@Letter Bee
1) If medical tests have shown he's clean, why is he imprisoned? Why is he handed over to the mining Guild?
2) Was* a student, no?
3) I await the rest of your skills to be explained in your history.
4) So he's weak, and meak. What else is his flaw? Is he scared of the dark? A good balance in RP is Strengths = Weaknesses, in number.
2) Was* a student, no?
3) I await the rest of your skills to be explained in your history.
4) So he's weak, and meak. What else is his flaw? Is he scared of the dark? A good balance in RP is Strengths = Weaknesses, in number.
1) How is one well off but not well off? Couldn't you say just 'Middle Class' or even 'Lower Middle' or 'Upper Lower'? Or simply... lower class? Lowerclass =/= Working Class.
2) How did she protect him from bullies? Was she attractive? Fierce? Brutal? Manipulative? Powerful?
3) Of course his studies continued? He was a kid?
4) Where'd the Optimism come from?
5) Why was he accepted to University at 15?/One from a differing clan when clans were still a little wary with eachother at this point.
6) How did somewhere on the planet avoid the CIS, when the CIS occupied the planet?
7) Did he not have access to news outlet? Other people talking? A Window? How did he not see that his planet was being occupied by a hostile force?
8) Why was he unable to speak about his sisters unfaithful boyfriend?
9) Why did he choose Colin?
10) Why did Colin choose just now to speak up against her boyfriends activities? It seems contrived.
11) I thought he had left University? I'm a little confused, I thought post CIS he went back to his family?
12) So how was he framed? How did Campus Police end up with him being turned over to the Empire?
2) How did she protect him from bullies? Was she attractive? Fierce? Brutal? Manipulative? Powerful?
3) Of course his studies continued? He was a kid?
4) Where'd the Optimism come from?
5) Why was he accepted to University at 15?/One from a differing clan when clans were still a little wary with eachother at this point.
6) How did somewhere on the planet avoid the CIS, when the CIS occupied the planet?
7) Did he not have access to news outlet? Other people talking? A Window? How did he not see that his planet was being occupied by a hostile force?
8) Why was he unable to speak about his sisters unfaithful boyfriend?
9) Why did he choose Colin?
10) Why did Colin choose just now to speak up against her boyfriends activities? It seems contrived.
11) I thought he had left University? I'm a little confused, I thought post CIS he went back to his family?
12) So how was he framed? How did Campus Police end up with him being turned over to the Empire?
















