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Reluctantly retired roleplayer.

Except when I'm not.

Why are you here when you should be writing posts?

You can edit a bad draft, but you cannot edit a blank page.

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Nobody likes a needy girl on prom night.


My Amaretto doesn't find me needy!
@Lord Wraith So... Recommendations or should I take a shot?


Honestly I was waiting to hear back from Hillan but he's ignoring me again lol.

I personally think the problem with the current powers comes from how she expels the energy, I think the crystal pillar is the most unique method and I think that's the one you should focus on and drop the energy beams and the armor explosion.
@Lord WraithKay, I'll just go with that then. Should I throw him on the char tab now?


Yep that should be fine!
@Lord WraithI'll probably just remove the Kitty bit, then, she is kind of a generic one to be crushing on, huh? Well, maybe if the arc where Kitty gets possessed by Lord Ogun is still a thing? Maybe I can go that route, with her training him in combat, or something. I can change his fighting style from a fencing-esque thing to a more traditional Japanese style.... That might work?


Yeah that would work well.
@Angel Eyes, we really l... DANGIT! You've changed your powers again lol. New review coming soon.

@Pirouette, In regards to your current power set there's a lot of overlapping with other characters and Hillan and I feel that this new set makes your character a little too well rounded. Our preference would be for you to revert to the Density shifting but if you're set on the new flashier powers I'm sure the three of us can find a way to make the new power set fit better.

@Stein, well since you poured your heart and soul into that backstory I suppose we could accept you. That and I'm pretty sure FantasyChic would never forgive us if we didn't.

@Universorum, Hillan and I have been debating back and forth on this one. Ultimately we've both agreed that intangibility seems to clash with everything else about your powerset. We'd be cool if you wanted to keep the Psionic Armory and the Telepathy but we think the intangibility undermines your character, specifically his 'squishy'-ness. However we'd be cool if you wanted to have the Psionic Armory, Telepathy and Telekinesis and maybe you could work out another way to get close to everyone's favourite 'Hot for Teacher'.

@Sep, only thing Hillan and I have taken an issue to is the shield of air. It seems a little too durable since no matter how fast air was going it wouldn't stop energy based attacks. I'd even go so far as to say the shield shouldn't be able to stop bullets, that said we'd be cool if the shield was fast enough to shift the bullet's path. Other than the shield I believe everything was good.
@Universorum I'll see what Hillan thinks but I personally think that could be doable.
@Universorum I believe so but I'm waiting to hear back from Hillan to confirm.
@Universorum upon first glance it seems like you have four/five fairly strong powers. Hillan and I have been talking and we think you should consider choosing two from the batch. Whether that's psionic armory and intangibility or psionic armory and telekinesis etc.
Hillan and I are clearly hilarious with faceclaims.
@Lord WraithDid you take away the sweet Spider Man fanboyism/Spider Menace thing?


I did because it no longer worked with my new powerset sadly.
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