Hydra, that actually made me laugh out loud. Nice.I laughed. Thank you.I'm glad you liked it. After reading it again i made some grammar changes. Glad you were able to understand it. I was sleepy as hell when i wrote it.

"I like it when the center is wet."
"You're the biggest bitch I know, but you're funny sometimes, so it's okay."



Hydra, that actually made me laugh out loud. Nice.I laughed. Thank you.I'm glad you liked it. After reading it again i made some grammar changes. Glad you were able to understand it. I was sleepy as hell when i wrote it.
@Inertia the character looks good for the most part. The only gripe I have is your magic level, I wanted those who would start at a Sorcerer level to be solely mages giving them some nice spellpower to make up for their lack of strength with a blade. with your character learning of this magic only after is separation from the brother, which if I'm reading right was only about a year of trying to learn magic, so with that much time to learn I would say your still on the Apprentice level.I see, makes sense, I knew something was off, changing right now.
I assume that's some kind of condom, so,For exposition sake, this is an 'anti-rape' device, you see the reverse shark tooth, going in is smooth, but pulling out... Well, you can guess the rest. Yes, I did cringe too when I first read about it. On topic: Edit: Ninja'd
Well, sweat if you are running from lions and tigers and bears but otherwise we can wait.That's weirdly specific, you alright? Haha
Welp, not really on mark BUT.