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Alright, I'm looking at sheets right now. Again, don't take my critique personally (as I'm rather picky when it comes to my roleplays).

@Elle Santiago I'd like it if you can make her biography a little bit longer, if you can. Other than that, everything seems fine.

@RumikoOhara The major issue with your CS is its formatting and grammar. There are many run on sentences and phrases that don't really make sense. If you put the sheet through a word processor, and correct the flaws, then that should be it for the grammar issue. Another issue is that her healing powers should not be that strong as of now. The flower part is alright (since it's just flowers and not actually a human being), but she can't heal someone having a heart attack. The most healing she can do is sealing shut decent sized wounds or partially healing broken bones.

Daphne should have some flaws. The whole story about the 5th grade class being chased around by her is unlikely (and not really fitting). You can have it that she cares too much about people that it begins to bother them, etc. The names you use, like Mooncat, are funky, but I assume that ties into the "hippie" part of her raising. Also, you should read over the rules again; there's something that should be added that you didn't add. Other than that, I think the sheet should be okay.

@Pathfinder The sheet's alright! Put Jude in the character tab.

@Project First off, the picture is fine cause it doesn't look too realistic and can actually be passed off as realistic anime. One thing is, I'm confused about her appearance section. You keep using the past tense... is that how she looks now, or how she USED to look?

You're also leaving something out from the rules section, so take another look.

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@Tominas Yep! Thirty is the age limit.

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@HushedWhispers Yay! You gonna join the discord?

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@RumikoOhara
@Fisticuffs
@Project
@HushedWhispers
@Elle Santiago
@Pathfinder
@Etranger
@Tominas
@PentagonWhite
@tfd
@Solace

My characters are up. I'll be looking at sheets today. Also, I'd like to remind people I'm not accepting any other females other than the ones posted already.

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Garrett Fischermann

"The merest shade of me is enough to defeat you."

Name:
Garrett Fischermann

Age:
23 years old

Gender:
Male

Occupation:
Assistant Manager at the well-known Darkwell City Diner

Relationships:
Caitlyn Sigbin: his co-worker at Darkwell City Diner. He doesn't think much of her, and just focuses on making sure she does a decent job in the workplace. If he has to be stern to get the point across with her, he will.

Abilities:
???

Appearance Details

Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Amber
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 155 lbs

Personality:
This young fellow isn't really the social butterfly; he spends much of his time hiding in his apartment and playing video games. Garrett doesn't really talk to anyone unless he absolutely feels like it or is forced into it. Cynical and sarcastic, he believes that he is the best at what he does and that his whole team should praise him when they win a game. When he loses, he blames everyone else. In other words, he is not known for taking responsibility for his follies.

Garrett is the exact opposite of a team player-- he prefers to do things on his own rather than working together with a group. This impacts both his lifestyle and his in game actions; he is the perfect definition of an assassin, roaming around and punishing those who have strayed too far from their team. A somewhat toxic person, Garrett is also known for being somewhat of a drunk. He spends much of his alone time drinking any type of alcoholic beverage, as long as he gets that "satisfying" buzzed feeling he adores so much.

Nevertheless, he works hard, making sure to keep a proper attitude in the diner.

Short Biography:
Not many know the history of Garrett Fischermann; some say that he's lived with his alcoholic father for all of his life. Others say that his mother used to live with them until she got tired of her husband's antics and simply left, fleeing all the way to France to elope with a long distance lover. Not having a feminine figure in his life has left Garrett cold and uncaring, much like his father. He was always known as a poor student, doodling on a test instead of answering questions or picking fights with both bully and "nerd" alike. He truly believed he was the top dog of the neighborhood, and still does.

As Garrett grew older, his father and him became even more distant. They constantly argued, so much so that his father would threaten to bust his face in if he didn't respect him. While Garrett wasn't happy with the situation, he stuck around for a little while longer as he worked in Darkwell City Diner. He tried to avoid his father as much as he could, locking himself in his room as soon as he got home. Eventually, the era of tense peace came to an end. Garrett, having gotten home from an overnight shift, encountered his father in the small kitchen that they owned. He was drunk and angry, blaming Garrett for his wife's departure and saying that he did not want him around anymore. The young man struggled to withstand his father's harmful words as he promptly began to pack his things. It was when Garrett attempted to step around his father when he grabbed him by the collar of his shirt, slamming him against the wall and threatening to kill him. Of course, Garrett defended himself; he punched his father in the face, making him release his hold and fall to the ground. Before his dad could retaliate, he fled his home with as many items he could carry.

