Letter Bee

Ashes to Ashes, a freeform Sci-Fi Fantansy NRP.

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For military and technology, atleast two paragraphs, with descriptions for every major division and every major piece of technology.

4 paragraphs at minimum per a post, as prescribed by rule 5.

@duck55223

Yeah, just saw that. Four three-line posts, or four five-line posts? If the latter, it's a deal-breaker.

Ashes to Ashes, a freeform Sci-Fi Fantansy NRP.

@duck55223, what are the required paragraph lengths for Technology and Military?

Also, what is the required length of an Advanced Story post?

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Abrupt? Maybe a little, then again the plot is basically starting to thicken so it's not unreasonable. Anticlimactic? That's more a subjective thing. For example, I might think it wasn't, but someone else might think that it was.

@Double

Thanks, Double.

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That's more or less the point I was making. Any post I made would have probably been some half-assed thing where he doesn't really do anything.

@Double

I see.

Anyway, do you think the end of the fight was abrupt or anticlimactic?

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As Amaya successfully blocked the chains, Angus' golden eyes glowed, and the Knight Templar began laughing, his accent changing mid-laugh from Scottish, to Greek. He then spoke:

"You are well-learned for a sellsword, sellsword. Yes, Angus has lost faith in his order and his God; who wouldn't when they saw the leader of the order being burnt at the stake on false charges, all to satisfy the caprice of earthly rulers? Not that he's even the 'real' Angus, but we'll deal with the complicated metaphysics of that later," he then winced as he was hit by more bolts of Tocsax's Lightbloom, causing the younger Nobody to say, in a tone of loathing:

"Leo..." for yes, this was Leo the Second Mathematician, the villain behind the whole piece. Apparently, he was possessing both Angus and Msizi.

"You've shown yourself to be consistently powerful, boy," continued 'Angus', whose voice now sounded like an old man's. "You would have made a great vessel, but alas, you are lost to me."

"Leo," said Tocsax, "you will pay! You will pay for what you've done!"

"The wheels are already set, little Tocsax. Not even you and your friends can stop the inevitable."

Henry, meanwhile, would successfully take Jupiter to behind a slave hut, where a Moogle would take her back to the ship; it would seem, however, that she would be in a coma for a long time.

He would then return to where the rest of the group, and Tocsax, were.

"So..." said Tocsax in question, looking at Joshua, Amaya, and the others; "you have questions?"

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I don't think I really specified where Mach ended up after his stunt, but given the small crater he made and the dust he kicked up it's not likely he landed nearby anyone.

@Double

It could be that he landed outside of range.

Anyway, I'll be ending the fight next post.

Edit: Sorry for skipping ya, it's just that with Mach's armor overheated, he really won't be able to do anything but observe.

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@The Whacko, we need ya.

Magical Academy for Gifted Individuals and Clerics: a.k.a M.A.G.I.C.

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Hey guys the RP is still going don't unsubscribe I'm now the GM so same rules apply and the RP will go on as it is except for JDizzle383's characters had to leave the school.

@Cuccoruler you can still CO-GM and @MagusDream your accepted go ahead and move your character to the CS page and post

@NekoJordanPlease do just post your CS here in the ooc and tag me and Cuccoruler so one of us can look it over

@KRAZY J

I'm sorry, but I don't want to continue playing this RP anymore.

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I probably shouldn't snark so much about the spin-offs, especially since one of them (Birth by Sleep) happens to be my favorite game in the series. Still, KH has become one of those franchises where the creator makes spin-off after spin-off in order to explain/retcon the plot holes of earlier installments.

BBS - Explains the full backstories of Xehanort, the Keyblade War, and even retcons the whole "Chosen Wielder" thing between Sora and Riku (Sora was chosen because he made a connection between his and Ven's heart while Riku was chosen solely because of Terra performing the ceremony on him).

358/2 Days - Explains a more detailed version of Roxas's backstory, and then proceeds to nosedive into bad fanfiction territory (yep, I still hate this game).

Coded - Follows up on the "Thank Namine" plotline from CoM and KH2.

I'm pretty sure 3D tried to explain a few plot holes, but I can't think of them at the moment. Well, that and 3D's story as a whole gets confusing as hell because they decided to throw time travel into the mix. Oh and... seriously, 13 versions of Xehanort? That's the best they could come up with for the 13 Pieces of Darkness plot line? *sigh* Remember when the Disney villains had this Council of Evil thing going on way back when? I sure miss that plot line.

@Double

Yeah, I get ya. Hopefully, my own Thirteen Seekers at least have more variety, and I'm trying to hint that The Circle (my own now-defunct expy of Org 13) at least had a difference in themes as well as gimmicks.

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Uh oh, guess we'll have to make a pointless spin-off game to explain it. :p

@Double

*Laughs*