@Orange JuiceOur characters have competitive powers if you think about it. Your character is super fast, while mine can teleport. Two super persons that have abilities that "fight" each other could be a good match.
@Orange Juice A character's villainousness is determined by his actions.
Think it something like this :
0% = biggest evil ever 100% = biggest hero ever
anything over 50% is considered a hero. 90% hero would mean that he was in the business of saving people for 5-10 years already and never killed anyone and never did bad things. For heroes is easy for baddies things are like this :
40%-49% : Bank robbers, thieves and anything that doesn't kill civilians etc is here 39%-20% : Punisher style hero (is a good guy but kills bad guys) 19%-1% : Criminal masterminds. Villains that would kill a whole city only to kill a hero 0% : Villains that not only already killed cities but if the aliens wouldn't have invaded they would've blown up Earth to prove they are the baddest of them all (none of our characters will be at 0% because they would've been too dangerous to be left alive)
@KabenSaal Hmm...nice character and nice writing (I LOVED the part on how she got captured). There is only a problem. Her powerset. While of course, it looks wonderful put and all that, there are a few problems : 1. There is basically no limitation on that power. She can use it for how much time she wants or it takes some time before she can gather the necessary energy to throw lightnings etc. 2. You have a powerset within a powerset (the super strength/reflexes thing). Remove it or idk...write a limitation on that thing. Something like...she cannot use other powers while having super strength (not even the reflexes thing) or maybe make it so that it takes a lot of time to gather enough power to use those sub-powers ( think it like an Ultimate move if you'd like). Those are only suggestions of course.
Anyway, overall your character is great. I'm waiting for an update but I'm excited to see her in action :)
@Infamous Empath Not much to look at for now. I'll wait for an update.
@FantasyKitten Looks nice. I suggest (just a suggestion, nothing else) to make her either older or make that 6 months period bigger, so that she could actually start her life a hero and have a nemesis and all that.
Also. You forgot about a small thing. How did she got caught by the aliens ?
@FantasyKitten The simple fact that she has to hold the injuries for some time before passing them, in my opinion, it's enough. Think it like this : She wants to pass over an injury like...a ruptured kidney. It would incapacitate her (or at least, she'll be in great pain), making passing the injury to someone else a great deal of trouble.
Faint at the sight of blood would be an overkill to be honest. A medic that cannot see blood ? It's something like...a gun without bullets. Useless.
Maybe...making her have to keep the injury for some time before passing the injury and have the time vary from wound to wound. A simple cut would take let's say, 5 minutes and a punctured organ or things similar would take 20 or 30 minutes.
Everyone. I've updated the rules and the CS too (forgot to add Age and gender to it, sorry). As soon as I have time, I'll start writing a history for the war (how we lost it, how aliens won it...how aliens look etc).
Name : Diana Age : 14 Gender : Female Allegiance : Villain
Power Set : Diana can manipulate technological constructs, computers, robots, hardware and other devices that can be termed as "technology". Manifested as a special form of electrical/telekinetic manipulation, a special form of "morphing" which allows physical interaction with machines, or even a psychic ability that allows mental interface with computer data. Background story : Diana was a child of a poor family in America. She was 12 when her powers manifested. She was in front of an ATM machine with her mom and while she didn't understood it back then, her mother was being very angry at the ATM because the account read "0$". Diana didn't like that her mother was sad and while touching the ATM, she wished that the credit account not be 0 and then it was not. 5000$ appeared "magically" in her mother's account. Diana was intelligent enough to understand what happened and not tell anyone. Her mother assumed the bank made a mistake and didn't care how it happened. A year later, Diana's parents died in a car accident and she would've been sent to the orphanage if she wouldn't decide to use her powers. She used her powers to create a fake identity for herself, a set of "fake parents" and of course, a big fat credit account. When the virus hit, Diana was affected same like the others but she was lucky and survived. Soon the aliens came and the war started. Diana was knocked out by Behemoth that attacked the city when The Collective Man saved her. He put her into a special facility deep underground and after The Collective Man's injury and the loss of the war, Diana decided to stay there and become their "technological specialist".
