KoL

Fate/esoterica

Kirsi Eirisphere

“Oh yeah, that’s what we are doing here,” Kirsi said to the Overseer lady who looked very unlike what she was expecting to see. The smallish blonde smiled in a childish manner while scratching the back of her head as she asked, “So, eh… is there any contract we need to sign? Or ritual required by the Church? Or, maybe, can we just go already?”

Lancer

“You needn’t worry, Master. I’ve had my share of sleeping for a whole life time. A nocturnal vigil is something that I would hardly disagree with,” Lancer said, answering her Master’s hesitant question.

“Regarding the matter of clothes. I appreciate your concern. As long as it’s not going to impose too much upon you, I’ll gladly accept it. Actually...” Lancer said. She made a short pause as if she were uncertain whether or not to say what she had in mind before finally making her mind and saying, “there’s a request that I’d like to make. If it’s not too much, could I ask you for a pair of glasses as well? It’s difficult to explain the reason for this, nevertheless, I would be indebted to you for it.”

Kurai Majoko: Dark Magical Girls

“...” Aegis let out an audible sigh as she noticed that she was being followed. Did those girls not learn anything from what happened less than a week ago?

At first, she thought that if she remained quiet and ignored the other she would get the message and go away. When that didn’t work, Aegis turned around and said, “Oh, is that so? And what if I came here to borrow a book from your library? Or apply to an internship? Would that still be the same thing you are looking for?” while piercing the other girl with her characteristic dagger-like glare.

“At any rate, I have a feeling that trying to shoo you away won’t really work. Just be aware that, if you keep following me, I’m not responsible for whatever happens to you. You really don’t know what you are getting yourself into…”

“Excuse me,” a voice — a hesitant one — finally came from the desk behind Touka’s. Its owner had remained silent through the course of the whole first half of the school day, seemingly soaking in all the details of the classroom before making any actions of her own. “Would you like to have lunch together?” she said as she produced a lovingly-packed bentou box from within her desk.

“I brought my own as well. But, eating with company makes the food have a whole other taste, right?” she said. “By the way, I guess that we have been classmates for a pretty long time but I never got the chance to introduce myself. I’m Seyrun, it’s a pleasure meeting you,” she added, extending her hand to Touka in a definitely Western greeting.

Neo Sorairo

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Mila’s reaction drew a sigh, and then a chuckle, out of Mavis. "Never change, girl, never change," the redhead said, patting her friend’s back an amused way. Once she was done with her chortling, Mavis spun on her heels and marched away to their objective, always paying close attention to any invaders lurking in the shadows.

With Subaru’s precise navigation, it didn’t take long for them to reach their destination: a solitary sensor atop an old building. Swapping the batteries hardly took a couple minutes, leaving their team with plenty of time to deal with their last objective.

"I wonder how the others are going?" Mavis said as she took some time to rest. She produced an energy bar from one of her coat pockets, as well as a water bottle and found a place to sit by the edge of the derelict rooftop as she munched on her snacks. "Let’s give Subaru some time to organize the mission data. While we do that, we may as well take a quick break, right? Here, think fast!" Mavis said as she threw a snack towards Mila.

"According to the most recent update, it seems that the disappearance problem has been solved. The two of you can remain on standby while I process the data relative to our next target," Subaru said, her voice coming through her drone as it hovered silently around them. "None of the other squads seem to have encountered any substantial hardships up to now," she added, reporting on the condition of the other teams.

"Just like I thought. I guess this is fine as well, don’t you think?" Mavis said — apparently more to herself than the others — as she overlooked the post-apocalyptic scenery before her eyes while her hair swayed in the breeze.

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Neo Sorairo

@Skyswimsky

I'm ok with her being able to gather information, buff/debuff targets, and being able to form some sort of connection with others (as long as it doesn't go into forceful mind reading). Because all of these feats could be achieved through equipment and/or other kinds of abilities.

What I'm not pleased with is the wording you used on the description, since it makes her seem too much of a reality warper.

So, the effects you want to have are ok, but the description of how they work isn't. Just like what happened with @Melkor's character, if you change the description, it should be ok on my end.

Once we've settled with the power, I'll take a detailed look at the rest of your CS.

Neo Sorairo

@Skyswimsky

To elaborate. That ability is too close to low-key Reality Warping powers for us to allow it without better explanations. After you clear that up we can consider any necessary tweaks.

Neo Sorairo

@SimpleWriter
I'm waiting on you by the way.

Neo Sorairo

Here's another announcement.

Also, I'll say this now so that it doesn't happen again in the future:
Don't do collabs isolating your characters from other players unless you are already alone in a scene. If for some reason you need to do a collab post and there are other players around either you include them in the post or don't do the collab at all.

Neo Sorairo

As for the nationality, I can swap it over to Ethiopian if you guys really want me to. I just didn't think it'd be a big deal if I left it.

@AdmrlStalfos19

Well, it's not a big deal, but since everyone is using actual nations as place of origin, it would be better if your character fell in line with that as well.

It's just a question of semantics, really.

Neo Sorairo

@AdmrlStalfos19
I think your CS is mostly alright. Though, I'd like to point that the one thing that's not correct there is that Africa isn't a country so African as a nationality makes no sense. Other than this question of geography, I think everything else is ok.

Just wait for @TheWindel's opinion before moving him to the CS tab.

Fate/esoterica

Lancer

Lancer decided to not reply to Kazamyr’s words. A Master that didn’t understand the honor of a Heroic Spirit — even of those among them who were worthy being called Antiheroes — was not the kind of person the silver-haired Servant wished to bother herself with. Rider, however, was another story.

“Even though I’m unaware of a Heroic Spirit — especially one of the last warriors to roam the battlefields of Age of the Gods — who would not feel pride in having their identity be recognized by others, I’ll do as you request, Rider,” Lancer said as she stared the ancient king from above, just like an angel chiseled from the most pristine marble. “I imagine that the Holy Grail might be of greater value to some than it’s to others, after all,” she added in cold voice.

“Nevertheless, I shall take my leave now. May the Allfather’s blessings be with you until we cross paths again,” Lancer said as she vanished once more, letting her body slowly revert back into the ether from which it was built.

“We must leave now, Master. We learned more than we could have expected. Now, we must devise a strategy to make good use of this information,” Lancer said telepathically as she got back to her Master’s side.