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7 yrs ago
Current "Soon you will have forgotten all things. And soon all things will have forgotten you."
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@Kho
Here. I made an ugly, sucky, sketchy, weird map. Obviously I don't want Kho to make this official in anyway (otherwise I would have tried to make it look better), so it's only a suggestion.

I tried to be fair and make every kingdom about the same size, with the humans being a bit bigger (been here longer).



Hmm, it looks nice, but it ignores Orabil, Orabson and the Southern Mountains, I propose:



Uri and Cimex are still technically in the south and east.
I'll get a map up in a sec.
@IrishAngelQueen Demigod child of Vestec now available. Feel free to make a CS and post it here.

Sheet:

NAME:

ALIAS:

GENDER:

RACE: (probably a human demigod in your case)

APPEARANCE:

DOMAIN (Portfolio):

DOMAIN (Portfolio) DESCRIPTION/EXPLANATION:

HISTORY:

PERSONALITY:

ALIGNMENT:

MUSIC THEME:

ITEMS:

ABILITIES:
I'd say we need a time-skip post for Aestus or at least a post for Undasis before moving on. Hopefully that can be up ASAP. Plus, most gods still have Might aplenty, so no reason to move on quite yet.
@Lugubrious Feel free to go ahead and post Invidia's arrival at the conference/sitting in wait for the conference to begin
@LokiLeo789
Quay:
Spelling and Grammar: 6/10 (keep writing, and read more, and you'll definitely improve ;D)
Writing Quality: 7/10 (Good for the most part, but there are some parts that don't make sense or are a bit confusing, leaving one guessing as to what happened from the context.)
Story Line Advancement: 9/10 (very good, you've contextualised the kingdom and introduced Quay, and he's the first to head off for the Summit which is currently taking centre stage, it would seem)
Character Development: 7/10 (interesting, there will be a great amount of development. Already he has gone from the simple prince to the hero blessed by Arguis and Escre, he has left behind all he knows and ventures into a brave new world. Very good)
Independence: 10/10 (don't think I could give you any less than 10, as harsh as I try to be xD)
10 Khookies earned

Zek'Ri:

Was just a paragraph in that post, but I will grant 9 Khookies to him.

@Cyclone Added holy sites and worshippers to the end of the demigod hider. If you have any questions, feel free to grill me.
@LokiLeo789 will give you some Khookies for both your Heroes in a bit
@Cyclone They get Might like gods, per turn. Forgot to put the bit about worshippers and holy sites...

Will add in a bit
Expanded Demigod section.
Apologies for the delay. I believe this is the first time I have set myself a deadline and not met it. Needless to say, I have been extraordinarily tired and was simply unable. Apologies for any hearts broken, ladies, Kho may be nigh-almighty, but he is only nigh.
@Lugubrious No, ask him and edit as appropriate. Either way, the manner of death is bizarre at best, and if Frettzo is fine by her being killed off, then you would have to find a better way - I would say she would have had to willfully terminated herself, no external force other than the power of other gods could possibly cause her death.
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