Name : Damian Boone Alias : The Collective Man Age : 43 Gender : Male Allegiance : Hero
Ignore the smile and think it as a frown
Power Set : Replication : The ability to replicate oneself with the Demi-cellular Division variation : This form of replication results in the affected subject "splitting", much like a cell, into physical organic clones indefinitely depending on available resources. This form generally causes all clones to lack a autonomous intelligence, instead being a unit in a collective "hivemind", each clone being just one "cell" of a unified consciousness (usually that of the subject). This form benefits because if the "original" subject dies, a clone can take their place as the central point of the hivemind making the subject technically immortal as long as there is sufficient copies to take their place. If a clone is separated from the the hivemind then it can work with the autonomy and intelligence of an average human, acting as just a simple clone. This form of replications downsides dwell in the fact that the clones only possess the strength of the original and thus is only effective on a large scale (ex. army size), and the clones, being solid organic matter, cannot be made to just vanished, but can only be made to be reabsorbed.
Background story : Not much is known of Damian Boone before he became The Collective Man. His parents died when he was 2 in a car accident and then he went through a long list of orphanages. Then, Damian Boone disappears for 10 years until the age of 26 when he make a reappearance as The Collective Man. From there he began his career by killing (in self-defense) The Mastermind, a super villain with the power to mind control other humans with no apparent restriction of number. The Collective Man defeated him by making more than 600 clones of himself, eventually The Mastermind lost control of the clones. But that was only one of The Collective Man's achievements. Until the age of 40, he became the most known hero of all times. The leader of The Collective seemed to be the only one that could eliminate the aliens when they invaded but even him, as strong as he was couldn't do it. While in Daria, the aliens came in force and bombarded most of the city. He went outside of the city, in the face of an upcoming alien armada and fought them himself to give enough time for the city to evacuate. That is where, The Collective Man was "killed". He was an army by himself but he came back broken from that fight. A plasma ball hit The Collective Man in the lower back and paralyzed him from waist down. While he could've just "go" inside another clone, that specific clone with the broken back, was left unconscious in a swarm of bodies. The others simply died as he made a last stand against the aliens. He was found broken by scout a few days later, in perpetual pain and bitter.
Amenthis Coldwater
Name : Amenthis Coldwater Alias : Portal Age : 25 Gender : Female Allegiance : Hero
Power Set : Teleportation - Amenthis can teleport at a distance of 10 meters, anything more and it will cause headaches and eventually death. She can teleport objects that she doesn't touch as long as she can see them and are withing a 3 meter radius around her.
Background story (where was your character born ? How did he become a hero/villain ? How was he caught ?) : Amenthis was born on the streets of New York (Harlem). Her mother was a hooker and thus' Amenthis never knew her real father. Since she was born Amenthis was raised by whores,pickpockets and other criminals that walked the streets.
At the age of 14, she saw her mother getting stabbed by a customer that didn't want to pay, the worse part was that the police didn't do anything. The guy that killed Amenthis's mother denied everything and was a upstanding citizen, so Amenthis was no believed and the criminal escaped justice.
That was the moment when Amenthis decided to matters in her own hands. She learned how to fight by training at a dojo (using whatever cash she could find) and soon started to beat up thugs inspired by other heroes. She didn't have any powers yet and soon she tangled with the wrong criminal. He was a member of a big gang that almost ruled Harlem and tracked Amenthis to her safe house with a few other gangsters. There they raped,beat her and when they were about to kill her...Amenthis's powers finally manifested. Unknowingly, Amenthis used her powers to teleport the criminals 10 meters in the air and one of them died when he hit the ground. The police eventually came and decided that Amenthis acted in self-defense but that didn't stop Amenthis to blame herself for the death of that man.
Years later, at the age of 24 when the virus hit, she was known as Portal. She almost mastered her powers when she got infected. Portal was one of the few lucky survivors of the virus but it left her weakened and was in a hospital bed when the aliens invaded. When humans lost the war, Amenthis knew right away that she couldn't the aliens alone and became like the wind. Never in one place, always scavenging and never in one place more than a day.
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