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Sparrow Envy happening here. Seven weeks till our school year is done.
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So many greaat writes here ... who's going to submit for the Microfiction & Poetry contest #14 - new beginnings
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Does anyone else crave the Likes, Thanks and Laughs for their Role Play posts ... or am I the only one?
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Pi day today. What's your favourite? Blueberry, Apple, something else. Or maybe like Lady Arya said ... it's all irrational today.
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Call me Stryder, call me Brodie, your choice. I have been roleplaying for a few years starting in the time of the great pandemic. I have discovered I am a bit of a chameleon, always trying to match the length and style of my roleplaying partners.

Starting in the dark days of Omegle, I discovered that there were people interested in stories with a plot and something long term. Since then I have moved on, and hopefully forward, from one paragraph writing to multi-paragraph pieces that are carefully written and actually proofread.

I am just beginning to figure out the multi-character role play but in the past only focused on 1 to 1. In that style, I (we) have written role plays that have been slice of life, fantasy, dystopian, and more. The story has always been important, and the slow burning romance more valued than something quick and messy. As one partner likes to say ... substance over smut.

I have a few role plays going on with different partners but I am always up to meet new people, exchange ideas and create new stories. If you are interested send me a message here or we can chat more in Discord (just send me your details and we can connect).

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“Cabin 8E is over on the other side of the camp,” Brody began as he and Matt made their way from the dining hall. “It’s part of Pine Ridge. The girls’ camp is over by the lake at Maple Hill. The guys and girls usually do everything together—arts and crafts, canoeing, games, whatever. But the girls’ cabins are off limits to the boys, and the girls shouldn’t be going into the boys’ either.”

Holding his backpack and pulling his luggage, Matt was glad his mom had found one of those new suitcases with wheels on the bottom. Keeping up with the camp counsellor would normally have been easy, but saddled with his bags and dragging the suitcase over uneven ground made it difficult. When Brody finally noticed, the older counsellor stopped and took the heavier bag.

“Every day we start with breakfast, then an activity,” Brody continued. “Today it’s arts and crafts. Some days it’s archery or canoeing. You’re going to really like this place. There’s so much to do.”

Trying to process all the new information, Matt huffed along, catching sight of the first aid cabin, the fire pit, and other larger cabins that were too far away to read the signs. Looking toward the edge of camp, he was amazed at the tall evergreen trees that seemed to guard the grounds. For a moment, he thought about the Ents from Lord of the Rings and wondered if these trees were just as old.

When the two finally reached the cabin, Brody pushed open the door and let Matt go through. “Welcome to Cabin 8E, aka Dunlop.”

Matt stepped over the threshold into the empty cabin. Accepting his fate, he looked around the room. The bags of other campers were strewn about, a deck of cards sat on a table, and a Monopoly game rested on a shelf, both probably for rainy nights. Most of the bunks were covered with clothes, books, and magazines, so Matt walked over to one of the unused beds and asked, “Should I take this one?”

After dropping off their bags and getting settled, the two of them headed back to where they had started that morning. His mother’s car was long gone, and for a moment Matt felt a pang of homesickness. Seeing the grin on Brody’s face, he asked, “You said it was arts and crafts, right? I really don’t like that stuff. I once made a mask for Halloween and it looked more like a dead pumpkin than anything else.”

Brody laughed under his breath. “Don’t worry. Most of the older campers don’t do the glue sticks or markers or the glitter thing. We’ve got other things like wood carving, bracelet making if you’re into it, leatherwork sometimes, even painting. And if that still sounds like torture, you can usually find someone throwing or kicking a ball around outside instead.”

He glanced over with a half-smile. “No one’s forcing anyone to become an artist here.”

Finally reaching the craft hall, Matt looked up at the wooden cabin. Smaller than the dining hall but more than twice the size of his bunkhouse, he heard voices coming from inside and looked back at Brody.

“Good, because I can barely draw a stick person without messing it up,” he said. “Mine usually look kinda weird.”

Brody let out a short laugh and pushed the door open. “You’ll be fine. Come on.”

And suddenly … like the creature with red eyes … the words have disappeared.
Hey everyone ... near the end of my last reply IC, I wrote

The girl with the skateboard was still near the mirror display, frozen for a moment as if unsure whether to move closer or further away. The woman with the dark hair and the music box had stepped back slightly, her eyes fixed on the counter as though waiting for an explanation that wasn’t coming. The young influencer stood near the shelves, trying to find his composure. Imp was the only one who seemed to be moving and now that the menace had gone, Imp was bending down, picking up the bent, broken and bruised objects scattered about the floor.

If any of that feels like I have gone into God Mode, let me know and I will adjust.
Before he could stand from where he had fallen, Brayden watched the room explode into unexpected chaos. Scooby and Doo had bolted free, their red leashes dragging behind them as they moved further into the store. Without reason or force, books were suddenly  dislodged from their resting places and strewn wildly about the room. Getting up onto his knees, he saw the girl with the large cross begin to pick up the fifteen or so books that had been scattered on the floor.
 
