Natsu

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@Deadlyrose9641 Do you think you can post tonight?

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@Natsu

I apologize in advance for Viola if she says something mean here xD

@Migyudon
And
Might just be me, but none of your pictures are working for me.

@Rune_Alchemist

Don't worry. You can't hurt what doesn't feel pain silly.

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YOU'RE GONNA MAKE US UNFASHIONABLE CLOTHES? YOU MONSTER.

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So, in the least spoilery way possible....
What kind of hell should we be expecting?

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AHHHH
@Migyudon We're gonna be BEST friends.
And scared of our roommate together.

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Your choice, I would repost

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"Abi is a naive girl who, above all, is the quintessential little princess, barring some few princess-like behaviour. She's the type to face trouble with an equally challenging grin. Act now, think later. She is fond of things that shine and is covetous of unique objects.
"
So this is one of the things I have the biggest issue with. I personally like personalities to be fleshed out, hopefully over the course of 3-4 paragraphs. Describing her a princess is kind of iffy as a personality trait. Go into what makes her tendencies princess like, and why she acts that way.

"Abi comes from a lineage of pure-blooded Shadow Alter Conjurers"
This is a something I have a personal issue with, just because it does some world building sans GM permission. It's not my world, so I can't say if this is right or not, but it's my personal understanding that magic isn't a bloodline thing, anybody can learn any branch if they try. Though this could be my misunderstanding.

"Abi is also part of a two-person singing group called Night N. Gail"
This is a little random, and since this is pretty out of nowhere, it feels weird and forced.
"Gender: Attack Helicopter Homosexual"
Homesexuality isn't a gender, it's a sexual orientation.

That's just off the top of my head. Just trying to be helpful, hope you understand.
@Migyudon

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Sure, you can have it; real rpers worry about getting 100, 500, and 1000 :^)

@Savo

Scathing

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nb4 post 300
Haha it's mine bitches

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Fuck no.
Viola can have side bitches, but Melody is the real Waifu.