things that she thinks should be simple ideas to comprehend, she wants all to have justice and all to have the freedom to choose their own paths in life and hates those with a passion that try to take people's own
freedoms away. She is a closed palm unwilling to open and clasp heavily in these values.

But despite her harsh attitude and almost permanent state of fervent passion at the perceived unwillingness of others their still lays something of a girl beneath it all. The blowhard display being more or less a sort of mask that she uses to hide her own frustrations and failures by venting her anger outwards at everyone and everyone within arguing range. The pressures of walking in the footsteps of her own father and living up to the legacy that he has built feels like the weight of the world upon her shoulders but you'll never hear her say that.

History:
From the beginning it had always been Suzu and her father. Her mother having died due to complications during child birth. Suzu's father, Hiro was a well respected Medical0-nin within Iwagakure who had gained the moniker of the Healing Wave of Iwagakure. Though eventually even great tsunamis will receded back into the ocean and the combined loss of his wife's death and his own inability to save her from death as he did many others caused him to step down from his position in charge of Iwagakure's hospital and receded to an isolated life with his daughter in their small house on the edge of the village. From that point forward when Hiro was not drinking himself to sleep to keep the nightmares at by he was entirely focused on the one thing he had in life remaining his young daughter.

As Suzu grew in age the two began she began to teach her own father as much as he taught her. Hiro was a harsh teacher even when Suzu was at a very young age training her relentless for hours open hours from sparring to proper hand signs and most importantly medical knowledge. He still had many of his old texts from his time at the hospitals on medical theory and human anatomy and he would not be satisfied until Suzu could recite them from memory front to back without stumbling, a mispronunciation or wrong fact meant more training and no dinner that night. All in an effort to train her to become an even greater medical-nin then he ever was, he had one goal in mind that this time nobody had to die. Suzu also began to teach and take care of her father in many ways. As he was often many days too drunk to do much of anything and spent most of their money on drinks and other vices she began to predominant caretaker of the household. It was in this facet of her life that she began to develop the independence and stubborn attitude that would define her in her own later in her life. In haggling and in keeping things in order she had to be stout in her convictions and outspokenly loud to get her own drunken father out of the bed in the morning or when buying things.

The village saw something that Suzu would never really understand but it seemed that Hiro training was doing maybe what it exactly intended. As the young girl grew and especially as she entered the academy to begin training as ninja she slowly became the mirror image of her own father in his youth. In the academy she did well enough not the best in the class but not the worst either probably helped by her father's own additional training. While she became acquainted with the individuals around her she would not make many friends partly due to her own personality and partly due to the fact that she had to take care of things at home. As she had entered the academy, Hiro's drinking had gotten worse and worse as time progressed drinking more and more to the point that on some days, Suzu could not even rise him from his alcohol induced slumber.

Then came the day of Suzu graduation from the Village. It would be a day that she remembered for the rest of her life. She awoke in the early morning the smell cooking food and quickly went downstairs to fend that her father was for the first time in her life awake before she was. He had cooked breakfast and even seemed to have showered and taken the effort to find clean clothes to wear. They held small talk during breakfast mostly about her upcoming graduation and her plans for what would come next. After that with some time to spare, Suzu and Hiro did something they had never done before the two of them visited Suzu's mother's grave. Suzu had gone by herself time and again but never with her father who seemed to avoid the place with a passion. The constant reminder of his failures. Here they talked again in the early morning though it was mostly Hiro talking and Suzu listening on. First he spoke of her mother, the blazing fury to Hiro's more gentle healing techniques. He told her that she would of been proud of Suzu and that she always wanted a daughter. After that they talk about the future, how no matter what happened that Suzu would have to keep fighting, she would have to survive and endure and would have to do what even he couldn't. He apologized for placing his own hopes and dreams upon her shoulders and that no young child even deserved such things. And finally he told her that he loved her, the first time he had said those words in many many years. It was the best moment Suzu had in her short life as it was the one time she saw the man that her father had locked away long ago with alcohol. The one that the others in the village spoke in such reverence and such despair of how far he had fallen.

This would be the last time that Suzu would talk to her father though. When she arrived home from the graduation ceremony that day she... found him. He was in the central room of the house having hanged himself from the rafters of the old house. On the floor at his feet a simple not that had one word on it. Goodbye. It rained when they buried him and not many people were around to watch the ceremony, a few close friends but that was about it. And where others would have collapsed or given up, this was the turning point in Suzu's life, with a hardened resolve and newfound convictions she promised to upheld those dreams and hopes that he had thrust upon her. She would do what he couldn't do. She would prevent anything like this from happening ever again. Nobody would die this time.

