Marlowe

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Not to mention @NarcissisticPotato! Let's see that fluffy ol' Lord.

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I can't wait for more Posts!

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@Wernher Actually, can you color the dialogue in certain colors? So we can tell who's speaking? NPCs like Ser Brant doesn't need any color.

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@POOHEAD189 Post that you just got there. :)

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Okay, we'll discuss this in the morning.

I just wonder where all those posts are. >_> Weren't people itching to get this started? XD

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@NarcissisticPotato Ulfar is accepted, but make sure to update the character sheet accordingly when other character sheets of the same family is corrected (mostly family and biography). Overall, a very interesting character.

@RainDash Joane's title should simply be 'Princess' - her unofficial nickname (Night Princess) could just be placed after her name. The allegiance should be "House Lear", not just "Lear". Like Potato's character, make sure your character's family list and biography is updated accordingly.

Maybe Joane should be slightly shorter, since she's a little tall for a woman in this age.

Other than that, Joane is fine. Accepted.

Title should simply be 'Ser' - the Kingsguard have no titles unless he is the Lord Commander (he is not).

His appearance is not realistically representative of a twenty-seven year old in the setting. I'd suggest finding a picture using medieval/fantasy character concept as a tag.

'Pale hair' (which I assume is white or platinum blond) is not in the universe, unlike the Targaryens in Game of Thrones. The South, like the Lannisters, are mostly fair-haired, with brown and blond being common. Gray/silver eyes are also mostly exclusive to the North.

You should change his origin to "outskirts of Caerleon" since he comes from a rural area.

The first issue with his biography is that it's very unlikely that his area would have been raided by bandits, because Caerleon is the seat of House Ralei (the capital and major House of the South, respectively), and they would not leave the territory of such an important location unguarded like that.

Knights also don't randomly pass through areas to recruit young people / people to be taken on as pages or squires. Especially for House Ralei, one of the three major Houses in the continent.

Knighthood is not like years spent in school that you graduated once you have had 'enough training'. You earn the ceremonial citation if you are worthy of receiving it, and even then, men commonly still don't see knighthood until their thirties or even fourties if they even keep trying.

The Kingsguard is a prestigious, sworn brotherhood; hosting among the best fighters of Estiala, these knights would either have to come from a background of immense experience or have connections. It is unlikely that someone so young can be a Kingsguard when he was simply a squire for only five or so years.

@ClocktowerEchos His name would be Corvo Rathmore, and in parenthesis, you can put Springs as his true surname. He should also have no titles, as he isn't a lord or knight.

We need to know where he comes from in order to judge him properly. If you don't want anyone to know, for any reason, you can just PM either Solace and I to see if it makes sense. :)

Assassination is not a thing of House Rathmore, due to the fact that the king is a just person. He would send his knights to a culprit rather than an assassin. So the whole assassin thing would only have to be Alexander's thing, not the whole House.

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@ClocktowerEchos we'll look at sheets today~

@RomanAria The castle of the house, the region it's located, the names of the family members, the house words, the sigil, any notable facts, etc.

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Jaelyn Ralei

The sun bore down upon the heads of both common folk and nobles as they traversed the cobblestone streets. A joyous amount of chatter drifted about the groups of people as they made their way to and fro the large city known as the Windkeep. It was a very important day for the whole of Estiala; the tournament of three regions was something that should be taken seriously by all occupants of the continent. And so, the members of House Ralei were one of those who had arrived in the western capital at an adequate time. Jaelyn Ralei remained close to her family as they sat on a bench close to the arena. Her eyes drifted over the variety of gathering people, wondering exactly where Rufus was-- he was supposed to be attending to his knight, but she couldn't catch any sight of him.

"Excuse me," the young woman mumbled to her father, nodding her head as she lifted herself up from her seat. "I fear that Rufus might have gotten caught up in his activities, again."

Jaelyn sighed lightly, gathering her dress around herself as she left her family's side. She hoped that dust would not gather on the hem of her dress as she made her way down one of the many streets of the Windkeep. She also hoped that her squire friend did not get into any sort of trouble; Rufus always seemed to get too ahead of himself when he had his version of fun. In fact, she knew exactly where someone like him would be-- and that was where she was going.

It didn't take long for her to find herself at the front door of one of the brothels of the Windkeep. Jaelyn knew that Rufus liked to indulge in women every so often, and so, looking for him near a brothel was probably one of the most intelligent things that she could do. She stayed off to the side, hoping that he would spot her as soon as he left the building.

@Solace

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@Wernher yeppers!

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Morning everyone!