Garrett has been living with a roommate ever since. He's also worked his way up the ladders, earning the position of assistant manager in Darkwell City Diner.

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Wren Faulkner

"Don't talk to me before I've had my coffee."

Name:
Wren Faulkner

Age:
19 years old

Gender:
Female

Occupation:
Full-time student at Darkwell Community College (Liberal Arts) | Part-time employee at "Darkwell Mocha", a cafe that many college students go to during their breaks.

Relationships:
Caitlyn Sigbin: a regular at Darkwell Mocha, Wren's also seen her around at Darkwell Community College. She tries to give her a small smile every now and then, even if she hasn't had her coffee.

Jude Marshall: another regular at Darkwell Mocha. She thinks he's a swell enough guy, even though she doesn't know him that much.

Abilities:
Metamorphosis- can turn into a "devilhound", which is some sort of lizard-like canine. In this form, she roughly stands at about four feet in height and seven feet at length. Unfortunately, she currently doesn't know about her so-called "power" yet.

White Magic- Wren will, at some point, be able to heal wounds to a certain degree.

Appearance Details

Hair Color: Platinum blonde
Eye Color: Blue violet
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 132 lbs

Personality:
While she may not seem like she is the most approachable person, she saves jokes and snarks for her friends. An otherwise serious and level-headed woman, Wren is rather mature for her age. If there's something at work that needs to get done, she'll do it without a second thought. However, despite trying her best to be as polite and friendly as she can, she abhors being taking advantage of or pushed around. She defends herself easily with a sharp tongue and even sharper glare, but only after she loses most of her patience-- or, if someone's being a smartass with her.

While the young woman is well-grounded and usually doesn't let her emotions get ahead of her, Wren is an expressive person. Her facial expressions reveal most of what she's thinking, no matter how hard she tries to hide her feelings. A tense smile may reveal that she's not truly pleased with the situation-- a playful glimmer in her glare shows that she's not really upset with someone. She curses herself for such a trait, due to the fact that being physically expressive makes an otherwise terrible liar.

Short Biography:
Wren was born and raised in Darkwell; she's known the small city for all of her life. Ever since she was young, her parents made sure to make sure she got a proper education and had a good time at school. While her father and mother never went to college and instead spent most of their lives working in a family-owned restaurant, they wanted Wren to be something more than them. And so, they focused their free time on trying to help Wren with projects and homework. Their aid even continued when she was in high school-- if she needed help, her mother or father would always try to lend a hand, no matter how difficult it was.

It was obvious that, when Wren graduated high-school, her parents wanted her to spread her wings and move on to college. She didn't complain; at eighteen, she was more than willing to move out of their cramped apartment. With the help of her parents and Darkwell City Community College, she found an apartment that was big enough just for her. By the time the next college semester rolled about, she was ready to begin studying for a future career.

... Thing was, Wren wasn't really sure what she wanted to be. Nothing really interested her, no matter how many suggestions her friends or parents gave her. Doctor? The career path was too long. Nurse? She didn't want to be in charge of the well-being of the sickly. Teacher? Chef? There wasn't a single career choice that invigorated her with determination or passion. Instead of registering herself in a specific major, Wren decided to study liberal arts with the hopes of becoming interested in an actual field. She even found work in a local cafe in order to pay for her lodging. Things seem to be going alright, for now.

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@Pathfinder Hey, maybe Jude can be roommates with Garrett?

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@RumikoOhara
@Fisticuffs
@Project
@HushedWhispers
@Elle Santiago
@Pathfinder
@Etranger
@Tominas
@PentagonWhite
@tfd
@Solace

Anyone else making a sheet?

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Also, I'm not accepting any other female characters. My female character will be the last one.

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@Shina Sorry, it's full.