Combat Information

Combat info

General Information

Combat Summary: As a would-be medical-nin, Suzu sticks to the back supporting and healing her teammates while harassing the enemy.

Skills:
Ninjutsu ~Medical Ninjutsu~: C
Chakra Control: C
Genjutsu: D
Chakra Flow: D
Summoning: D


KG/Hiden: N/A
Mastery: N/A

Weapon & Summoning List

Hider

Standard Weapons: Suzu carries the standard allotment of weapons as well as some basic medical supplies to supplement her own medical training.

Summon Contracts: Apes

Size: She can currently only summon small apes about the size of chimpanzees.

Unique Traits: Besides their ability to speak the apes are general the same as their real work counterparts though they do show a particular affinity with ninja tools that one would not expect with such animals.

Personal Summons

Name: Kin

Ability: Kin looks similar in appearance to a pygmy chimpanzee. Suzu currently only uses him as another form of distraction sending him after her foes to keep them preoccupied as his speed and durability allow him to serve as a more direct form of harassment. With his supreme climbing abilities and agile body he can also serve as a scout from time to time as needed.
Size: About average for a real world creature of his size, so when fully standing he looms at roughly 115 cm.
Personality: Calm and Sardonic, he is the antithesis to Suzu's more fiery personality.

Jutsu List

Canon Jutsu

Hider

Ninjutsu

• Shōsen Jutsu
• Kuchiyose no Jutsu
• Doton: Shinjū Zanshu no Jutsu

Genjutsu

• Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu
• Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu

Custom Jutsu

Hider

Name: Divergent Palm
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Contact
Hand Signs: Three
Description: Using the same principles as the Shōsen Jutsu, Suzu strikes an opponent with an open palm but rather than using the chakra to heal the individual it inside causes a single shock wave within the body damaging internal systems.

Name: Light Dance
Type: Genjutsu
Rank: D
Range: mid-long
Hand Signs: Three
Description: Suzu's opponent vision is hampered by several painfully bright orbs of light that appear and vanish at random intervals in front of their face. The effects are disorienting at the best and annoying at the least.

Name: Tremor Wave
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Range: mid-long
Hand Signs: Three
Description: Using a combination of medical knowledge and Ninjusu Suzu produces a noise from her mouth amplified and distorted ahead of her in a cone shape. The frequency effects those caught within the cone the low sounds causing pain in the bowls and stomach region.

Tokoshie no Ansoku

@KoL

Sorry, work been a little on the hectic side but things have quieted down. I will usually tell you all if something like this comes up, but sometimes I just don't have the time.

@DontCallMeZelda@Little_ninja@Algorhythm
I see no problems with any of your CSs so without further delay, accepted!

Everybody else (@Fabricant451@TheWindel@Nerevarine and whoever else I may have forgotten to tag)
IC post and my own CS are going to be coming up today, so keep an eye out for that!

Tokoshie no Ansoku

@TheWindel
Ah all right! Anyway if you are just going to just keep the sand then everything else is good accepted!

Tokoshie no Ansoku

Alright without further delay it is now time for the Reviews!

@DontCallMeZelda
Looks pretty good. I really just want you to clean it up a little it up a little bit. Like the stuff in gray like Everyone has a history. I want a good idea of where they are coming from and where they are going are in erase those words and within the boundaries of that [indent][color=7d7d7d] ~~~~ [/color][/indent] In that space marked by the ~~~ You would place your information so that it becomes formatted properly. Once you do that I don't see any other problems of major concern.

Look Inside me!

Your Biography/Background section will now look something like this, which looks much neater.

Born in a small town in Zone 2, Jyne spent most of her early childhood wasting the days away with her lovable dog, Cho. Jyne and Cho were inseparable. Jyne did not know the full story of why she was given her best friend but as a small child she did not object to this. But, when Jyne was born, her mother actually passed away in childbirth due to other complications than her health. Her father raised Jyne and spent every day looking in her eyes and only seeing his wife. Due to this, her father never remarried and thus she had no siblings. In order to help her cope with this preemptively, her father bought Jyne the runt of a German shepherd litter and the two instantly became best friends. Her father homeschooled Jyne as he did not want her to leave his sight. However, the Moonmen would prove to complicate that. Or so she thought it was the Moonmen.

When Jyne was about 9 something attacked her town. The result was not pretty as most would have guessed. Her father got her to an safe zone but ended up getting himself killed in trying to save her. As a child, she was able to understand death as she watched her life shatter before her eyes. When she was extracted, she and her dog Cho were put in foster care. It was only then that things would prove to get complicated for her. Her body started to change and her powers started to show in great force. Due to her unstable powers, her faithful and lovable best friend Cho was taken from her. Cho was put down in front of her tear filled eyes as the parents believed her dog to be some kind of catalyst for the strange powers. She proved to be too unstable for her first foster family and they put her back up for adoption.