Even though he called his black Lab back, the dog froze, and the hackles on his back stood straight up. Barking and pawing, Doo hustled toward the young man by the door. Positioning himself between the man and the door, the dog showed a courage he had lacked only minutes before. But when the door pushed open, the bravery was replaced by his typical anxiety and fear, and the dog began to nervously paw at the ground.
 
“Come on, Doo,” Brayden pleaded. “Let’s go.”

 
But rather than find his way back to his owner, the young dog began to whimper and whine, retreating slowly, his eyes fixed on the figure emerging through the door. Looking to the source of the pup’s distress, Brayden saw the bright red eyes and the almost ghoulish expression on its face. Rising more quickly, the veterinarian stood and moved toward his dog when the room was thrust into a darkness blacker than night.
 
Close behind him, Scooby stood rigid, growling at something Brayden couldn't yet see. The lights flickered and flashed while a strange, seemingly endless sound filled the room. From the doorway, shadows began to emerge. Slithering and wriggling, they spilled through the now cavernous opening, crawling over one another until a loud, hideous laugh erupted from the darkness and filled the air.
 
Thankful for the blinking light that briefly pierced the darkness, Brayden dropped into a crouch. With each flash, he caught glimpses of objects hurtling through the air, ricocheting toward every corner of the vast room and every dark, shadowed space between.
 
Suddenly, Imp, the store owner, strode forth and positioned himself between the monster behind the door and every visitor still in the room. The creature looked up at the light shining in the shopkeeper’s hand, and its face twisted into something more gruesome. Staring at the object held high in Imp’s hand, the creature seemed to become afraid, and before another word could be said, it turned and vanished back behind the door, or somewhere into the darkness, into the space between the intermittent flashes of light.
 
Once it was gone, the door slammed shut, and the dim lights of the shop came back on, seemingly brighter than before.
 
Standing tall, the veterinarian looked about the room. Unsure what he had just witnessed, he let out a breath and whispered louder than he expected.
 
“What was that?”

 
Mr. Imp turned, looking down at Dante and Doo, the placid expression on his face turning more stern. The older gent walked straight toward the door and twisted the sign.
 
"Well, now... We've quite the mess on our hands, don't we?..." the shopkeeper began.
 
Moving toward Scooby and then Doo, Brayden grabbed the loose leashes that hung from each dog. Holding them tight and close to his body, the vet looked around the room and then back to Imp.
 
“What was that?” he asked again.

 
Both dogs had calmed, but the room was still in a state. Books had exploded from the shelves, and the implements he had been looking at earlier were scattered across the floor. Everywhere he looked, the dark but orderly store had been transformed into a chaotic mess of overturned displays, broken trinkets, and debris.

Brayden held the leashes a little tighter and scanned the room as the immediate danger seemed to fade. His breathing was still quick, but his attention shifted away from the door and toward the people still standing among the wreckage.

Brayden frowned, taking in the scene with a doctor's eye. No one looked injured. Shocked, yes. Confused for sure. But everyone seemed healthy and alive and then his gaze returned to Imp.

“What was that?” he asked again for a third time, "And why did you close the door?"

Hey Ricky. Thanks for checking in. I’m at the crazy part in my school year, only weeks to go and so much to do.

Going to let you know I will have a post up for tomorrow some time after work.

Okay .... then a quick edit has to happen. Thanks.

@Ducksworth and now he's in E ... older kids, all summer long.
Matthew Jansons


Matt’s brother Danny spotted her first, and when he nudged his little brother and nodded her way, he chuckled,
“Maybe we can trade places. I wouldn’t mind being at camp with her.”


Turning to where his brother was looking, Matt saw the tall blonde counsellor wearing a yellow tee-shirt, laughing as she spoke to a table of girls. He smiled back at his brother and chuckled,
“Yeah, I don’t think so. She’s definitely out of your league, big brother. She’s probably in college or something.”


With his backpack slung over one shoulder and his suitcase a foot behind, Matt looked around the dining hall. Noticing first the tall A-frame ceiling and then the overly rustic décor, he saw the room was filled with kids his age, all gathered around the tables. Girls sat on one side and boys on the other. He paused for a second, wondering if the boy-girl thing was some camp rule or just the way campers preferred it. He quickly counted the tables: two rows of three for the girls, another six filled with boys. Another count of eight at almost every table, and he quickly calculated 2 × 3 × 8 … 48 … and then doubled … 96. Yeah, he could do math … and he was proud of it.

He bit his lower lip as he glanced around the hall. He could already see the groups that had formed at each table: over there a group of four, some kids in pairs, and at almost every table, one boy or girl who seemed to be on their own, someone who didn’t seem to fit. He remembered what his mom had said on the drive in:
“Don’t worry Matt, you always make friends. It’s your superpower.”


He glanced back at his mother, who had followed her two boys into the hall. Muttering quietly, he asked,
“Are you sure they know I am coming? Maybe you messed this up too.” Instantly regretting it, he gave his mother a grin. “Danny says he wants to stay. He can take my place.”


As if she had heard his words, the same blonde girl they had noticed earlier approached Matt and his small family. A whistle around her neck and a name tag that read Sara, it was obvious she was one of the counsellors, and she began,
“You must be Matt. The camp director told us to look out for you.”


