KoL

Hikari Academy

@EpicKDP

Your CS is not uncomfortable, but it's hard to understand. There's so many grammar errors all over it that it's next to impossible to make sense of anything you wrote.

First, the image is not working. You can either fix that or give us a text description.

Second, that set of powers/skills is very weird and has no synchrony at all. Being able to fix any computer or machine in the modern world is way too advanced for someone who is supposed to be a student. It's an incredibly unrealistic skill given how fast the technology evolves and how hard it's to understand either of them (computers or machines). To make it even more unrealistic, you tossed plant magic and knowledge of botany on top of being a gadgeteer. That just doesn't make sense.

I'll ask you to choose between one of the three powers/skills (computers, machines, or plants) and then regulate it to a level compatible with your character's age.

Third, using terms like "status changers" further breaks the already thin suspension of disbelief of your CS. The world is not a videogame; avoid that.

Fourth, and last, what is happening on that sample post? It's too random to the point that I can't comprehend anything you tried to to do there.

Just to be clear, we are not taking in any piece of writing without the least quality control. I suggest you correct the grammar errors, expand it and make your message clear. Then we will evaluate your CS again.

I hope that this information was useful.

Hikari Academy

Either tomorrow or the 26th, I will post. I definitely won't be able to at christmas

@Silver Carrot

No worries.

@floodtalon

Accepted.

Hikari Academy

@CrazyCatCaitlin

Accepted.

Hikari Academy

@Awesomoman64

Accepted.

Hikari Academy

@RoccanIronclad If you do not mind fighting now, we can collab our fight together. I prefer via Google Doc, but whether PM or Doc is up to you.

@Conscripts

Just keep the time frame of the whole RP in mind while do whatever you want to do.

Are you still accepting

@EpicKDP

For the time being, yes, we are. Welcome.

Hikari Academy

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"It has began once again, huh?" Reiko said to herself as she observed the beginning of another term through her office's half-closed blinds. She glanced towards the clock only to see that there were just a few minutes between now and the time of the opening ceremony, finished another cigarette and glanced at the formal outfit hanging from a hack on the far side of the room: A complete witch's garb, including a wide-brimmed, pointed hat and cloak, even though the suit that accompanied them looked far more like the clothes of an office drone than what you'd expect from a real magician. Reiko disliked wearing the damn thing, but her Teacher was a woman fond of outdated traditions, just as you'd expect from a being as... ancient as the Magister.

"There's no point in trying to swim against the current," Reiko acquiesced to whatever force compelled her towards her obligations. A snap of a finger later and she was on her way to the Great Hall, right as the tolling bells announced the immediate beginning of the opening ceremony. "I hope that she doesn't get late this time. Dealing with confused students gets old fast," Reiko complained under her breath, immediately wishing she hadn't let her pack of cigarettes behind.

Reiko arrived at the Great Hall a few minutes later. She waited for the remaining students' arrival beside the door leading into the main hallway while a short feature film, with visuals styled like a pop-up book, retelling one of the most common versions of the Legend of the first Dawn Slayers, was being projected to those already there. The Ceremony would begin as soon as the film ended. Reiko certainly hoped that no students were intent on testing her patience on their first day in the Academy.

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KoL's Test Thread

Hikari Academy

@Silver Carrot

He's ok with me as well.

The War of the Three

The approach of not one, but two opponents of appreciable size did not go unnoticed by the Behemoth from the Depths, even though the threats issued by the other beings who found themselves within its dark presence weren't so easy to acknowledge in this large-scale conflict.

The monster didn't see to react to Unit-T or Anteus, at first, merely trudging its way towards the center of the ruins regardless of who chose to stand on its path. This facade of ignorance concealed a frighteningly sharp intellect, that didn't miss anything happening around it.

The darkness seemed to thicken even more as it entered Lenuria properly said, to a degree were it physically clung to anything in contact with it, acting like thick soup, or a glue, that dampened almost all sound within it save for the monsters own terror instilling grunts and the cries of pain and death that followed it, almost as if Lenuria itself, or the remnants of its long-gone citizens convulsed in pain, forced to relive the day of their dooming. It would quickly become apparent as the darkness became more and more palpable and that the cries come directly from it, bleeding and spewing mind-warping energies on all who dared stand close to the monster. Not only the beast's physical strength was an appreciable threat for even Champions of the Triumvirate banded together, but to stand on its presence meant to be bathed by a maddening power that defies comprehension.

A dreadful roar heralded its entry in the combat properly said. All of a sudden the monster changed, seeming to grow even large, or had it spawned copies of itself? One could only wonder. The truth is that the target which came into Unit-T's line of fire was slightly smaller than the monster in question, but seemed every bit as powerful. The beam attack closed at it straight in the chest, at the same time as what looked like a powerful breath attack coming from the monster in front of Anteus would be perceptible only when it was almost in the earthen titan's face. Unit-T itself would find that one of the Monsters had somehow swan behind it and was closing in fast for a ramming attack, while a parasite rode its back; its intent unknown.

Whatever their foe actually was, its power and abilities were nothing to be underestimated.

Meanwhile, Cassiopeia would find herself in the throne room. Ruin and decay covered every bit of the once magnificent hall, whose only interesting immediately visible features were the throne itself as well as the mermaid's skeletons littering the chamber. Even among those who seemed to have belonged to warriors of old, one of them still dressed in a suit of armor seemingly made of coral, whose design was reminiscent of the iconic armor worn by the mighty Valkyries of Celestia and wielding a once dazzling trident, commanded the most attention.

Aside from the skeletons and the throne, there was also a great magic circle buried under the dust and mud. It spanned almost the whole room and its center had a socket designed to fit something of approximately the thickness of a sword's hilt. Maybe the room, just like the palace still guarded more secrets. Finding them, if there were any, would certainly require more exploration.

The outcome of these findings would be decided by the slime's next set of actions.

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Hikari Academy

Probably yes, but that's something better left for her to find out IC, not?