A second family took her in when she was about 14 and they proved to not want to handle her powers either. This family sent her to get tests and screenings as the people were afraid she was some kind of monster or a proxy of some kind. She tested negative for any kind of monster likeness but she did test positive for something else... Everyone has a history. I want a good idea of where they are coming from and where they are going.

@DontCallMeZelda

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@Fabricant451
Everything looks good on my end. Hmm never really thought about what would happen in Korea but it makes sense that I would fall relativity earlier since it's still attached to the mainland and thus experienced the full brunt of the assault. Anyway accepted!

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@LostDestiny
It's a good start but I'm going to ask you to flesh it out just a little bit more. I'm going to ask that you add some more to the history and the personality sections give em a little bit more life to them look at some of the others that were accepted if you want a better idea of what I'm aiming for. I want to have a good idea of your character what makes them the person they are, and how their history has shaped them into what they are today. Beside that everything else is pretty okay, and I would probably classify her as Speed type as the teleportation sort of lends itself to that. Anyway once you flesh her out a bit more I'll look her over again and hopefully all will be well!

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@Nerevarine
You know I really like the idea, I've read about the Dekasegi before but never actually seen anyone do anything with them before. Anyway everything looks good on this side of things Accepted!

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@TheWindel
The only real problem I see is that she has well two abilities instead of one. Her counter act and the black sand. You either will have to cut one of them or figure out a nifty way of tying them together. Maybe like the sand sort of acts like a shield that when they hit it strikes back at them and if she wants she can expand it forward to do it's all devouring thing or something else or if you just want to cut one out. Whatever really suits your boat. Once you figure that little thing out all shall be well!

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@KoL
Actually everything looks pretty good on my end! I like how her ice powers are different form the standard far in that you know it's terrible for everyone including her! I think that fits well with the general overall theme of suckiness that this is probably going to fall into. Just a quick question to clarify for me and then we will all be good. Where the Russian's a military detachment in Japan at the time or did she somehow cross the East China Sea? Just wondering for clarification purposes. Once you answer that all should be good!

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@Dead Cruiser
Nope I don't oppose it just expect me to be a little bit more harsh in the reviewing process most likely. Just because of the rarity factor, I want to see a really good CS lol.

I would go with either or in terms of telepathy and psychokinesis. Powers are typically one thing so you can have psychokinesis but have layers within that psychokinesis as you can do more things with it and get more better trained with it. But I would considered telepathy and psychokinesis to be two different powers instead of under one banner if you catch my drift.

And yeah strange hair and eye colors could certainly be a thing.

Tokoshie no Ansoku

Alright, I'm actually home now, so I don't have fifty five things bombarding me at once. So time to do some damage control.

@Dead Cruiser
When I said rare, I meant rare to the degrees of it's a statistical anomalies and they have no idea why. Of all limiters about 99.6 percent of them will be female about .4 percent of them will be male. In a world's whose human population is less than half of what it was twenty years ago at modern levels and then take the percentage of that from children twenty years or younger (which once again is going to be small, not a lot of people are concerned about the whole making babies thing or heck having children in the state of the world it currently is) that number is getting smaller and smaller. That being said some will exist. Meaning that I will probably accept one to two of the male gender to represent this disparity. With an acceptance pool this small, those are going to be reviewed and accepted on a much stricter and more harsher level than those of the female persuasion. There will be your Tuxedo Masks in the ranks but they will be small and limited if you know what I mean.

@LostDestiny
No need to apologize and I understand. I just stated that not really towards you but to everyone in general to avoid as much confusion then we already have had. lol Sorry if I come off as abrasive or anything, just tell me and I'll tone it down a little bit.

To everyone:
And on that note, fair warning I can be mean sometimes but that is only because I care. So I'll start reviewing CSs soon. Hopefully we won't run into any issues!

Tokoshie no Ansoku

So. Many. Girls. I can change my character to a guy or make a male character if needed.

@LostDestiny

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I thought we were supposed to only make girl characters <.<

@TheWindel

Windel is right you are only supposed to make girl characters, I said so in the interest check (but I think I didn't mention it in the OCC. But then again I didn't make you list gender so I thought it was obvious -_-. You know it ain't much of a exploration and subversion of the magical girl genere if they ain't well girls.)

Tokoshie no Ansoku

So just to clarify, the more powerful an ability is, the more severe the consequences are to the user, right? They can be either physical or mental drawbacks?

@TheWindel

That's right!

To everyone
I'm still at work right now, so I'll be able to answer any questions anyone throws my way but I won't be able to review any CSs till later when I get home proper.