Sho Minazuki

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@December There are technically a dozen spots available right now. I did say first come first serve, and by that I mean if you get a character accepted first you're in.

@HeroicSociopath That looks pretty good. Let's go through your abilities though. Keep in mind I'm considering your Ninjutsu profession trait too. Everything that needs a change will be listed. If you don't see it here it means it was fine. For note though, put the cost next to the feat's name too.

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[FEAT] Athletic - Rin is in extremely good shape. He regains 5 stamina every post. (every 2, stamina is a scarcer resource because stamina users have a fairly reliable way to fight without the use of techniques, not as reliable as Health fighters, but they don't rely on it as much as Magic users do)

[TECH]Acupuncture - By targetting specific points on the subject's body with his throwing needles, he can disrupt the flow of ki through their body. This attack deals no damage. However, if hit, whenever the subject would spend magical power as a resource, they instead spend stamina. If they run out of stamina, they can't cast spells. (This effect lasts 2 of the opponent's posts and costs 5 stamina. This is actually really strong and can shut down certain players completely)

[TECH] Rapid Fire - Rin throws projectiles in rapid succession. It costs 3 MP per projectile, and deals 1 heart of damage for each one thrown. (You unleash a burst of three shots at 6 MP by default)

[SPELL] Doton - Sheikah Block - Rin strikes the earth, excavating a portion of stone, clay, or dirt and moving it at will. He can control 1 cubic foot of material per MP spent. He can throw it at an enemy, dealing 1 heart of damage for every 5 MP spent. Because the projectile is made of completely natural material, the attack itself is not considered magical. (Costs 5 MP at base so it creates 3 projectiles, costs 10 MP for strong version with 6 projectiles. This shouldn't be a problem considering your profession trait)

[SPELL] Vanish - Rin disappears in a puff of smoke, reappearing elsewhere with 30 feet. Costs 10 MP. (I expect this will be used mainly for escape? If so then it's fine)

Other than all that, you could stand to elaborate a bit more what he was like during his Sheikah ninja training. After you've done all that I think it should be okay.

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The soldier divers not noticing him in favor of the newly appearing adept who seemed a little beaten up was a fatal and even as far as rookie mistake. These guys were fearful of any adept it seems without regard for how one could be far more dangerous than another, like him. As their focus was diverted he easily closed the distance without any resistance, cutting down the first one he reached, a one-handed overhead slash, followed by a forward sideways step, spinning and slashing in a wide berth, taking down as many as possible in the second swing. The moment any of them would notice him it'd be too late as he'd have his sidearm out to shoot any of them that were out of his blade's reach.

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@December It's first come first serve even though 15 people showed interest early, that's probably the cap right now.

We have 3 people in right now, so there's plenty of space... For now.

If you somehow come after the cut-off, you can stick around because I'm also projecting between 30-50% of players dropping out early.

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@Tancuras They do have a border, and the presence of monsters are not so dire... Yet. Stances won't cost you anything, but they have trade-offs. For example Wolf Stance lets you move faster but deal less damage than weapon's listed power, Hawk Stance increases damage against monsters specifically, those are fairly passive effects that shouldn't need a stamina cost.

Also in regards to the Mortal Draw build, I'm making my own character that uses that kind of build. But basically it's an Iaido/Battoujutsu inspired style of combat.

@ProPro That's a lot of backstory, but it passes. Here is the Minish trait though.

[Minish] Blessed Sprites - Their small size means they can reach places others can normally not, but it also means they take double damage if they are struck in their tiny form. Because of their tiny size it's usually not a problem as people normally can't see them anyways. Minish also have a blessing and can bless their allies, allowing them and their companions to find curatives where there normally shouldn't be any (recover 25% hearts after combat, minimum 1 heart, rounded down.)

You have a huge weakness, if you're ever hit, but your tiny hitbox kind of means it'll rarely happen and all you need to watch out for is AoE.

@Darkmoon Angel Entirely doable.

@Zardoric I assume Magic Eater is like a shield though? Hmmmm, considering your possible magic usage because of the Mystic Cloak trait as well, despite how strong these all are, because they share the same resource, it's actually fairly balanced. Basically it looks good so far. Let me know when you have all the spells. You should have a total of 11 feats, as your race trait gives you an extra spell/technique.

@Sen Do it now.

The Legend of Zelda: Whispering Storm [Chapter 1: Hylia]

I'm also guessing he joined the Steel Boulder or worked for them at some point? If that's the case then the character is fine.

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@Ryougu youtube.com/watch?v=oyA8odjCzZ4

But mundane gear is only up to Great class, 10 stat requirement items are unique-only, so you have gear that gives you +5 hearts right now.

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@Tancuras I realize I hadn't yet made the Hylian Knight Trait, but Hyrule is pretty peaceful right now, there have been no recent wars or major conflicts, so they don't really have any frontiers. Most conflicts are civil and between some tribal groups, treated more like bandits than an organized army.

The closest you have is a Highlander who face harsh conditions voluntarily for training, often travelling the lands. Highlander tribesmen often also leave to find their own glory, despite being tribes, they are also Hylian. It's not uncommon for some Highlanders to come fight for Hyrule's legion of Knights.

Also for skills...

Swordbreaker would be different. There's no weapon durability, so this would be more in the realm of disarming or parrying. Would cost you 15 stamina, or 5 stamina if you're going to make a parry instead.

Mortal Draw would cost you 10 stamina, but you wouldn't be using it in the middle of battle without the proper build.

Probably also next to them note if they are a Trait or a Technique inside brackets.

EDIT: Also, Stamina and Magic are both finite resources. There is a limit to them, they do not regenerate naturally.

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It's actually still open for people to join, people who've appeared in interest check are just first wave, it's generally first come first serve.

Since Tinnun has seven points invested into stamina, dividing by two would yield an extra 3.5 feats. Do I round this down to three or round it up to four?

@UmbreonRogue

You get 3 feats. You require every even number for 1 feat.

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@Zardoric I'll generally be the judge of that. I'd like to keep it simple though, so I'll be going through them.

@UmbreonRogue It'd be much easier to have all the feats done now rather than having to worry about them later.

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@UmbreonRogue Not bad. That looks good already, but I think I should note that you get 1 extra Technique/Trait feat for every 2 points in Stamina, similar to magic.

@Zardoric I've fixed it. Do note by the way you're not limited to only Spells, you can also make Traits, just not Techniques with the bonus you get from Magic stat.