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@Crowvette Welcome to the guild. Hopefully you can come up with something. If ya need any help, let me know.
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Delthrael

Okay good to hear this. As long as player choice is considered then I have no quarrels with it. Any more information on it would be great though.

Golkai

Yeah it would make sense to use the void, but in this setting the void is a bad place and they would most likely become very corrupted. Limbo would even work for me or a personal pocket dimension that he was given by his parents perhaps? And yes, it would be wise not to step on Amos' toes, so I feel you there.

Galviere

Good to hear, I just wanted some clarification.

All of your characters are accepted since the changes are minor and won't really break anything. I have faith that you will make the correct changes/tweaks in a timely manner.
Okay great characters you got here @Dezuel I just have a couple of concerns.

Delthrael

Power Seize- This has a great potential to be abused. From what I can understand, the deity this is used on basically doesn't get a chance to defend themselves if caught in its grasp and then are forced to use another power. I'm not sure if anyone would allow that to happen to their characters in the first place either. I'd like to see other opinions on it, but if you tweak it so it isn't so final, I'd be be a bit happier.

Seized Power- Depending upon Power Seize's revision, we may have to take a look at this one as well.

Other then that he looks good. I like the beef he has with Desious.

Golkai

The only problem I have with his powers is this; If he can summon an Army of the Heaven's, why would they reside in the void? The void is basically the opposite of the Heaven's and would not make sense. Now if this army resided, oh lets say, lets say the Army comes from his Banner, I would be okay with this.

Other then that he's good.

Galviere

Bestow Power- Does this power have a limit? Does it run out after awhile? Only certain beings may bestow true godhood.

I'd also like to see a bit more of her History, but you can work on that after we get the other things sorted out first.

@Dezuel I am reviewing them now. Will get back to you in a couple minutes or more.
@Dealdric How big are those suitcases? 'Billions' is a lot of money haha.
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Tribulations III

Death+Keyla


Desious spoke calmly to those gathered. "There is no need to reveal ourselves, not yet at least. There will be a time for that revelation but not now. There are bigger problems that I need you to understand first before we go any further. I'll be blunt with you all however, something has changed for the worse and your release from exile was not my intention, but now I see it might have been a necessary incident. One happy thing perhaps." He paused letting them digest the information before continuing to address their individual questions.

First he turned to Goehearth, "Your children are not yet with me, though I cannot locate them exactly, I know they still live. Perhaps you should ask Stjerne for some assistance?"

Desious then turned towards Stjerne, "Careful friend, it seems to me that all of you are receiving your power back at different rates, I would not be surprised if there was already some Gods at full strength. It heartens me to see you helping them already, but as Zencrux has stated, do not overdue yourself right now or you will never fully get your powers back I fear." Stjerne would see that Desious made no comment on his star problem.

Death paused once more, out of the corner of his eye he saw the girl began to stir. Good. He turned back to the others, "Worry not of the Dark gods save one, Huseror. His evil machinations go back before you lot, to a time when your parents were yet young. Your parents contained him but I caught a glimpse once, in a time of cruelty, but I will say no more of that. We should be cautious, he will be plotting."

Now for the question of the hour, why had he locked them out? Would they understand? He turned to Brod, "My dear god of Creation, I have watched your works grow and live and for that pleasure I thank you. Now as for your question..

Fog suddenly erupted around them, cutting Desious off in the process, he heard a gust of wings and then a loud thump of a landing. Someone had arrived. As quickly as the fog came, it left in a gust of unseen wind and standing before the party was Hiraga, and Fiala. Death had wondered how long it would take her to arrive, she was probably most upset with him, save one. He had a small hope that she would understand, but she cared about the planet far more then those who lived upon it.

"Hiraga, Fiala, welcome my dears. I am sure, like these fine fellows, you have questions for me. Perhaps now would be a good time to leave to a more, appropriate location?"

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Keyla stirred, her head was pounding, had she hit her head? She remembered... She remembered a monster! She quickly sat up, there was no monster just a group of men talking, but the old man- No, Death, was still there. She caught half of the conversation, something about a man plotting. That couldn't be a good. She slowly stood up, not knowing what to do. She noted that the aurora was till overhead, then fog enveloped the area and she heard a large gust, then the ground shook as if something had landed. Her eyes grew wide once more, had the monster returned? She backed up slowly, but what came from the quickly dispersing fog, was not a monster but two women. One looked somewhat normal with blue hair, the other was... Exotic? She looked like she belonged in a book, but one word came to mind, a Dryad.

Then Death spoke again, welcoming Hiraga and Fiala. That was their names. Death said they needed to go to a more suitable location, but where would a group of people like them go? Keyla was still in a state of shock at all of this. These people looked like humans, but somehow she knew they weren't. Should she trust herself or run? Well, if she was going to run, it was now or never. But her legs once again failed her, and she stumbled and fell on the pavement with a loud umph.

@Forsythe@Kazemitsu@GrizzTheMauler@Dealdric@mercenarius
Working on a post now guys, it'll be done hopefully soon. Maybe an hour.

edit: Perfect timing @Forsythe, I can add you in now
@GrizzTheMauler Oh there was always something dark to face. You just haven't found it, and it hasn't become relevant yet hehe.
@GrizzTheMauler I wouldn't be so sure. Here's a quote from one of my favorite authors, "There's always another secret."
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