She looked directly at Matt and continued,
“You’re going to be in Cabin E. It’s for the whole summer kids.” Noticing another yellow shirt nearing, she pointed him out. “That’s your camp counsellor. His name is Brody.”


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After Danny and his mother left, Matt remained in the dining hall. Brody and Sara had promised to get him settled into his cabin once the tables cleared and the campers headed off to their first activities of the day. Sitting alone at a table reserved for guests, he watched the room slowly empty. Groups of campers drifted toward the doors, talking and laughing as they went, leaving Matt with nothing to do but wait.

Not particularly upset about missing arts and crafts, Matt pulled his book from his backpack and started reading. Two chapters later, a chorus of “Happy Birthday” erupted somewhere across the dining hall. Looking up from his book, he couldn’t help but notice the excitement on the younger kids’ faces. One little guy was piling pancakes onto his plate and drowning them in syrup as everyone sang. Matt laughed quietly at the sight.

When the song ended, he smiled to himself and shook his head before lowering his eyes back to the page.

One more chapter in, he was interrupted again.
“Don’t any of ya touch my food, I’ll be right back.”


Looking up, Matt wondered if the voice was talking to him. He caught sight of a kid with a skateboard talking to the girls at their table. He hadn’t thought about bringing his board, but now he wondered if he should have. Maybe this place had a mini ramp or somewhere to work on his boardslide.

Hearing Sara’s voice, Matt looked up again. She was walking over with Brody, and as they got closer, he stood and reached for his bags. Brody spoke first, and something in his tone made Matt immediately like him.
“Your mom said you play baseball,” he said. “Any chance you know how to throw a slider?”
@KillamriX08bring the game boy. Everyone will probably want to try it.

Secret fear … maybe he’ll figure it out as he learns more about himself. He’s the child of farmers … maybe there is a fear of losing the farm, fear of not being good enough compared to the city folk, maybe he carried a knife because he’s got a fear of some type of monster, beast, animal. Maybe just a sense of his own mortality.

But in the end … always up to the writer.
“I’m sorry, Matty,” his mother said softly as she parked beside the flagpole in the middle of camp. “I know this isn’t what you wanted, but I need you to give it a try.”


Pulling the suitcase from the trunk of the car, his brother Danny said,
“Come on, Matt. You know what happened. This place sounds great. I’m sure you’ll love it here.”


Kicking at the dusty road in front of him, Matt wanted to argue longer, but there was no point. His mother had explained that she had tried to register him for Camp Champion, the sports camp his brother had once gone to, the one his two best friends, Tobias and Mackenzie, were going to this summer, but like everything else in his life, he had missed that opportunity and was stuck going to Camp Wyaconda, the place with the stupid name.

With a frustrated huff, he yanked his backpack from the rear seat of the car and flung it over his shoulder. His baseball glove hung from one side, and the zipper pocket barely closed over the Fear Street novel shoved inside. Looking around, he saw the ancient looking wooden cabins. Main Lodge. Dining Hall. Everything was labelled with signs in old wooden frames and paint that was blistering from years in the sun. He turned to his mom one more time and whispered,
“Mom, can’t I just stay home with Danny and Danielle? I promise you won’t have to worry about me.”


Seeing the look in her eyes, Matt knew the answer before she had a chance to begin. They had talked about it for the last three hours as they drove to camp. Mom and Dad were going to Europe. Danny had his first summer job and would hardly be home. Danielle was going to be spending most of her time with Taylor and Becky, and it wasn’t fair to ask her to babysit her younger brother. Matt let out a quiet sigh. He had heard the quiet conversations late at night. Mom and Dad had said they were going to Europe to try to rekindle their relationship, one last chance before they decided if they could stand living together any longer.

When she wrapped an arm around his shoulder, he pulled her in and wrapped his arms around her waist, squeezing her tight. It wasn’t the idea of camp he hated. It was the thought that when he came home, everything could be different. Mom and Dad could be in separate houses, his brother, sister, and him travelling back and forth between one parent and the other. Two houses. Two Christmases. Weeks split between parents.

“Matty,” she said again, brushing his messy hair back from his forehead, “I promise you’ll love it here. Taylor’s mom said Taylor had the best summer of her life at this place.”


Nodding his head, Matt gave his mom one more squeeze and quietly pulled away. Finally noticing the campers around them, Matt saw kids like him, some older and some younger, most wearing matching green CAMP WYACONDA shirts and all heading toward the dining hall. Some walked in groups already laughing like they’d known each other forever. Others looked nervous and awkward, dragging their feet behind them.

As if it would make a difference, he gave it one final shot.

“Mom, I’m three days late,” he said. “Everybody probably already knows everybody else. I don’t even know what cabin I’m supposed to be in.”


Danny chortled and grabbed the suitcase handle.

“Little bro, relax,” he said. “Mom already talked to one of the camp counsellors. They know you’re coming.”


Then his older brother grinned.

“And if anybody bugs you, just throw a baseball at their head ... like you do to me.
I feel like I need to redo and reformat my whole CS after seeing Arya’s update. Amazing … when will you give us lessons on formatting and Ai work?
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