Sho Minazuki

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

If you go to safe sites, lack of anti-virus isn't a problem. It's only a problem if you're browsing. If you're in and out it's not a big deal.

Problem is just using pinterest won't let you imbed the image onto the forum, so if you find some other way to do it, you may. So long as it's a more convenient link.

Everything else is fine though, you can add that to the character tab, just be sure to fix the image up when you can.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@Haeo I guess that works. Yeah you can put this into the characters tab.

@Yankee Yep. That's acceptable.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

Dance is an ability, not a talent. You'd more or less be training her sword or magic skills in this case.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@itano123 You're only really missing your personal ability, but everything else checks out. Let me know when you've gotten to that.

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Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@Bloodwolf 2 Looks good. I'd say probably save the picture and upload it to imgur for your appearance. Pinterest is kinda iffy to use for display.

Also maybe some formatting to make it look nice.

Otherwise, I think it's ready to put into the characters section.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@Bloodwolf 2 You can only start with one talent, so pick between Sword and Bow. Just a note, having a Talent doesn't mean it's the only weapon you can use, you can use others, but it will simply be suboptimal.

The ability Invisible Hunter is still an issue. There's no stealth system in this RP, so really based on that description, you could technically score a critical hit every time you fight anything besides mages and beasts.

My suggestion would be to make you get an increased chance to critically strike when hiding in any terrain. If you do this, you don't need to have the condition that only mages and beasts can detect you, you can get that bonus so long as you're using terrain.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@Haeo I mean to be more explicit with his skill with a lance.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@Spike Lord spot is for additional Lords. The character Alnard doesn't count for the player lord spot. If you want to discuss it I'm willing because the spot does require some specifics.

I will say the system when I set out to make a Fire Emblem RP was heavily based off of the GBA games, but 3H had a great system I saw was well suited to accentuating individual growth, and then this RP's system was born.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@Yankee The combination more or less. I'd say the best approach is to tone down the bonuses. Sticking with Sunbeam seems to be in character to her so you need only change the bonuses.

@Savo Pretty good. You may need to pm me the details of his birth though. Still, everything else is filled out just fine.

Only thing is the ability is a bit too difficult to do. The increased evasion is fine, there's no numeric for it, just an influencer, but the active portion is the main problem. Please keep it simple. I don't currently have ideas you may consider but this and needing to know your backstory is really all that's needed.

Fire Emblem: Ashes of Sacrifice [Fall of the Empire]

@Senseless Yep. If you take the starting class Flier you'll be given a Pegasus or Wyvern, depending on preference or limitations. That being said, there have been male Pegasus Knights before in the RP's lore, but they are much rarer than females, for that reason you've indicated.

@Savo Yeah we're open. You'll have time to figure out what you want to class into so don't fret too much.

@Yankee I'll note you won't be using any mount other than your preferred mount, unless you happen to just class into a flier and leave poor Sunbeam behind. As such the bonus for your ability is quite powerful for essentially being able to be active at most times. It's true, you can dismount in this RP, but the need to do so is generally pretty rare. You usually would only do so on desert areas or very thick forests.

As I had said before, the backstory and such checks out. If you can well, nerf the ability to an acceptable degree, I can accept the character.